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Where There Is a Will

Where there is a will, there is a way
And I remind myself that this is just the beginning
But being here is keeping my heart in chains
I want to fly away to the place where I know I'm wanted
To the arms that belong to more than just a person
My heart struggles to find the words to scream
It yells in vain because there is no one to hear it
The echoes of silence resound inside my head
As I comprehend that I could be somewhere else...
The knowing of the loss is unbearable
I wait in agony when there is nothing left to do
And I will him to come back for me
Hoping there is something in his heart that draws him
In my arms is where he should be
But there is a troubling and sorrowful doubt 
That placed itself in my brain
What if when he returns he won't want me?
What if he doesn't echo my love?
That is the question, dear friends
So I beg the one who is more than just human to come back
Be my lover and don't present yourself with an opportunity to leave
He says that love is just a word and he wants to say so much more
But if love is a word, what does he really want to say?
It drives me insane hoping that the word he searches for
Is the one I have waited my whole life to hear
But again the nagging doubt in the back of my mind
Whispers conspiracies and plants hopelessness in my heart
And I feel alone in a world where he doesn't exist
He says he will wait for me and I promised the same
But what about the saying
"Promises are made to be broken"?
If that is true, I cannot fathom what life will be like without him
But maybe that's what promises are really for
To gain trust in the one you depend upon
And know that what they say is true and not just another empty lie
Others cannot understand what we do
Being together is what keeps us from falling apart
But some are jealous and won't stand for the "abomination" that we are
But if love is really true, why should they care?
What is it about our business that makes them so interested?
What is it about our love that drives them to insanity to keep from happening?
There is no cure for true and unselfish love
There is no denying it for the world
And when they have the revolution that there is more than meets the eye,
They will leave and never return
Never again bothering us and we can love in peace
And that is the dream I strive for
And that is the dream that will soon be mine


Premium Member In a World Where I Do Not Exist

There are visions roving inside my head 
of a time and place where perhaps I once lived.
But how do I know of those worldly things
if I no longer exist?  I must question if I ever did.
I am off kilter, as if I'm an invisible entity, 
a salty speck of foam floating on a sapphire sea.

Should I feel dire despair, indifference, or jubilant joy
that I am not part of this place that's been laid to waste?
It's as if I'm surfing in shadows over what used to be
an amusement park, but the Ferris Wheel is broken,
and there's no spark of life anywhere to be found.
Only faded pamphlets lying on the ground, sun-bleached
remnants of the way life used to be, once upon a time.
I pity me for having been given this gloomy glimpse,
a vandalized view that no one could misconstrue.

I feel like Alice wandering through a frightening fantasy.
Desperately wanting to go back through the looking glass
and forget the devastation in which the world dwells.
If I ever had an inkling of what living in hell would be,
then in this chaotic clime, this dysfunctional dystopia,
I would seek to escape my existence and set myself free.

I feel the need for fresh air, but who would care
if I should have lived or died?  No one cried tears for me.
What future fate have I discovered with thoughts
hovering? Tragic thoughts that haunt me like a cold stare.
What ill winds have swept the world away?
Cursed be! 
How can anything exist is this sorrowful sepulcher?
I'd rather be a soulless specter without a home
then live among those in this lamenting land.
This is not Aldous Huxley's Brave New World.

It does no good to imagine a world without me.
Friendships made; children born; none of those would exist. 
I can only envision these things. These things that I've given wing. 
They roam inside my head, making me wonder if I had a beginning
or an end. I feel repercussions from having a discussion 
with myself over the conceptual conundrum of my existence.

Would I have been happy, would I have made others happy, 
or brought them grief like the thief who collects the dead?
It's a nightmare of reality, for I am sure it's not a daydream.
Greed played its Trump card and schemed to sit on the throne
in a kingdom I could never contentedly condone. 
I've no desire to dally here a moment longer, and
since I don't exist, I am certain I will not be missed.
© Lin Lane  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member If I Could Have My Own Way

The world does be a mysterious place to live in
Already hampered with its yet to be unlocked secrets
It does cause us all to enjoy while, at the same time, having us basked in sin
If I could change some things about it, pray, life would be as sweet as a ballet

See, humans would need to become pure
No more shall there be wars to endure
Humans shall be tolerant of one another
Even if differences of all sorts, around us all, do hover

