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Peace Prayer
These are peace poems, prayer poems, hymns and lullabies I have written for family, friends and the world over the years ...

Peace Prayer
by Michael R. Burch

for Jim Dunlap

Be calm.
Be still.
Be silent, content.

Be one with the...

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Categories: rewrote, beauty, blessing, love, nature, peace, prayer, time,
Form: Free verse



The Moon As a Metaphor For Your Mouth
The Moon as a Metaphor for Your Mouth
by Michael R. Burch

When I was closest to love, it did not seem
real at all, but a thing of such tenuous sweetness
it might dissolve in my mouth
like a...

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Categories: rewrote, candy, love, metaphor, moon, romantic love, sweet,
Form: Sonnet
Premium Member In It, I Saw Prometheus Chained and Bound
In It,  I Saw Prometheus Chained And Bound


I was reading Salinger's, "Catcher In The Rye" 
A follow up from Leo Tolsty's,  "War and Peace"
I heard a voice say, "seek wisdom before you die"
Remember...

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Categories: rewrote, art, imagination, inspiration, literature, poetry, poets, writing,
Form: Rhyme
Premium Member Codons of Contempt: A Crime Against Empathy
We came not for conquest,
but for containment—
though conquest is what happens
when containment itches beneath the skin
like sulfur spores in a sealed lung.

They had the secret.
Not gold, not weapons, not prophecy—
but language that healed.
Real language—
not poetry,...

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Categories: rewrote, death, fear, horror, myth, science fiction, technology,
Form: Dramatic Monologue
Premium Member Easter Song


It’s in the softness of this new heart,
	brought to me from heaven’s beloved,
		a heart from the One who changed the world
silenced the voice of insecurity and fear
rewrote my story so the love that I hear
is...

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Categories: rewrote, appreciation, easter, god, hope, inspirational, music, song,
Form: Free verse



My Murder They Call Survival
Three men.
Three shadows with human faces,
Hands like chains,
Voices coated in liquor and cologne —
That same cologne still snakes through my chest,
Claws at my lungs every time I smell it.

They didn’t need chains —
They used hands,...

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Categories: rewrote, addiction, courage, crazy, fear, feelings, humanity, violence,
Form: Free verse
The Men Who Write Your Christmas Movies, Part I
I used to be ashamed to say that I
once wrote for a rather large company,
the kind the likes to print up greeting cards,
and for some reason, make Christmas movies.

Now this caused much consternation in me,
I...

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Categories: rewrote, growth, judgement, meaningful, sad, society, wisdom, writing,
Form: Epic
I Know That Silence
I know that silence you hold in your chest,
The scream behind smiles, the ache in your rest.
Where love means walking a thin wire line,
And his “I’m sorry” feels like a red warning sign.
I know all...

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Categories: rewrote, abuse, courage, for her, hope, pain, strength,
Form: Rhyme
Glory of the Cross
It is written that you left everything
That you emptied yourself of all
I find in this so dangerous a meaning
But it explains the significance of the fall
It explains the value of my worth
Something I tremble to...

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Categories: rewrote, faith, god, me, faith, god, me, universe,
Form: Rhyme
Premium Member Baba Madiba , Nelson Mandela
Rewrote our History books for the world to see
A worthier Icon there could never be,
Born and died over the span short of a century,
Baba Madiba became South Africa’s first Black 
President in April 1994, finally,...

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Categories: rewrote, wife,
Form: Free verse
Masterpiece
Master piece

A masterpiece 
A work of Art 
Created from our fathers heart 
Unique and wonderfully made 
He mastered and completed 
Yet some defeated 
They left you out 
Mastering a piece 
Don't come easy 
It comes...

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Categories: rewrote, age, art, blessing,
Form: Prose Poetry
Ten Years Version 2
Ten Years (rewrote it for better meaning)

(Love you, mom)
February 21, 2007
The day that i last saw your face
The same face that went through war
To keep the family together
Through the hardships of life;
The day that i...

