One Brick At a Time

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From the anthology, Complaining to the Clock, a work in progress.

One Brick At A Time

The boy shimmied like a determined squirrel 
upward stretching reaching 
for the ascending bricks of the chimney flue.

one brick at a time
one foot snugly ensconced 
in its leveraged place
and then another toe-hold there
as he sat atop the roof 
of the old rumpus room 
out back amidst the ivy vines 
and the palm frond towers
with a Tareyton Cigarette ad 
affixed to the glass door
he saw his special friends again
gliding in the distant wind unseen
except by him, the boy who stood 
watching the break-in up there
a square door the size of a house 
opened masterfully and unbelievably
with fire and burgeoning smoke
and then it closed again 
with a shifting cloud
concealing the In and Out Door 
for all human souls ever created
from here to there, from now to then  
they took him for a speck of human time
erasing his memory of all unknown encounters
until a later time
now

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 11/19/2019 2:14:00 AM
Hi Stark. fine work of art here. Thanks for sharing
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