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Premium Member Dare I Begin Purging

My porch must be miserable
Full of empty boxes 
Thanks to Amazon’s daily deliveries

I had not noticed until today
But it is unbelievably noticeable
I wish the delivery men would take the empties away

My front door looks shabby
Needs a fresh paint job
But it is a mural and not easy to repaint

My car is not empty
There are three coats in the back seat
When did I become such a slob?

I would open the trunk
But I could not stand it
And the garage is already brimming with stuff

Nest week is spring break
Dare I begin purging?
I pick up a Styrofoam plate on my way to the car

And I am not yet in my car
So all of this is the three minutes
It took me to get ready for work!

Paying attention is unique
Has awaken me to my faults
I sit down behind the steering wheel, pondering my steps


Premium Member - Can'T Escape -

No thoughts, no consciousness
Echo the sound of strangled cry

Can't escape
Take my hand

The dark dungeons without the breath of life
Deeper than you can imagine

Can't escape
Take my hand

Weak, so unbelievably weak
The bitter cold darkness 

Can't escape
Take my hand

The death is so overwhelming
The door without nameplate conquers the fear

Can't escape
Take my hand

The sun goes down, deep unconsciousness
The reality is that you are kapein on your own boat

Can't escape
Take my hand














04.05.2018
Sun :) A-L Andresen :(
Copyright © All Rights Reserved
(unrhymed couplets)


 - My father-in-law died today
 - Bless his soul - Rest in peace 
 - You are deeply missed "Bessen"
Form: Couplet

I Once Knew a Goddess

Written By:  D. Collins 5/23/20


I once knew a Goddess, who gave me super human strength.
I've not had that kind of power in me ever since.
If I could reclaim that, which made me so strong.
I would seek repentance for all that I've done wrong.


I once knew a Goddess. who was beautiful, black, and pure.
The answer to all illness, even the broken hearted cure.
A fix for imperfections, and all my major flaws.
The Goddess I once knew, is what I'm telling ya'll.


I once knew a Goddess, who was so clean and pristine.
Not a blemish on her body, that had a problem with me.
She was Ill-Na-Na, plus ten times that.
I once knew a Goddess, unbelievably P-H-A-T.


I once knew a Goddess for over seventeen years.
One who gave me the power, to strike down all my fears.
Ever since then, I have not been the same man.
And, to have that again, I will do everything I can.


I once knew a Goddess who dawned a golden crown.
Reached out and picked people up, when they had fallen down.
That was the best thing I had ever experienced.
She made me a man, and gave me true deliverance.


Not many people can say, that I am so fortunate.
However, it was so enlightening that I will never forget.
I once knew a Goddess, that never brought dismay.
She gave me courage to stand tall, even to this day.

Premium Member Your Dream Mansion

This is a dream coming true
going across continent to the sun
waking up every day to all this
can't wait to get out there and done

So need to get flight booked
loads to do as well as pack case
hands all sweating tummy churning
but this is the life real ace

Flights held up for hour late
then arrive to hear taxi strike
phone all around for a lift
all I'm told get on your bike

So eventually arrives at the address
but I'm transfixed seeing nothing in sight
just a piece of land no villa there
looked at address my eyes were night

Where is it now? it was lost
note of address was not here
was I tricked? was this big con?
that night I shed many a tear

So the dream had been dashed
no dream villa was for me
eventually came home feeling so down
but learn well don't buy till you see


(a story of the imagination, my character is moving to a foreign country and begins to search real estate listings online for a place to live.  His original plan is to rent an apartment, but he notices an ad for an old villa that has gone up for sale.  It's huge and beautiful and, unbelievably, it's in your character's price range.  It seems too good to be true.  "I'm sure it IS too good to be true," says my character's sister, who warns your character of the foolishness of buying property, sight-unseen, over the Internet.  But your character is already mentally decorating the villa...)
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member - Blue Ocean -

