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miasma of despair motionless matter-of-fact in brooding silence loneliness a sense of isolation so near so intolerable unremitting a contant pressure to conform this unique challenge to unblock the creative urge to free the muse within trapped frozen inert run dry lacking in confidence impatient awaiting inspiration a trickle of anything to hear to imagine visualise an unspoken intimacy an eye perspective a space to dream the intimate unspoken a flower of creativity a moving image dedicated to life unique in a style from this diary of existence in this dream landscape face aglow raised to the sky warmed through recollecting thoughts all senses open an accustomed feeling lingering awhile unobtrusively adjectives arise in metaphor moments illuming the process organically this concept delivered as a poem on this page

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Date: 10/3/2019 8:22:00 AM
I love this. I can relate to this in the creative writing process :)
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Brian Strand
Date: 10/3/2019 8:49:00 AM
Thats great Heidi,a creative commonality of experience we share with our peers.
Date: 10/3/2019 7:02:00 AM
Not really my cup of tea I'm afraid, I found the layout distracting and the disjointed nature of the individual thoughts broke any flow, but i'm somewhat of a novice :)
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