Long Obedience Poems

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Premium Member Seek and You Will Find

Is life a psychological and spiritual mess, a being of dismay and chaos,
Misdirected and confused by those of staunch and unwavering bios,
Might have started on a farm, urban home, corporate office, or a college dorm,
Looking for devotees to accept vague ideologies and philosophies like their own?

They stirred up vast doubt, skepticism, uncertainty, distrust, and questions of all kind,
Than principles that would guide, direct, shepherd, shape, and lead to soundness of mind,
That would bring peace and harmony; a grand way of life that is healthy and whole,
You lost focus; you lost courage; you lost hopefulness; you lost confidence; you lost your soul.

Did you cast your life upon that which is destined to disappoint, miss the mark and fail,
And empty rhetoric your buddies constantly and relentlessly wailed,
Or upon that which is eternally and everlasting faithful and true,
That if you accepted, you would be called a laughingstock, a fool, or thinking askew?

Is your mosaic spiritual conceptions satisfying your deep need way down inside,
Is your soul a graffiti wall or a spiritual guide to be applied,
Is your soul just shattered by confusion and has left you empty and cold,
A splattering of abstract work than one of realism or anything worthy to behold?

When facing a fierce raging storm in your mind and heart while dejected, fearful, and forlorn,
Did you go to philosophy, self-help books, or to one who could still the storm?
Do you know the one who can speak to the tempestuous seas and they obey him?
Ever heard of the one who walked on water and could calm the hearts of troubled men?

Let me introduce you to that one who can do for you what you cannot do for yourself.
Learn of him by reading the scriptures, the Bible, find it on many a shelf.
His name is Jesus Christ, Son of God; He and God the Father of the same mind.
Through faith-obedience in Jesus, end of your search for redemption; seek and you will find.
Form: Rhyme


Premium Member HEART THAT ASKS GOD FOR WISDOM

April 13 Heart for God Bible Meditations Based on 1Kings 3-5

Key Verse – 1Kings 3:11-12 And God said unto him, Because thou hast asked this thing, and hast not asked for thyself long life; neither hast asked riches for thyself, nor hast asked the life of thine enemies; but hast asked for thyself understanding to discern judgment; Behold, I have done according to thy words: lo, I have given thee a wise and an understanding heart; so that there was none like thee before thee, neither after thee shall any arise like unto thee.

HEART THAT ASKS GOD FOR WISDOM

Our heart asks God for wisdom in our spirituality
Upon His loving authority
Around His control’s sovereignty
For us to be surely productive in our Biblical Christianity.

Our heart asks God for wisdom in our welfare
Upon His gracious care
Around His mercy’s stare
For us to be divinely aware in our dealings regarding heavenly affair.

Our heart asks God for wisdom in our faithfulness
Upon His patient goodness
Around His compassion’s gentleness
For us to be serenely fruitful in our stewardship’s productiveness.

Our heart asks God for wisdom in our salvation-fruition
Upon His assured redemption
Around His righteousness’ justification
For us to be virtuously holy in our character transformation.

Our heart asks God for wisdom in our service
Upon His trustworthy promise
Around His command’s notice
For us to be constantly circumspect in our ministerial office.

Our heart asks God for wisdom in our future
Upon His everlasting nature
Around His eternity’s pasture
For us to be joyously loving in our kindness’ gesture.

Our heart asks God for wisdom in our stewardship
Upon His Scriptural discipleship
Around His friendship’s fellowship
For us to be steadfastly diligent in our obedience to His leadership.

April 13, 2026

Premium Member My God, Thank You For Turning Me To You

November 22 Scripture Meditations Based on 1Thessalonians 1-3

Key Verse – 1Thessalonians 1:9 … Ye turned to God from idols to serve the living and true God.

MY GOD, THANK YOU FOR TURNING ME TO YOU

Thank You for turning me to You against my idolatry
And sinfulness’ fury
Unto holiness-territory
By Your righteous victory!

Thank You for turning me to You against my impudence
And rebelliousness’ incidence
Unto obedience-residence
By Your compassionate confidence!

