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What the Owl Sees

A bad winter
the worst since the last one.
The camp had lost its children and horses
now the owl sees her last step.

Separated, not expelled in disgrace,
but her tribe disenthralled,
deprived of care
by deaths unremitting cull.

She, the last to stumble away
from the brow-beaten village
knowing there were no more paths
for her in this bleak land.

Only the moon was not cruel,
its wane glow
lit her up like its own shadow
in the yowling dark.

Now only the owl does not hunt her.
She knows that if she ever saw herself,
so weary and close to the bone,
she would think of herself as prey,

She would let fly one last arrow
for a piercing end, and
let the owl see what it may.


Premium Member Courage On Empty

Not one invitation
No need to ask for an explanation
One more night of chagrin
Heart mimics violin
Should by now have thick skin
But no, still stung by intimidation

It’s all some harsh mistake
Deeply maims but only while I’m awake
No one to understand
Bullying wonderland
While I slide in quicksand
And dread so inevitable daybreak

I gladly welcome rain
That’s when bitter tears I need not retain
I, for courage, inhale
Wish time would just derail
Youth no such fairy tale
Unremitting bouts shed sadness and pain

Assailants rude and crude
What I would give for just an interlude
I’d love a hideaway
Dare dream a better way
Some day without foul play
Hang on, truly believe with certitude



AP:  2nd place 2020, 3rd place 2020

Submitted for contest RHYME ME A POEM sponsored by BROKEN WINGS - January 2, 2018  -  RANKED 3RD
Form: Rhyme

The Settlement of the Four Ligures

The stones slipped through the great fingertips of God
Each ligure staked its existence on the four corners of the universe
The quadrivial region began to spin and pull into a sphere
And pathways revealed their footholds 

The fourth ligure bravely landed in the midst of history
So that one day the future settlement of the second 
Would be moved by the last—by the past
Suffering much it stayed
Manifesting in incandescent words
Thrusting evanescence upon the weak
Selfless, it's sorrow would move the merriest
Would move the unmovable

The third lies in the profound valley of mystical guardians
Star-recruited, they are the very light above the canvas of gray
They embrace the stone—are inspired by the stone  
The very reflection of their creator was evident
Upon their unremitting glimmers
Unafraid to stare the others down
Motivated and construed by the glower of death
Eyes move fixedly beyond the simple vast

The second ligure rested upon the shoulders of invisible martyrs 
The hopeful power it planted on the sufferers was unbelievable
For spectators used their disbelief to cover their ever-placed envy
They never were part of the battle—they merely watched
Always seeing truth
But they never quite absorbed
Like a rock hitting the water
The inevitable fate was to fly and sink

The first of the ligures settled in the very reservoir of Satan himself
Even the very heart of the devil is marked
Though rebellion embarked  
The cold stone landed upon his naked bosom
He despaired not to the pericopal truth the gods had bestowed upon him
He merely despised it
But wished not to lose it
For such a stone to fall upon that dark corner—he felt pride for the gracious wound

In truth, there are twelve ligures of stone 
And four were dispersed, dropped into the universe
The last eight the great Eternal wears upon his breastplate 
And only He can re-move these ligures

-July 20, 2013-
-For Shadow Himilton's Any Subject Contest-
-Thanks for the inspiration-
Form: Epic

WHEN RELIGION BECOMES YOUR OPIUM

WHEN RELIGION BECOMES 
YOUR OPIUM 

When religion becomes your 
opium you slip into icy pre-dawn 
to mosque then lie in fever flu 
at dusk as bilal calls again
for you to stumble towards 
beckoning forefinger guilt
chalices cringing crying

You chant morning to night
wrapped in dirty linen blights 
mantras channelled centuries 
ago resin rosary threadbare
kitabs torn, curtains undrawn
biscuits crumbled alongside 
salted slippers prayer coats 
ghostly watch blustery blinkers

Your heart remains judgement 
tight with rusty mental railway 
lines unbuckled only to fight
canaries flown from stilted 
cages wire worn walls
cracking ceilings catalysing 