Religions would need to be more unifying
Indeed, Holy Books, of the way to Heaven do teach
But then, humans, of hatred and mockery for one another do be screeching
As if, of peace and tolerance, their religions do not preach

Earth has had enough of its fill of pollution
Machines and gadgets I would bring forward, 
Having the preservation of nature as their main mission
No more would trash and dirt fill the nooks and crooks of the world

Pollution does cause the death of life
Nature does become impure to our health
So much that Earth does feel like she is going on her way to her own death
Pray, a new world it shall be, one with air so fresh

If I could change more about the world, 
Why, I would make sure death and disease do be in-existent
Pray, death does be so bold, it does cause us all to be so sad
Disease and the loss of our loved ones do cause us all to fall to our own detriment

Why, of course, humans and animals would have eternity to live
But at the same time, they would need to be made of good feelings
No more evil, no more sin, no more harms
No more disturbed thoughts, no more wants of abuse

My world, if I could have my way, would be free from poverty
Each and everyone of us would have his own share of gold
So that content shall be his stomach and that of his family
Content shall also be his heart, indeed, content shall be his little world

Why, does the world be a place where we, fallen souls, come to grieve
Does it be a place where our souls are to be always ringing with sorrowful alarm
Why, I do claim not to have, at my disposal, the one magic finger
But I shall try my best, to make of my world, a place, one so better!

This rhyme does be my prayer
May the Heavens bestow upon me, their power
Pray, if I could have my way, the world shall be the solace of all of life
Indeed, such a vision does be in my heart, the strength of my own faith!

10 April 2016
Form: Rhyme

Ship of Doom

" Ship of Doom "

Ship of doom so sailed to sea ~
Dark her course... 'twas meant to be ~

Into seas this great ship sped ~
Her past... her history... of naught but dread ~
O'er those waves her bows did'st cleave ~
Her memories... but silken webs to weave ~

Thunder on her decks was heard ~
Yet sailors aboard spake no word ~
For ship such as she was doomed thus so~
Gone north into winds then fierce a'blow ~

Down her bows crept steadily then ~
None to know which verse thus then ~
For rime was abound on her decks those days ~
Yet aloft was fire seen from her stays ~

Off afar from crow's nest was hailed ~
As below in her belly that crew did bail ~
For her planks ridden with dark worm & rot ~
Such ship did'st sail from whence known not ~

Far corner o'globe she ran from ever ~
Home her port seen oft yet never ~
Equator her line of happenchance ~
Capricorn her thought yet not her stance ~

Now she sails a spars a'glisten ~
A'deck her men all a'listen ~
Now speaks thus such sorrowful ship ~
With voice akin to crackin' o'whip ~

Hail! Ye Lads.... heartily all ~
Sail we've had & such so a'ball ~
Now deep down Davy Jones' way ~
I'm thus bound this cold north day ~

My sprit I drive now into next wave ~
Darkness & silence I do now crave ~
Gone from me now pleazure o'sound aloft ~
For me hull is naught but now gone soft ~

I'll seek that bottom at sea's very depths ~
Were there I'll find my wager thus kept ~
With devil I’ve played throughout these years ~
Now I’ll so lay to rest all such fears ~

Sail with me now lads & lasses bold all ~
Into realms which di'dst us then enthrall ~
Gone only now our fine spark & fire ~
Quenched so by life's sodden quagmire ~

Off now go we & heads look a'forard ~
To see what 'twas behind & now not toward ~
Rocks... reefs... depth’s sandy shoals ~
These so now our woe begotten goals ~

So to break up these planks hath caused me to live ~
For as ship o'the main I was once known to give ~
Now all such gone with wild sea's winds ~
As now my time... mirrors death's sins ~

Down down down do I speed ~
In need o'sleep... dark do I need ~
Run now quickly from my decks so I say ~
Or with me in devil's depths ye shall play ~

Bouzouki in hand I now last am at rest ~
For with song always I have been best ~
Tsifteteli my dance so join me now so ~
For life is naught that which e'er we'll know ~

SeaWolf
©
Form: Rhyme

Before the Gates of Alahsar - Original Version - 5

5.

Utamol takes his bloody fill,
tasting life's wine, never still,
Dark Man in majestic motion,
hate-filled passion, his chief emotion.
War played in an ancient way,
a horror too all, who fight this day,
yet all who escape this misery,
shall ever call this carnage glory.

