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IN A DREAM landscape

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https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=nHfhkk9K37c

miasma of despair
       motionless
         matter-of-fact
in brooding silence
                        loneliness
a sense of isolation
            so near
            so intolerable
                   unremitting
a contant pressure
                to conform
this unique challenge
to unblock
          the creative urge
          to free the muse
                              within
trapped frozen inert
                        run dry
lacking in confidence
impatient
      awaiting inspiration
a trickle of anything
to hear    to imagine
                     visualise
an unspoken intimacy
an eye perspective
a space to dream
the intimate unspoken
a flower of creativity
a moving image dedicated
                            to life
unique in a style
from this diary of existence
in this
          dream
              landscape
face aglow
        raised to the sky
warmed through
         recollecting thoughts
all senses open
            an accustomed feeling
            lingering awhile
            unobtrusively
            adjectives arise
            in metaphor moments
illuming the process
                  organically
this concept
         delivered as
          a poem
              on this
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Date: 10/3/2019 8:22:00 AM
I love this. I can relate to this in the creative writing process :)
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Brian Strand
Date: 10/3/2019 8:49:00 AM
Thats great Heidi,a creative commonality of experience we share with our peers.
Date: 10/3/2019 7:02:00 AM
Not really my cup of tea I'm afraid, I found the layout distracting and the disjointed nature of the individual thoughts broke any flow, but i'm somewhat of a novice :)
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