You speak in unremitting 
riddles try not to scream 
at dismal doors knitted beard 
knotted knives of seamen 
gambles enticing lovers of 
yesteryear who remain
embedded in elbow joints 
as you catch rain in 
buckets of shame

You refuse to let in visions 
of New Earth as this opium 
mix targets rude roaring fire
planets in unrelenting fear 
colour remains brown black
tinges of diseased blood 
slowly trickle teary 
tattered trousers torn

This drug is an only taste
angels fly past in haste
fezzes stuck on mothy mat  
knows no soapy skyline sighs 
underpinned by judgement 
made in desert ritual fears
God knows no such forlorn
framed jibbas or jibe jihads 

Opium can open too
tunnels into tortoiseshell 
havens of heather or healing 
hearths when heart is given
a hexagon hello helix
headwaters can heady rush
or opium can merely remain
the sniffing powder in 
your box


©GhairoDanielsPoetry&
Song2016

Heart And Mind

They say that love is blind,

But my love for you isn't:

My heart is with my mind,

My soul is with my reason.


I know why I love you,

And it's completely real:

And unified and true:

I think it, and I feel it:


I love you for your heart,

Your sweetness and compassion,

I love you since you're smart

And filled with joy and passion,


I love you for your warmth

And excellence and wisdom;

For lights that through you course

In every time and season -


For beauty that you are

Both outside and inside,

Because you are a star

In nature and in mindset -


I love you for your will

To help, and for your honor:

For where you've gone and been

And came out all the stronger:


I love you for your grace

And for your dedication

To good deeds; your soft face

And glorious inspiration -


For your resplendent gifts

And what you're doing with them -

And all you are - it is

Completely true to reason:


I love you for your light

And unremitting kindness

All times of day and night -

No, my love is not mindless


I love you for I see

The wonder that you're truly

And from it comes to be

The passion reasoned fully:


My heart and mind are clear

And doubt they both cast out

And there is nothing here

That's blind or not thought out:


I love you with my mind

And heart and strength and spirit

No, my love is not blind -

It's unified: So feel it.


since you left

at first it was unbearable i must admit
i wanted to stay home, i told my mom i felt sick
i understand now why they say time heals
it does
kinda funny though, its healing what never was
the first few weeks i’d wake up and try to get out of bed
awakened from a slumber that was only induced to silence the sirens in my head
carefully watching my steps to avoid the shards of glass scattered across the floor
leftover pieces of my heart that you forgot to pick up, the heart you said was yours
our paintings, you left those too
embarrassingly enough, for my birthday all i wanted was a text from you
eventually things got easier though, or maybe i just got distracted by the bells and whistles of life’s orchestration
you’ve given me no closure yet endless confirmation
unremitting sobs and no one to talk to
everyone was sick of hearing of my suffering, it was awful
then the hurt started to leave, and arose the confusion
how could you pretend? how wasn’t it real? was it all an illusion?
was i just another girl to you? how could my everything be nothing to you?
silly little questions that i realized i’ll never find answers to 
because i evidently don’t know your heart, i don’t even think you do
the confusion was cut short along with my livelihood when i was met with you know what
funny, it’s actually only you who knows what
do you know what?
don’t you care?
it doesn’t matter if you do anyways, evidently you lied when you said with you i could always share
now, i still see your face when i walk around my house
it scared me when i tried to remember the sound of your voice and it was faint as a mouse
yesterday i passed the photobooth we took those cute pictures in
the ones i had hanging on my wall
i took them down, but i still look at them everytime i have no one to call
i look and remember when i had you and for that i am grateful enough
i won’t lie and say i’m completely over it, because anyone could call my bluff
i am becoming empty now, i actually understand you more
things hurt less and i’m no longer frazzled when people walk out the door
i’m starting to get back to okay again, but its an ephemeral feeling
shortlived by the memories and remembrance
its mostly emptiness though
mostly nothing
just like you
i guess nothings been the same
not since you left
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member In a Dream Landscape