The battle, not lost, yet not won,
Dark Man and Tigress fighting on,
all mortals hard into the fray,
Turvehr fights on in majesty.
life so simple, shall it be gone?
will all this death, be worth a song?
the day that mortals did not surrender,
before the gates of Alahsar.

Now a change has come about,
the enemy halted, there comes a shout,
"Look out! our golden arrows come,"
the Goddess Athena.s fire begun.
A rain of golden death on the bloody plain,
ne'er see its like ever again,
two mighty hero's, Dark and Gold, 
fashioned from eternal warrior mold.

Athena races, golden chariot alive with light,
a wonder of great glory too mortal sight,
Athena and her minions, they come on the run,
with blood-letting in mind, they gladly come.
Charging in upon the left, Arlaghs fall before the wheel.
Sword of truth, Oh, splendid, shining steel,
in the hands of the sun's divinity,
the Goddess Athena gains her glory this day.

Beasts a-plenty, break and run,
Utamol, now having fun,
gains great glory, Heaven knows,
blade of vengeance, blood-like rose.
Dark Man holding light the blade,
dead and dying before them laid,
never finding peace, living or dead,
love's wondrous plain, now bloody red.

Still. Arlagh does not run,
fighting on, till life is done,
Athena shining, in her own, inner light,
warrior of Gods, up for the fight.
push, push, ever onward,
always carry battle forward,
battle sounding forever loud,
dead and dying together, battle's sorrowful crowd.

On the flanks, still archer's fire,
striking home with hate's desire,
Fight goes on and all fight brave,
blood the mortar, bodies the pave.
On and on, the hate goes on,
surely there shall be a song,
of all that happened this mighty day,
Before The Gates Of Alahsar, so far away.

Then an arrow comes in fast,
the Dark Man, he is struck at last,
arrow sinks deep in his chest,
shall this be his final test?
Arlaghs, no more in retreat, 
stopping now on balls of feet,
Dark Man now upon his knee,
the Tigress', sad eyes they see.

To Be Continued............
Form: Epic


Premium Member Mary Elizabeth Frye Dedication Poems, Seventh Poet Honored Part One

Part One of Two

Mary Elizabeth Frye Dedication Poems, Seventh Poet Honored
Part One 

(1.)
Graveyard Visit, Seeing Death's Saddest Truth

Walking rows of silent tombstones that litter in my head
I see far more than just faces of buried ancient dead
I see epic battles some lost and long journeys some made
I see long lines trekking through hell's gate as if on parade!

Lo! Great and dooming are the vain vanities of mankind
Blindness, racing ahead not seen they are falling behind
Appetites for darkness and immense greed, they think are needs
They indulge lusts, oft by making innocent humans bleed!

Alas! Dark lust, evil culprit, deeply woven within
Tempting powers grown massively by rewards of past sins
As these ghosts cry out their sorrowful and tragic tales
I hear in not too distant background, hell's loud ringing bells!

As I bid one and all a merry and thoughtful goodbye
Into one great crowd they gathered, all with tearful sad eyes!

Robert J. Lindley, 1-11-2019
Sonnet, ( Man, As The Sad And Fallen Creature)
Dedicated to Mary Elizabeth Frye, poet dedication series.

Mary Elizabeth Frye dedication poem 

(2.)

Those Deep Moaning About Life's Many Curses, Its Hardest Hits

Those that beg for Herculean body and Socratic mind 
I pray reading these verses you think them not too, too unkind
Nothing bad about imagination and cherished desires
Such is mighty fuel that kindles ambition's hottest fires!

Those caring about not being fleet of foot and stout of heart
Or beautiful in appearance and raving as genius smart
Fear not, for such gifts of flesh are but foolish fantasy gold
Too oft disappearing when your human container grows old!

Those deep moaning about life's many curses, its hardest hits
Wading in its nasty cesspools, and in its blackest of pits
Be of good cheer, if your blind soul can accept these wizened words
Open your eyes, sing about love, stop tramping along in herds.

So you got cherished Herculean body, Socratic mind
Have fun stumbling through miserable life while still stone-cold blind!

Robert J. Lindley, 2-19-2019
Sonnet in Fifteen, ( Truth About Man As A Fallen creature)
dedicated to Mary Elizabeth Fyre, poets dedication series.

