Long Hum Poems

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Premium Member Ocean Hum

Murmur ambience above the endless
horizon freewheel briny breeze filled sea.
Nascent movements from their shells come to be
unfurled winks, life beating hearts is timeless.
Calm hums over the ocean and appease
the emotional storm; where bright blue sky
meets the indigo sea, cap speechify
sea foam waves roll into shore shortly ease
before moving back into the sea depth.
With a deep breath of woven weariness
emerge with no utter rebuff weakness
white salt spray in its size and greatest breadth.

Gems of life marine mammals, coral, fish,
turtles, seabirds, rays, octopus, and starfish.


8/13/2019

Poetry Contest: 'Your best sonnet July-December 2019'  
Sponsored By: John Hamilton
© Eve Roper  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Sonnet


Slumber's Grace

Softly she slumbers, a vision to see,
A smile on her face, serenity.
No worries or cares, no troubles in sight,
Just peaceful repose, a gentle delight.

Her snores, a gentle hum, a sweet serenade,
Cute and girlish, a symphony to aid,
My heart beats faster, my love grows anew,
In this moment, my heart belongs to you.

Though I may be nothing special, unworthy of her grace,
She sleeps beside me, a precious, trusting embrace,
Her beauty shines brighter, even in repose,
A treasure to behold, a heart that overflows.

Oh, how I'm captivated by her slumbering form,
A beauty so uncommon, a love that's sworn,
In this quiet hour, I vow to adore,
This sleeping beauty, forevermore.
Form: Narrative

Har haal mein hum behaal rahe

Har haal mein hum behaal rahe  
Gham-e-jaan se har dam ndhaal rahe  

Tumhari chahat ki rahguzar mein  
Kabhi khaak, kabhi paimaal rahe  

Na khwab bane, na taabeer mili  
Bas azaab hi azaab ke hamaal rahe  

Dhoop sehte guzargayi sadiyaan  
Shab-e-hijr ke hi sawaal rahe  

Mohabbat ke saahil bhi door the  
Aur dil ke toofaan be-zawaal rahe  

Shajar-e-umeed ka saaya na mila  
Hum faseel-e-gham ke kamaal rahe  

Jo charaagh jalaye the aarzu ke  
Wahi aandhiyon mein bemisaal rahe  

Rah-e-wafa mein the zakhm beshumaar  
Phir bhi hanste rahe, lajawab rahe  

Humne socha tha dil ka dard sunayein  
Magar lab pe qufl, aur sawaal rahe  

Har shaam ne tanhai ka zehar diya  
Har raat ke geet bhi malaal rahe
Form: Nazm

Premium Member hum of bliss

Melding with the vast universe,
in monk mode, we compose a verse;
why would we strive, struggle or strain,
when hum of bliss be soul’s refrain.

Love in love with love, is God’s call,
that who we are, we may recall;
pure hearts God’s love and light ingrain,
when hum of bliss be soul’s refrain.

Resting overthinking disease,
like a child, we’re again at ease;
thought flow ceases, now rests our brain,
when hum of bliss be soul’s refrain.

Upon surrendering our will,
when we be still, voids within fill;
staid silence plugs energy drain,
when hum of bliss be soul’s refrain.

Nothing need be done, come undone,
knowing that God and we are one;
fears and desires, are to rest lain,
when hum of bliss be soul’s refrain.
Form: Kyrielle

Detached - Even Circuits Hum, a music video


Detached - Even Circuits Hum
A Music Video

As twilight turns to tangled thought,
and truth tiptoes down trembling streets.
Once, wonder serenaded willowed winds
now shadows embrace muted retreats
Wary hearts weave walls so wide
against a faceless, coded tide,
while glowing grids in distant bays
bloom haunting weaves they won't embrace

Dualistic stars and digital dawns
Cinematic cradles human ache,
but some still long for candle flames,
and fingerprints the codes can't fake.
Dreading the hushed holograms,
the warmth that AI cannot wear.
Forgetting that even circuits hum
with aspirations hidden there

If only we could sense serenity
Pulsing between each quiet stream—
Machine or muse, to earnestly strive
for something more than just a dream
We could wildly dance on data plains,
where algorithms tap like rain.
let compassion code our names,
and poetic lines  rewire the pain.

