Long Ventilation Poems

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Premium Member Feel the Past

An eyesore in the community as progress takes its toll.
Windows broken, rust on the old metal frames
Vacant, dust filled, old broken file cabinet in the corner
Taking a walk through it, I could feel the past
Wondered how many lives this old building touched
A way of life for so many 
Security in a weekly paycheck
A faded time card on the floor where the office was
Dust covered wooden desk
A monument to the industrial age
A table with the boards curved from age
Where people ate lunch, talked, laughed, cried
Discussions about the kids, sports, politics, shop talk
Feel the past? Yes, days gone by, good days
Boards rotted on the loading dock, a rusted hand truck
No ventilation, no complaints, an honest days work
Clipboard hanging on the wooden beam
Can’t you feel it? 
Shuffling into the parking lot, lunch cans in hand
See you tomorrow
Kids waiting for Dad to come home, supper on.
Just another day.
Form: Narrative


The Tunnel Vision

You can keep swinging in your smile
as your eyes see through the cylinder only
where the flowers radiate the scent
where the leaves wait for the rustle
of the fondling wind
where stars wait for the music
of the magical light peaks
where the blue sky waits 
for the golden kite
in the cloud towers
Where the staircase raises the ears 
for the sound of the footsteps
Where the mahogany branch
craves for the feet of the pair of the larks

The cylinder refuses to take
the wide angle lens
adding to the view
the greedy rats 
the spilling vats
the leopard like hungry cats
the pus and pain of the flats
that our apartment is proud of
housing the autocrats
None in your tunnel
You don't battle
Against the stale apples
the de facto brothels
in the apartment in isolation
with no ventilation

You are of course better off
than those who have
the same tunnel before the eyes
Only the field of view with no dew
For them in the queue
The rapists and rape victims
The murdered and the murderer
The cheats and frauds
The figures flawed
Nothing good and well
The earth a hell

You are better off
With your cut-off
eliminating the minuses
Including only the pluses
where the thorns
aid and abet the blossoming of the rose

We like to keep disjointed
And highlight the negative knives only
Turning blind to the beehives
And the humming bee
bridging you and me

You do have the ear
corresponding with the tunnel vision
to hear and respond
and build the blueberry bond
between the flute and the music
The circles concentric
of the lyrics of life
and the drumsticks 
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April 28, 2018
Tunnel Vision - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Kai Michael Neumann

Togetherness

Who will win? 
Who versus who is it? 
To whomsoever it may concern, 
To whatsoever it may deal with, 
It remains an everlasting mysterious contest, 
Where defeat is a gift, 
And win is a misery, 
Conflicting thoughts prevail throughout, 
A game of egomaniacs, 
Play starts nearing no end, 
Clash of egoes burn humanity, 
All suffocate with in, 
Closed door where "I" is the supreme, 
Lacks ventilation which makes it a misery, 
Wants and desire take the driving seat, 
Hardly it finds any exception, 
It has become I, Me and Myself, 
Can't we surrender these? 
Inclusiveness is the law, 
Integration comes as a luckdraw, 
Togetherness is everything, 
Divisiveness is the worst thing, 
The greatest battle is fought inside us, 
Not for what is right but who is right? 
Is it not a real blunder? 
Is it safe to invite such thunder? 
The Nature has a purpose to achieve, 
We are its great archives, 
Lets hope and act accordingly, 
Where all can live peacefully.

Repeated Rebellion

Repeated Rebellion



Shielded ventilation silently choke within
Vision fading blackouts around and around again

Captivity corrupted as greed fills the plate
The burning acidic desire for everything to hate

Vivid recollections splash across the head
Proud of the torture in a painful death bed

Fearlessly without remorse emotions are so weak
Truth is in all the lies if the answer is what you seek

Destined for damnation a one way ticket to Hell
History repeats in cycles as all of the world rebels




bmdavey@2002/revised 10/28/17
Form: Couplet

Premium Member Vertical Binds

probing rays of light
spill through
my window pain

my mind wanders
between shadow and fray

I exhale a faint whisper
into the stagnant
life hovering around me

energy awakens and begins 
a dizzy stumbling dance

the sun searches for my presence
in this otherwise dim and lonely space 

a hot touch finds my face

I squint as if staring 
at the abusive hand
of a dead lover

I recoil in a harsh memory laid to rest

haunted specters
edge through unfulfilled spaces

I lie stoic listening for time to move
I step up on a stair
spiraling down to a
door of self-doubt
that has rotted with age

the hinges have rusted,
and a drunken handle is 
dangling

a window of self-blame 
fogged by anxious ventilation 
curdles inside its frame

it slams wide-shut
when confronted
with any shudder of pain

a bucket of trauma spills over revealing memories 
unsettling and stark

but suddenly, a cosmic rain of tears 
pours down from above

it washes the fear, branded to my heart
I am showered in healing and unconditional love

memories may surface in soft places, 
but I won't be bound,
by the fear or inadequacy
that tore me down

I will never allow my
self-worth to be invaded,
nor my soul, to ever again be degraded


Cpr

CPR

Not again call the code
Again in life saving mode
Grab the patient from the dark abode
This is a burden and heavy load

My heart is hard and callous
Working for years in the medicine palace
No criticizing you’ve your own malice
You’re not ready to drink from my chalice

Get on the chest, push hard and fast
How much longer will this last
Push the epi again they’ve not passed
Someone do compressions I’m gassed

You feel a pulse? NO! begin CPR
Eyelids open, pupils dilated, bizarre!
Cracked ribs, circulate the drugs intravascular
Hang another liter to the 18g catheter

This isn’t good the lips are blue
Running the code we aren’t through
Good bag mask ventilation through the tube
The bowel evacuates diarrhea, pew.