So unbelievably alive

                                    A man puts out his fishing net

                              Without even a slight breeze or breath

                              while he waits  … on the wriggling fish

                               Fluctuations in the sound of seagulls

                                    A universe for the silent man

                                     listening, longing and living

                              Exquisitely flight in all the right places

                                          how could they knows

                                   no harm from the sharp edges

                                   They will hunt again tomorrow

                                          In a sky blue horizon 

                              and a crystal clear hymn from the ocean
 
                                All develop over time, with humility

                            Like the waves consume along the coast









                                               19/02/2021
                                       Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
                                 Copyright © All Rights Reserved


Premium Member One Brick At a Time

One Brick At A Time

The boy shimmied like a determined squirrel 
upward stretching reaching 
for the ascending bricks of the chimney flue.

one brick at a time
one foot snugly ensconced 
in its leveraged place
and then another toe-hold there
as he sat atop the roof 
of the old rumpus room 
out back amidst the ivy vines 
and the palm frond towers
with a Tareyton Cigarette ad 
affixed to the glass door
he saw his special friends again
gliding in the distant wind unseen
except by him, the boy who stood 
watching the break-in up there
a square door the size of a house 
opened masterfully and unbelievably
with fire and burgeoning smoke
and then it closed again 
with a shifting cloud
concealing the In and Out Door 
for all human souls ever created
from here to there, from now to then  
they took him for a speck of human time
erasing his memory of all unknown encounters
until a later time
now

Premium Member Winter Magic

How cold it was that one December day.
We’d put on boots and walked into the wood,
but in new-fallen snow, we lost our way.
As dusk began to creep, we understood
our peril, and our hearts were filled with dread!
Then something strange! Above a bank of snow
appeared a cardinal, bright cherry red!
As if the bird could tell us where to go,
we followed it, and to our great surprise,
we found a bench. Quite unbelievably,
on top of it we saw before our eyes
two mugs beside a red pot of hot tea.
Warmed by the drink, we kept hope in our sight.
The red bird led us home by fall of night!

Dec. 27, 2016
Form: Sonnet

To the Officers of Port Saint Lucie

It is deceptively easy,
yet unbelievably hard—
to protect and serve,
while carrying the weight of every call,
every scene, every shadowed moment.

High expectations weigh heavy,
with minimal support to lean on.
Yet you answer love for neighbors
with an unbelievable calling.

Law enforcers,
unbelievable human beings—
standing between us and the dark side
of our shared humanity,
keeping us safe night after night.

Sympathetic. Empathetic.
Steadfast through the storm.

Port St. Lucie Police Department,
you are a quiet blessing
to our community's happiness,
a shield we too often take for granted.

Thank you—for the unseen burdens you bear,
and for the peace you help us keep.

Beyond Belief

This here what I feel for you
is beyond belief from what I see
my eyes, my heart, my spirit
doesn't decieve me unbelievably 
we didn't see this @ first
but our souls always thirst after
each other, more than friends
much more than lovers, there's no
woman how could take your place
not in dis lifetime I'll never find another like you, in due 
time we'll be side by
side its been a long time coming 
but our hearts colliding was a script
pre written I made my final decision
Im giving my all to you with no doubt 
you're doing the same, I went from the freeway to 
changing lanes, patience will hold me over so with the 
New Edition to bout our lives Its only right to ask can you 
stand the rain
my emotions are running outta control 
I can't wait to begold my queen for who and what she is, 
we got that three strand rope and I'm proud to say I have 
finally found my rib...
© Corey Ross  Create an image from this poem.
Form: ABC

Premium Member A Lifetime of Crying

Soulmates are conjoined in both heart and soul,
sharing the good times and the bad.
And when cancer strikes:
it's unbelievably devastating.
Tethered to a relationship built on love:
whatever touches one is felt by the other,
and shared hopes and fears are brought to light.
A diagnosis of cancer
leaves one feeling helpless:
unable to alleviate your partner’s suffering.
A lifetime of memories is the catalyst
that allows sad thoughts
to be spun into a comforting feeling:
recalling all the intimate times, 
happily shared as soulmates and lovers.
But the hurt is real;
fueling feelings of anxiety and worry.
And when pain is all one has to look forward to,
death becomes preferable to the continued suffering:
both for the one dying,
and the one doomed to a lifetime of crying.

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