The Tunnel Vision

You can keep swinging in your smile
as your eyes see through the cylinder only
where the flowers radiate the scent
where the leaves wait for the rustle
of the fondling wind
where stars wait for the music
of the magical light peaks
where the blue sky waits 
for the golden kite
in the cloud towers
Where the staircase raises the ears 
for the sound of the footsteps
Where the mahogany branch
craves for the feet of the pair of the larks

The cylinder refuses to take
the wide angle lens
adding to the view
the greedy rats 
the spilling vats
the leopard like hungry cats
the pus and pain of the flats
that our apartment is proud of
housing the autocrats
None in your tunnel
You don't battle
Against the stale apples
the de facto brothels
in the apartment in isolation
with no ventilation

You are of course better off
than those who have
the same tunnel before the eyes
Only the field of view with no dew
For them in the queue
The rapists and rape victims
The murdered and the murderer
The cheats and frauds
The figures flawed
Nothing good and well
The earth a hell

You are better off
With your cut-off
eliminating the minuses
Including only the pluses
where the thorns
aid and abet the blossoming of the rose

We like to keep disjointed
And highlight the negative knives only
Turning blind to the beehives
And the humming bee
bridging you and me

You do have the ear
corresponding with the tunnel vision
to hear and respond
and build the blueberry bond
between the flute and the music
The circles concentric
of the lyrics of life
and the drumsticks 
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April 28, 2018
Tunnel Vision - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Kai Michael Neumann

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 4/28/2018 4:55:00 PM
Nicely done, Probir, luck in the contest. You have created a vision of almost every scene... hugs dear friend
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/28/2018 9:27:00 PM
Thank you, Eve ...
Date: 4/28/2018 7:10:00 AM
Excellent tunnel vision poem. Will do good in contest.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/28/2018 12:24:00 PM
Thank you, Susan ...
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