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Tears in Vacant Rooms

Written: March 05, 2025 *********************** As the final petal droops upon quivering leaves, while the soul begins to decay akin to the evening lights fading into a coffin. Tears flow quietly across vacant rooms, sheltered in the hidden retreat, of a hapless fool folly. Aged and forsaken, an ancient blade lies on a ragged oak table. All around the termite-ridden floorboards are strewn with tattered sheets of stories. Valiant voices of victory, vibrate in vivid verses, preserved with lively Ink. Decades of disarray have faded away, leaving behind a cherished tale, its inked revelations whirl into a frenzy, as I peer through the glass, reminiscing about those golden days when my youth overflowed with joy. I couldn't assist but notice the drooping scarlet dahlias. A gleaming golden crown, sparkling with lovely crimson queens rests upon the head of a forlorn exile— and that is all that remains. Under the relentless sun that preys upon the flames, how can I rise above the crimson chaos that encroaches at the edges, surrounding the ghostly grave of the poetic soul I have lost in the quest for acclaim. Within the weeping window, a wild wonder reveals itself, draped in a vivid shade of vermilion. Amid the whispers of wayward spirits, the flawless porcelain of our past now bears unsightly marks. Fractured dreams are embellished with delicate threads, while shafts of sunlight slices through shadowy skies. The family fortress, frozen in cold stone, waits for its wary wanderer, beckoning the illustrious to traverse its dimly paths. In the serene silence of slumber, the sorrowful saga emerges. The embrace of eternal sleep. A chilling chronicle of the collapse cascades in the corridors akin to a haunting harmony. The aspiration and avarice ultimately overwhelmed us As the clock chimed cheerfully at midnight on that chilling night, the cunning usurper brandished a blade and brutally broke their beings, birthing ghosts of grim, unspoken words to weep behind weathered walls. At this moment, I am the emerald evening of the early dawn, The waxen white wick that waits before their weathered tombstone is withered to a whisper.

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Date: 3/14/2025 5:54:00 PM
Amazzzzzzing! A FAV- truly, Sotto!
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Date: 3/13/2025 7:55:00 AM
This poem has a visceral quality to it in the way that it gets the reader to experience its imagery instead of just imagine. I love the alliteration which is very effective, and the lyrical charm of these chilling verses. You are a true master of your craft.
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Date: 3/7/2025 9:01:00 PM
In this day and age, there is constant change. The solid founders of the past are gone, memory is our strength. Your poem is sad. I felt concern for a family plagued with violence. This is my impression of the poem. "Tears in Vacant Rooms" is an amazing work with an exciting story.
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Date: 3/7/2025 4:06:00 PM
this is stunning Sotto what a write you lift the veil and show us what lies beyond you have taken my breath away absolutely stunning my friend hugs Shadow
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Date: 3/7/2025 8:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a wonderful write you have here. You had your pen working overtime on this wonderful write/story. Have a fun weekend as you write away...............
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Date: 3/6/2025 2:43:00 PM
So haunting, chilling and wonderfully written Sotto, oh my goodness! Images came to my mind, and vividly! This is another incredible work of a master poet, well done!!
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Date: 3/5/2025 3:15:00 PM
Goodness! This has an epic feel to it. Almost otherworldly as well. This is the best poem on Soup this week. You should do free verse more often. As I was reading this Wuthering Heights and Laura came to mind. Chilling
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/5/2025 7:20:00 PM
Faving this bad boy

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