miasma of despair
       motionless
         matter-of-fact
in brooding silence
                        loneliness
a sense of isolation
            so near
            so intolerable
                   unremitting
a contant pressure
                to conform
this unique challenge
to unblock
          the creative urge
          to free the muse
                              within
trapped frozen inert
                        run dry
lacking in confidence
impatient
      awaiting inspiration
a trickle of anything
to hear    to imagine
                     visualise
an unspoken intimacy
an eye perspective
a space to dream
the intimate unspoken
a flower of creativity
a moving image dedicated
                            to life
unique in a style
from this diary of existence
in this
          dream
              landscape
face aglow
        raised to the sky
warmed through
         recollecting thoughts
all senses open
            an accustomed feeling
            lingering awhile
            unobtrusively
            adjectives arise
            in metaphor moments
illuming the process
                  organically
this concept
         delivered as
          a poem
              on this
                         page
Form: Verse

Premium Member Wandering Soul

I wandered lonely as a cloud "
                    ~William Wordsworth ~


Wandering lonely I am a lost soul
Drifting never settled down
Begin to think was never whole
Never complete so lost not found
Sadly was blind to simple fact
My thinking was not quite intact.

Aimless years wasting precious time
Time not well spent I do admit
Frittered away years 'twas a crime
Now I am feeling quite bereft
Was all my fault I do confess
is it too late to readdress?

Not anchored my spirit drifting
Around the yew trees, I linger
Amorphous thoughts unremitting
Yet, a sliver of hope lingers
As I humbly wait for redemption
Universe makes no exception.


Pixabay image by: Mazoka
Form: Lyric

Tank with Goldfish

Sometimes we see a glint of gold or red
emitted sudden as a warning through
the greening water of the old square tank outside,
an evanescent wink from just beneath
the awning of the lolling lily pad.

Within this viridescent bulk of water pushing
against the stark and square formality of fibreglass,
the teasing crimson twinkle
frees our eyes from what had become
the prison of their gaze in which they were held
unblinking by the flat rigidity
of unremitting quadrilateral form.

Once more a gleam of carmine charms our eyes
into the still, green patina of this exotic liquor –
another world, so far removed
from our dull logic of normality.

Be It Only By Dreams

With the onset of advancing age, so I find,        
A man grows weary of all mundane talk;             
Occupies his every spare, idle thought                 
With that of the slow, reflective kind.            
Regretful of many a squandered hour,               
Turning his back on the squabbling nations,        
Their woeful, self-serving deliberations,          
Dreams wistfully of his own starlit tower.         


Should he hopefully find that blessed stair,       
Wound insides of the ancient, dim lit wall,        
Where tread from unseen feet sometimes fall,       
He could but elevate himself above his cares;      
There, throwing his soul upon the night,           
Lift his gaze upon a tumultuous crowding!           
His thinning pate adorned with a crowning           
From a far-flung, pale, distant light.             


And if he was to fix his mind upon that point;
To that moment forcefully bring to bear,     
With every ounce of fibre when stood there,        
An unremitting will to somehow exploit,            
That, which, the mystics so jealously guarded...     
Then, perhaps, he might too ascend?              
For, in all reality, at the very end,              
All is thrown off...the very body discarded.       


Therefore I will choose my own finality.            
I give my remaining days to old worn steps         
Enclosed in rock, a turret that silhouettes         
Against an endless sky; and if it should be        
That I find such hallowed battlements              
Give aging legs the strength to slowly climb,      
To praise the celestial and sublime,                
When reaching up where my God frequents.           


For though those stars seem out of reach,          
Unattainable by grand, omnipotent design,          
Nevertheless I am thusly to be inclined        
To offer up a prayer and unto him beseech:-        
"Immortal father who created mortal man,           
Ye who sits above all earthly thrones,             
Give unto me old tools and rubbled stones,       
And I shall endeavour to do what I can...         


To rebuild that abandoned, crumbled tower...
For, Lord, be it only by dreams men are 
Truly empowered"!
Form: Rhyme

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