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Ocean Hum

Murmur ambience above the endless horizon freewheel briny breeze filled sea. Nascent movements from their shells come to be unfurled winks, life beating hearts is timeless. Calm hums over the ocean and appease the emotional storm; where bright blue sky meets the indigo sea, cap speechify sea foam waves roll into shore shortly ease before moving back into the sea depth. With a deep breath of woven weariness emerge with no utter rebuff weakness white salt spray in its size and greatest breadth. Gems of life marine mammals, coral, fish, turtles, seabirds, rays, octopus, and starfish. 8/13/2019 Poetry Contest: 'Your best sonnet July-December 2019' Sponsored By: John Hamilton

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Date: 12/17/2019 5:30:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Eve
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Date: 12/16/2019 5:42:00 PM
Wonderful write Eve, beautiful phrasing, unique words, loved this, the rhyme scheme I find a little difficult, but that's just me, congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 9/14/2019 7:57:00 PM
I have never seen the ocean, but your wonderful poem just took me there... Congratulations on your first place win Eve!
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Date: 8/17/2019 8:42:00 PM
Nicely done, Eve! Congratulations!
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Date: 8/16/2019 2:35:00 PM
Congrats, Eve! Delighted to see your poem rated in the No. 1 category - well-deserved! Many thanks for your kind comment re my win - Bob H
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Date: 8/16/2019 3:29:00 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful win, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/15/2019 3:58:00 PM
This has such divine imagery Eve! I see why it was honored with first placement. Congratulations on your wonderful deserving win Eve! xxoo
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Date: 8/14/2019 4:49:00 PM
fabulous imagery Eve I am surrounded by the ocean and love reading poems about it:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/14/2019 1:16:00 PM
I enjoyed this poem Eve. Very nice :)
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Date: 8/14/2019 7:38:00 AM
The sights and sounds of ocean..beautifully captured in your poem Eve..splendid imagery..all the best for a win.
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Date: 8/14/2019 6:19:00 AM
- A lovely hums from the sea, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/14/2019 3:21:00 AM
Well written sonnet dedication to the ocean Eve. No better place to be than at the waters edge. Good luck. Tom
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Date: 8/14/2019 12:46:00 AM
The ea is significant as is your poem.best wishes Panagiota
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