Thank You for turning me to You against my imperfection
And transgressions’ perversion
Unto virtue-transformation
By Your gracious conversion!

Thank You for turning me to You against my inability
And weakness’ inferiority
Unto service-productivity
By Your powerful sovereignty!

Thank You for turning me to You against my ingratitude
And selfishness’ magnitude
Unto praise-fortitude
By Your bountiful latitude!

Thank You for turning me to You against my insufficiency
And scarcity’s deficiency
Unto trust-dependency
By Your plenteous mercy!

Thank You for turning me to You against my impediment
And pride’s detriment
Unto dedication-commitment
By Your joyful fulfillment!

November 22, 2022
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member The Bible and Me

The Bible is God’s Truth* for me in my servant’s function
Redirecting me against vain goals to pursue after heavenly vision
Restructuring me midst shaky stand to fit godly foundation
Refining my faith by the Lord’s strengthening tests and guiding admonition!

The Bible is God’s Oracle for me along my stewardship-faculties
Replenishing me whenever I’m weakened by varied difficulties
Realigning me toward divine sensibilities
Refurbishing my soul thru the supreme Director’s counsels of priorities!

The Bible is God’s Testimony for me with my obedience-consistency
Referring me to the Saviour’s answers to prayers’ earnestness and urgency
Recharging me against coldness by the fire of Gospel message about His mercy
Renewing my courage by the Spirit Who inspires Christian fervency!

The Bible is God’s Covenant for me toward revival-blessing
Reinvigorating me within the bounds of the Master’s standard and cleansing
Reawakening me for submission that His epistles are expressing
Restoring my hope for Christ’s coming on to eternal praising!

*Psalm 33:4 For the word of the LORD is right; and all his works are done in truth.

November 2, 2018
Form: Rhyme

The Tree of Life

There were many trees in the garden of Eden
The one spoke of the most, was where the apple was eaten
But another tree carried equivalent value, if not more
I'm humbled to tell you, I hadn't heard of it before
The tree of life is the one, I give so much regard
Though the knowledge tree, it seems, in religion, has starred

   As Christian's we accept that Eve created sin
Yet fail to grasp the meaning.  To fully comprehend 
God wants his children pure, with a childlike mind
To live, love and pray and remain knowledgeably blind
Naturally, we learn more and more as we grow 
Facts derived from this tree, he doesn't want us to know
Rules of religion and how to make him proud
This is not what he craves, it's following the crowd

   He yearns for our love and true companionship
Not our obedience, from fear of the whip
His style is not to pick, prod and poke us
But to reveal who he is and redirect our focus
There is much to be said about this runner up tree
It provides excellent shade from worldly Debris


Family Plan

About the eleventh hour,
Came a strong man of valor,
Who came so meek and mild,
With inner, unending power.

His time was in an age,
When Satan’s forces would rage,
To take down the generation,
Chosen to mark the day.

Along came a beloved child to him, 
Paramount in fighting the evil wild,
Who would need a stable root to stem,
And help to shape and save his life.

This man does everything he can,
With so much good to give,
Bringing honor to his family's plan,
Living to serve, and freely forgive.

I am this man, whom walks with God,
Holding His hand, following His plan.
It’s now our time, to affirm our all in all, 
By obedience, to His every command.

I forever give all things gratefully,
Back to our Father in Heaven,
Who graciously gives so bountifully,
As the miracle in the bread of life, the leaven. 

I would not have this role, were it not for my goodly mother,
Who sacrificed unto no end, to save our family’s soul.
We are eternally blessed by her, like no other,
Because with God’s perfect love, He saves us in whole.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member My God, Thank You For Saving Me According To Your Foreknowledge

December 10 Scripture Meditations Based on 1Peter 1-2

Key Verse – 1Peter 1:2 Elect according to the foreknowledge of God the Father, through sanctification of the Spirit, unto obedience and sprinkling of the blood of Jesus Christ: Grace unto you, and peace, be multiplied.

MY GOD, THANK YOU FOR SAVING ME ACCORDING TO YOUR FOREKNOWLEDGE	
	
Thank You for saving me according to Your foreknowledge-design
With Your compassion, truly divine
Thru sanctification of the Spirit from sinfulness’ line
Unto assured redemption of eternal wealth’s mine.