Still no pulse felt at all
Continue CPR in for a long haul
Did we update family give them a call
They’re in for a huge curve ball

We got a rhythm that is shockable
Charging 360J, stand clear, loud and audible
Hope this works anything is possible
Feel a pulse? YES! Phenomenal

Post-resuscitative effort in full effect
Titrate the Dopa and Levo for affect
Secure the ETT make it perfect
Debrief the H’s and T’s lets inspect

Order chest x-ray and head CT
Get an ABG, H&H and blood chemistry
Start hypothermia and begin the freeze
Lets clean up the patient provide dignity


Another patient kept out of the grave
The team members supported and gave
Staving off death and being brave
That’s what we do, for the patients we save

By:beardedjarhead
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member The Blews

head heavy
in hands
squeezing pounding temples

trapped in a trance
seated in this place
of emptiness and despair

the place that has welcomed
all of my fears and fractures

my heart pounds erratically
my eyes swollen and shot

a hypnotic gaze
into the somber gray
stone tile floor

that I’m sure
is hiding the demons
I have chosen to ignore

the ventilation fan
is loud and deafening
please stop, please stop
for God’s sake!

the churning acid
arouses anxiety in my angry pit

my blurry awakening shameful face
is exposed and shunned

a fading illusion 
of my demand
that I’ve had enough

I’m finally done

what does this vicious cycle
have in store

just like yesterdays
just like tomorrows

“bite the hair”
the temptation to escape
always near

addiction is a seductive liar
that manipulates and deceives

not willing to seek restraint
until every sense of self-worth
is destroyed and torched in fire

my mind twists painfully
in a chaotic frenzy

memories that won’t decompose
a persistent clamor

reliving the bowels
of a drained and disappointed past

the blews persist, 
unyielding in their grip

a lifetime,

of dark and ugly people

of dark and ugly decisions

mind drifts,

to even darker uglier thoughts

Africa, My Story

They packed us in ships and boats.
Sardines have more space in their cans as compared to us,
Low ventilation, no water, little food,
Out of our land of abundance, land of riches, land of gold, 
We sailed off to the land unknown,
‘Door of No Return’, that was the last door I saw in my homeland.
With shackles on our necks, ankles and wrists, we were led sheepishly to the ship,  
When we complained, they lashed us, when we rebelled, they killed us, 
And the weak amongst us; they were maltreated.
My sister was force raped yesterday; it’s my fiancée’s turn today, 
We were supposed to get married last Sunday,
“I’ve been shot in one knee”, an Old Norse slang,
I’m married; I was going to tell my friends, 
But the sun sure didn’t smile on me on Sunday,
Now in a new land, new soil, we’re auctioned like some merchandise,
I thought they only wanted our gold, or was it not enough; the additional cocoa,
Now we work on their plantations, from dawn until dusk,
We’re forced to speak the Whiteman’s language,
We’re forced to eat their food and dress like them,
 And the very thing that make us Africans; our pride, It’s been taken from us,
So I wonder the kind of future that lies ahead for our unborn generations,
I wonder if our rich values, our norms, our traditions, 
I wonder if they would be passed down to them,
Africa, my story.

Premium Member - Sound For Deaf Ears -

My ears are deaf
I hate gossip
The emotions of everyday life
without words
Impressions through music
Create depth and more mindfulness

~ The wind in the willow trees has settled down ~

My ears are deaf
I hate gossip
Listening to the bluebells,
when the whole body screams for rest
An everlasting stream of information
Stress, increased pulse, and muscle tension

~ Small falling feather, the setting is visually beautiful ~

My ears are deaf
I hate gossip
Bell sheep and the taste of mountains
Without road traffic noise and ventilation systems
Give me the truth, but protect my ears
40 decibels is a harmful dose

~ The fox is ready for hunting without breaking a twig ~

My ears are deaf
I hate gossip
Your body language is a sign of lying
The crystal glass is crushed in stereo
The rattlesnake finely polished rattle
High sky with pure white clouds
Pull the handbrake

~ Swans that majestically float on the water ~
 






01/09/2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
Copyright © All Rights Reserved


Silence Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Silent One
1st place in the contest

Premium Member The 'Last' Train

The last train to Auschwitz ...
    Birkenau ... October 28, 1944
       to the gate of hell and most brutal
     and the largest death camp
  of extermination (1.1 million dead)

      ~  the last train carried 2,038 people locked
in fully enclosed and windowless cattle cars
       with no food or water and ventilation ... ~

       many, many died along the way
    on this last journey of horrific days
they were people like you and me condemned
and made to pay for the train trip to
       their own death ...

 ~ 1,589 people were immediately gassed
       on arrival and their bodies disposed of quickly ...
people like you and me with little hope ~ 

the survivors said the camp smelled
         like the burning of human flesh
          that people were herded like animals
           they had been told they were going ...
         to labour camps ... to work 
       the Holocaust train was a train of death
that transported people like you and me ...

         ~ Auschwitz today is an emblem of evil and
a site of remembrance and a fathomless cemetery
     to honor the ashes and bones of victims .... ~

... of the Nazi Final Solution 

_____________________
April 14, 2021


Poetry/Free Verse/The "Last" Train
Copyright Protected, ID 04-1347-080-14
All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France

Written for the Premier contest, Last Train to Auschwitz
sponsor, Kai Michael Neumann, Judged 05/05/2021

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