The muse may wear a mirrored face
But still, she sings with glowing grace.


When the talented digital artist AIMetamotion approached me to create a song that would complement her stunning artwork, I was immediately inspired. The result is 'Detached', a haunting track that tells the story of a robot grappling with the overwhelming flood of emotions brought on by a sensory chip—a concept not so far-fetched, given the rapid advancements in AI technology.
Though she sings her ironically titled anthem of detachment, the visuals tell a different story. Her struggle is evident, her resistance almost poetic, hinting at the complexity of emotion even in synthetic form.
This is just the beginning. A sequel is already in the works, diving deeper into her journey. The question remains: will she finally succumb to the surge of feelings she desperately tries to reject, or will she find a way to break free?
Stay tuned...
Form: Rhyme


Words or Hums?

       What are these symbols? Letters? Ink?
         Holding the meaning of what we think?

       If I had been born in a different time,
         Lines of writing would not fill my time.

       I may have grunted with purpose that led
         To all the words that have been said. 

       I may have hummed with feeling that drew
         From sentiments I knew as true.

       I may have hummed with a sing-songy tune,
         Spoke to my children by light of the moon.

       Now there is language, helpful and tricky.
         Some of the things that we hear become sticky.

       Is much of it useful? Much of it nice?
         To receive in the morn when we haven’t thought twice?

       Cleverly used and in most complex ways,
         What is it actually trying to say?

       Maybe the grunt and the hum as of yore,
         Would help us remember what we knew before.
© C.M. Kelly  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Ho-Hum, Here Are the Keys

Ho-hum, another war lost
  We should have won
Our new partner for peace ~ the Taliban

Ho-hum, a new school year
  First semester's curriculum
    Learn whom to FEAR

Ho-hum, we're going all-electric
  While 'Mr. Green President'
Begs Russia ~ Pump more oil! Protet us!

Ho-hum, California burns
  The no-win solution
Gavin Newsome returns

Ho-hum, Chicago's locked down
  No, it's not Covid
It's a murderous town

Ho-hum, soaring inflation
  I can still sleep ~ My paycheck's 
Indexed to tax machinations

Ho-hum, another day closer
  To beckoning the invading hoardes
Come over ~ Here are the keys ~ Take over
Form: Rhyme

Humdrum doldrum yet still ho hum



What have Tests become

Not really a conundrum

The game’s true fulcrum

To beach bum humdrum

Cricket now plays dumb


Kowtow to cash cow scum

To T20 aplenty did succumb

Moolah the ruler in this slum

Seduced reduced simulacrum


Absurd but heard the word’s still mum

Batters in tatters another LBW plum

Chickens no bantam baby tantrum

Same silly song will willy nilly strum

A dastardly turns bastardly doldrum


Forget regret best bet rule of thumb

Rank dank stank so glum & then some

Beat the drum or Tests simply overcome 

Stark dark depths these guys lies do plumb


No comfort for our sport not even a crumb

Our sort annoyed destroyed in Pink Floyd void 

In perverse parallel universe worse is to come

So ho hum reeling feeling “uncomfortably numb”
Form: Monorhyme

Hum To Yourself Quietly

I'm heading home after five
humming to myself quietly;
I've missed the December' sunset by an hour,
Christmas lights sparkle, folks greet each other:
hear the joy in their voices!
Jesus will end their worries:
they will thrive, not strive!

Naughty boys laugh at Bozo, he has
red hair and long feet;
he marched in the Halloween Parade
and played his drum with a fast beat!
Oh, hum, hum, hum 
to yourself quietly!
Show them you are in a happy mood,
don't be afraid of being booed and hissed!