 
Syllables Per Line: 0 15 15 15 15 0 15 15 15 15 0 15 15 15 15 0 15 15
Total # Syllables:  210
Total # # Words:  142
Form: Sonnet

Steel Sharpened Spurs

Endurance is not of your nature,
Solidity glides in wavering motions upon my pitiful neck,
Now brazen silver does linger,
Trite lance, ravenous knife does make one last,
Sorrowful trek...

I know you'll adore each compassioned endeavor,
And your canvas lay pared, splayed and sculpted tissue.

You've rendered such precious jet-black clouds...
They drape their vile vined misted shrouds...

Within my gray eyed gaze,
Such hues temper your violent palette...
Vanished breath-flickered candle haze.

Lifeless wick, gurgling crimson wax.
Your beloved paint trickles in balmy clotted puddles,
I shudder adorned in radiant rubies rolling from my fingertips,
I feel your veteran-mastered art pouring from my throat...
Am I not your first? What imaginative vision you possess!
For it is not to say mine is fading, fleeting plasma afloat.

They told me of your gift,
How endowed you are,
Able to plunge, plunge, plunge,
Your hands into the crevices of torment,
In your swayed, celestial delusion,
You heaven's exile, wicked-bound and hell sent.

Engraved in lifeless form ascending from tip to hilt,
Still I lie mesmerized by the atrocity,
Of apathy jaundiced guilt.
Predator, what is your name?
May I slip your ill-willed syllables from my lips,
for you have brought my tamed veins shame.

I value your corrupt knowledge found pledge,
As you mar my shivering body to your own image,
Ingenuity, you said was the plight laid upon razor's edge.

Poetic justice you explained was reason to heal,
Mankind in his errors,
Of humanity's devil-signed, soul-phantom deal.

If I could speak I'd ask for the pen,
Should I sign in ink? Skin pricked red-wine?
Rolled parchment, contract or covenant?
Sign here along the dotted line?

I lift the golden-feathered needle,
And pierce, finger signature in place,
Advocate of Satan take my soul,
Where we are then,
Vaccuum-voided into fiery space.

I look back up at you with word choked reply,
Sputtering the eruptive branch volcano,
You snicker an exaggerated pain cry,
You tell me my soul's been granted,
I was never given choice,
You said, "You gave that up when I slit,
Your moral stained choral-voice...."

 How I regret your wicked lures...
Your profound and deafening words,
The afterlife has no meaning,
Only death does gleam,
On Steel Sharpened Spurs...
Form:

The Cross

The great tribulation of Jesus Christ as a son of man on
Earth and a son of God in heaven. The prophesy of 
God fulfill on the cross. The debt of sins paid by the 
Blood of Jesus Christ, image of a man.  
The infinite God of the universe came down from heaven to
The debt of the world. He gives justice to the sins of 
The sinners to save the whole world. He suffered and died, 
Buried and raised from the dead. His death guarantees 
Forgiveness and eternal life. God became visible and 
Intelligible to us. “ Oh come let us adore him Christ our 
Savoir and Lord “. He makes things beautiful,
According to his mercy He saved us. The nail pierced 
Hands of Christ reveal the love filled heart of God.

He carry the sins of the world on the cross, He punished by 
Men beaten and sorrowful, every single stroke of various 
Object use to beat Him causing a lot of His severe pain, 
Wounded and painted body with blood. 
The anxiety of the body is given in to emotion by pain.
The man put the hard substance forming a crown to 
His head that makes Him feel uncomfortable. 
The blood comes out to His head running 
Down to His eyes through His face freely. 
The anxiety of His body, muscle and vein broken and 
Damage, so merciful! On the rough road way 
He walks carry the cross beaten many times repeatedly, 
The men laughing again and again and spatted him. 
So strong pain, deep, through His senses image of a man.

On the cross, His hands and feet nailed, trembling His 
Whole body deeply pain, the blood flowing every beaten 
Stroke force of the hammer to His soft part of the body 
Through His muscle and vein wounded. The bloods carry on
Struggling pain coming here and then to His flesh. 
His breath fades away. An awful suffering of Jesus Christ, 
His uttermost being, whispering to His spirit to go on, 
Saying, “Father, why you just forsaken me... forgive them for
They didn't know nothing“, in your hands, I offer my spirit. 
The word became flesh, we victorious because of His cruel
Dying on the cross. Hosanna in the highest! Praising you 
Oh God in heaven and on earth. 

The heaven open and the angels of God ascending and 
Descending upon the son of the father in all His deity.