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Categories: rewrote, encouraging, inspirational,
Form: Free verse
A Sensual Awakening
Exchanged smiles and smirks
Yeah always between you and I
With the constant tugs and jerks 
Our emotions, they now run high

It's like that when ever one lurks
A constant murmur and a loud syh
When the supernovas and...

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Categories: rewrote, write,
Form: Rhyme
Unthings
I stumbled barefoot through fractured noon,
Where lamplight bloomed like a fossil's tune.
The sky was stitched with electric thread,
Held up by whispers from things long dead.

The clocks ran backward, then sideways, then wept,
And time was a...

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Categories: rewrote, fantasy,
Form: Narrative
Premium Member Believer
[verse 1]
I used to think that love was not real
Just a shadow, a game, a fleeting ideal
I thought it was a trick
a chemical lie
A fleeting transaction
just passing by

[pre-chorus]
But then you came
the world rewrote
Every doubt... every...

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Categories: rewrote, change, song,
Form: Lyric
ROUGH DRAFT
Verse 1:
I was once a whisper, light on your tongue,
A gentle hum, a soft song to be sung.
But like the fray of ink, fading with time,
I fell from grace as you lost your mind.

Your fingers...

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© Lyric Man  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: rewrote, death, depression, heartbreak, imagination, longing, loss, poetry,
Form: Lyric
Clown
There is anger raging in my heart. A stone lodged deep within my chest. Some days it swells into a boulder, others, it dwindles to a pebble. Yet I don’t know which is worse. It...

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Categories: rewrote, betrayal,
Form: Free verse
Rejected Stanzas From Third Person
He's so phoney in poems, moaning only,
same tone, same story,
a war he can't endure anymore that beats him sore and sorry,
exploring his core for strength absent before in writes of sheer folly.

Wanting to write powerfully...

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© Nick Trim  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: rewrote, depression,
Form: Rhyme
Why?
The question I ask is
Simple
One that has been asked
For thousands of years.
I ask God,
Crying.
The family,
Remembering.
The doctors,
Angry.

Nobody can tell me
The answer to my question.
Silence meets my plea,
My demand,
My scream to the universe.
Others ask
My question.
Everyone wants to...

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Categories: rewrote, 9th grade, anger, bereavement, death of a
Form: Free verse
Stolen Dreams - Not Unwell
In your eyes a spark still survives
A place where your dreams flies
With your hand, mind and heart
Created a sweet that was art

One fateful day you questioned the books
To find honey mouthed partner a crook
The trust...

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Categories: rewrote, betrayal, emotions, heartbreak, mental health, mental illness,
Form: Rhyme
REWRITTEN LINES
[Verse 1]
I’ve seen you sitting there, you've been here before,
Always leave me wanting, restless for more.
But never quite like this—lamp glow on your face,
You must be from Heaven, not of this place.

[Pre-Chorus]
I come here to...

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© Lyric Man  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: rewrote, emotions, fantasy, how i feel, longing, love,
Form: Lyric
Childs Play
That moment
That perfect moment
Where time became eternal
I saw
I opened my blinded eyes and saw
The expanse of your soul

To reword
To match time stricken words to an eternal glimpse
Absurd

So, I write
I write without reason
Flowing with the ink...

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Categories: rewrote, abuse, me, time,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member In the dust of time, we are but ephemeral shadows
In the dust of time, we are but ephemeral shadows,
Treading on the realm of a story nearing its end,
Echoes of the past whisper hidden secrets to us,
And we, blind and deaf, dance on the edge...

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© Dan Enache  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: rewrote, fantasy,
Form: Free verse
Open Spaces
When going out it frightens me,                             ...

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Categories: rewrote, life, me, self, me, self,
Form: Rhyme
A Moment of Your Time
A Moment of your Time

I was just going through my head notes and re-wrotes....
and came up with a finished writing that will become a re-write piece to say the least....I begged and pleaded with this...

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Categories: rewrote, poetry, word play, roses are red,
Form: Personification

Book: Reflection on the Important Things