Thank You for saving me according to Your foreknowledge-aim
With Your grace, surely bright in its goodness’ flame
Thru forgiveness of transgression and blame
Unto peaceful security of guarded protection’s claim.

Thank You for saving me according to Your foreknowledge-wisdom
With Your plan, really perfect for heavenly kingdom
Thru transformation of mind against ignorance-caused boredom
Unto godly decision of biblical revival’s freedom.

Thank You for saving me according to Your foreknowledge-purposefulness
With Your direction, constantly upholding truthfulness
Thru assertion of instruction by righteous steadfastness
Unto virtuous character of fruitful holiness’ blessedness.

Thank You for saving me according to Your foreknowledge-settlement
With Your mercy, daily available for satisfied contentment
Thru supply of provisions midst crises’ detriment
Unto joyful gratefulness of praise-filled heart’s commitment.

Thank You for saving me according to Your foreknowledge-authority
With Your leadership, absolutely powerful beyond infinity
Thru guidance of Scriptures along confident certainty
Unto miraculous deeds of wondrous supremacy’s sovereignty.

Thank You for saving me according to Your foreknowledge-light
With Your brilliance, clearly pure and bright
Thru illumination of vision for prudent insight
Unto faithful service of victorious fellowship’s delight.

December 10, 2022
Form: Rhyme

You Are Jamming My Dreams

I wait crossly
To get picked up straightaway
I wait optimistically
To step into the murky bowels of my car

I can’t advance…
When you’re dragging me to your feet
I can’t progress…
When you’re motivating me to be incomplete

I wait at ease
To get a ride home
I wait with heaps of crotchetiness
To jam myself into the jumbled car

I can’t drive on…
When you’re creating traffic in my dreams
I can’t carry on as fast
When you’re taking your time on the freeway,
Though your obedience beams

You’re jamming my dreams, sweet dream catcher
You’re liveliness gleams…It’s not what it seems... (2)
It’s certainly not what it seems…
Blame it on my dreams!
You’re just a dream come true…
It’s nothing that popped out of the blue…
It’s not that surprising
If you only knew…
Oh, you don’t have a clue…
This infatuation is positively true!

I can’t move on…I can’t drive on… (2)
I can’t ride on the road to victory…
I can’t burst forth by dashing proudly
Until you hit the brakes and cease from
Jamming my exotic dreams

I can’t travel on… I can’t light up the sky…
I can’t dream on and on and on
I can’t drift on and on
I can’t…I can’t move on
I can’t… I can’t!
Until you inspire me to gleam!

(the whispers grow soundless)
I can’t drive on…
I can’t drive on…
I can’t drive on…
I can't...I can't...
I just can't,
Dear friend...
*silence*

Premium Member A Select Few

A Select Few
Tom Wright
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A few times in my lifetime,
I’ve been blessed by the presence of those
whom God has ushered into a common trail.
These wonderful people caused me to search my soul,
challenged my thinking, and caused abeyant,
creative juices to flow; perhaps they came to me out of
obedience to God’s urging. Thanks can never
 be considered payment enough; but should 
 you be one of these, my gift to you
is friendship, undying loyalty, and love,
for lingering with me therein.
Tom


I’m not overly impressed with what some say they now
But quiet deeds that come to light impress me so.
Tom
© Tom Wright  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Narrative

Premium Member Choices of Righteousness Abundantly

There's a still small voice
telling me I am calling you 
Telling me I have a choice
And it's calling me
Yes! and it still calling you

Choices of righteousness abundantly
Representing all of humanity
Judging you, judging me

Telling me I am you
Telling me I have a choice to
Choose 1 or number 2
One is for honor, obedience
Two is for
Choices of righteousness abundantly

Heaven sent
And it's calling me
Yes! still calling me
Yes! still calling you
I'm you, you're me
Choices of righteousness abundantly

I can choose 1 or 2
One is for honor, obedience
Two is for
Choices of righteousness abundantly

07/12/15
written by James Edward Lee Sr.

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