©Jocelyn Dunbar
2 April 2004
12: 30 PM

(My tears freely flowing down while I am writing this poem long time ago)
Form: Verse

Premium Member Tears in Vacant Rooms

Written: March 05, 2025 

         ***********************

As the final petal droops
upon quivering leaves,
while the soul begins to decay
akin to the evening lights 
fading into a coffin.
Tears flow quietly across vacant rooms,
sheltered in the hidden retreat, 
of a hapless fool folly.
Aged and forsaken, an ancient blade lies 
on a ragged oak table.
All around the termite-ridden 
floorboards are strewn with 
tattered sheets of stories.
Valiant voices of victory,
vibrate in vivid verses,
preserved with lively Ink. 

Decades of disarray have faded away, 
leaving behind a cherished tale, 
its inked revelations whirl into a frenzy, 
as I peer through the glass, 
reminiscing about those golden days
when my youth overflowed with joy. 
I couldn't assist but notice
the drooping scarlet dahlias.
A gleaming golden crown, 
sparkling with lovely 
crimson queens 
rests upon the head of a forlorn exile—
and that is all that remains.  
Under the relentless sun   
that preys upon the flames, 
how can I rise above 
the crimson chaos 
that encroaches at the edges, 
surrounding the ghostly grave 
of the poetic soul 
I have lost in the quest for acclaim.  
 
Within the weeping window, 
a wild wonder reveals itself, 
draped in a vivid shade of vermilion.  
Amid the whispers of wayward spirits, 
the flawless porcelain of our past 
now bears unsightly marks.  
Fractured dreams are embellished 
with delicate threads, while shafts of 
sunlight slices through shadowy skies.  
The family fortress, 
frozen in cold stone, 
waits for its wary wanderer, 
beckoning the illustrious 
to traverse its dimly paths.  
In the serene silence of slumber, 
the sorrowful saga emerges.  

The embrace of eternal sleep.  
A chilling chronicle of the collapse 
cascades in the corridors 
akin to a haunting harmony.  
The aspiration and avarice  
ultimately overwhelmed us  
As the clock chimed cheerfully 
at midnight on that chilling night, 
the cunning usurper brandished 
a blade and brutally 
broke their beings, 
birthing ghosts of grim, 
unspoken words to weep 
behind weathered walls.  
At this moment, I am 
the emerald evening 
of the early dawn, 
The waxen white wick 
that waits before their 
weathered tombstone is 
withered to a whisper.
© Sotto Poet  Create an image from this poem.

Lifted

my mind is screaming
merely mimicking my lost design 
my heart is bleeding 
memories of a dissolved time 
With the scorned child, I thought gone
the next stage of life has now begun

Feeling lost within my own doom
feeling as though I'm surrounded 
Crowded within this room 
screaming at the top of my shattered lungs 
Not a single soul wavers 
no one bothered to look up 

They walk right through my scattered limbs
Leaving behind their muddy scuffs 
Dancing upon them 
Like leaves blown onto the street
Late into an autumn dusk  
Trampled upon are the ones not seen 
And on top of my punctured ribs, they stand 
As if designated to their blind feet 
This decaying plot of land 
Porous and indented 
with rubber soles imprinted 
A pathway for others and nothing more
My torso became fused with the floor

my hand stretched to the sky 
Grasping for any signs of life 
My own existence I now struggle to find 
But no plea no cry no sorrowful why 
Passed through my lips are ever heard 
Never acknowledged, not a single word
No value in me 
Do others see
So I find myself in the dirt
Questioning my own existence
And it was in this very instance
Because the thought that I do not 
was so Persistent
I prove to myself I exist
Because where else 
but one's self 
Would an owned thought live 
So self I have no matter how distant

Self equals existence
But does it prove that I live
what is life but the execution of one's mind 
Thinking about it and then creating it into time
So just maybe my problem does not lie
in the acknowledgment that I can not find
But in the value I have placed within it
And through my childish eyes
I view myself with the value I was given

And through these eyes, I see not
The value in myself or my thoughts 
Thus with time into reality i create loss
Now the question has changed 
and the new question raised 
is how do I find value in something
where previously no value was placed
Who I am need to be reappraised

My childish eyes that once gave
A view of my worth
established at birth
Into this blackened dirt
They shall be laid
With newly found worth
Love for the child I gave
For value in her, I placed
And upon the replenished earth
A foundation was finally laid 
I walk, rising from the dirt
A path that I have made 
Forever Changed

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