Carols take the dullness away,
and they replace it with cheerfulness:
take your trumpet, your guitar,
or just hum, hum, hum
to yourself quietly...
feel inside serenity,
listen to golden bells
ringing joyfully!

Oh, hum, hum, hum 
to yourself quietly!
Peter is the new Santa with a white beard,
his favorite visitor is Reed;
look around the corner: there goes funny Elf!
Scrooge grins, he's all for himself:
stay away, don't laugh;
Greedy Scrooge is afraid of Christmas ghosts!
Dickens knew him well:
a guilty conscience won't let
won't let anybody sleep;
everyone expressed ingratitude
to someone who was cheap and rude,

Oh, hum, hum, hum
to yourself quietly,
and despite all: be very merry;
oh, hum, hum, hum
to yourself quietly:
see snowflakes falling,
and festive kids running!
The frosty evening holds a magical spell,
the whole universe praises Jesus!
Oh, hum, hum, hum 
to yourself quietly!

David understood 
the mysteries of the Heavens,
faith is the only stronghold of the weak;
songs are the humble gifts of the meek!
Oh, hum, hum, hum
to yourself quietly...
walk around: who happy, who's sad?
Ah, many don't have 
the strength that faith gives,
walk with the Good Shepherd
and make him your friend:
glory will be yours
of you proclaim Him
your King and shield!
Hum, hum, hum
to yourself quietly!

I'm heading home
humming to myself quietly,
decorations are pretty;
snow and silence charm 
and together
with the Christmas music,
we'll disarm
each woeful feeling inside:
let the Jule season bring us more joy!
Carols are played everywhere:
will they warm up all the cold hearts
in the crowded square?
Oh, hum, hum, hum
to yourself quietly!
 

P.S. The track of my song is posted on CloudSound.com
Form: Lyric

Premium Member In the quiet hum of the cafe, beneath the dim, flickering lights

In the quiet hum of the café, beneath the dim, flickering lights,
The Poet sat, a relic of past ambitions, his soul adrift in the sea of his thoughts.
The Muse, with gentle and understanding eyes, brought him his coffee,
Her gaze, a fleeting touch of divinity amid the cold machinery of life.
Her kindness, a fragile thread in the tapestry of his existence,
A momentary glimmer in the shadows that swirled within him.
Life, he mused, was a relentless dance with troubles,
An endless waltz where every step led to another snare.
He had understood this truth, not from books or sages,
But from the raw, unfiltered experience of living,
From the grind of daily monotony, the suffocating embrace of routine.
Forty-eight years, and he was weary — a deep weariness that crushed his soul.
The poetic pursuit, once a ladder to transcendence, now a prison of words and silence,
Each verse, a reminder of deception, each stanza, a cage for his spirit.
The thrill of secret inspirations, once intoxicating, now a bitter aftertaste,
The readings, the celebrations, mere masks for the emptiness within,
Every accolade for every poem, a shackle that bound him tighter.
He had walked away, seeking freedom in the void,
But found that nothingness had its own weight,
An invisible burden that crushed him just as surely.
Isolation had come, a severing of ties that left him adrift,
And melancholy, a temporary solace, soon became another chain.
The Poet sipped his coffee, the warmth a fleeting comfort,
And reflected on the roads he had traveled, the choices he had made.
In his mind, the dream of a gentler path, a middle way,
Where neither the hustle nor the destitution reigned,
But such a road seemed an illusion, a phantom in the mist.
So here he sat, between the past and an uncertain future,
A soul stripped of pretense, raw and vulnerable,
Seeking meaning in the simple act of drinking coffee,
The Muse's kindness, a balm for his wounded soul,
Her eyes a reminder that even in the depths of despair,
Divinity could still shine through, a beacon in the night.
© Dan Enache  Create an image from this poem.

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