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Discombobulation Hammers Sic Kills Lacerates Peppers

Discombobulation hammers (sic) kills, lacerates, peppers... 
tuckered wayfarer

Blitzkrieg cacophony debilitates Earthling
spiritually, mentally, emotionally... castrates
analogous post traumatic stress disorder
status simulating shell shocked warrior
dizzily descending darkening dimension
aghast - weakly ejaculate wherefore art thou
Elysian Fields?

Mine skeletal atrophied, diseased, gnarled...
once muscular flesh now awful blight
trumpets, dons, bespeaks... existence
regarding barren toothless anchorite

desolate physical environment
offlimit superfund site
mirrors equivalent condemned
toxic physical body quite
piteous, hideous, atrocious...,
this human bag of lovely bones

can barely, limply, scratchily... write
forbidding natural geography might
best demarcate courtesy skull
and crossbones bleached white
optimally reflecting feasting
carrion did delight

post mortem cannibalized habeas corpus
can never know where Edenic Garden
bloomed ah... magnificent sight,
nor reckon eyes me
how poetry doth not excite
forever striking living daylight

emancipating soul joining spiritus mundi
relieving tortured corporeal skiff good night
amidst abandoned, desecrated,
gutted... wasteland rendered might
of mankind quest to tame and temper
breathless fecundity kickstarting

rejuvenation linked to potent Gaia despite
havoc wrought regenerative force
repurposes deadened muscle and cellulite
unbeknownst decomposed organisms
comprise yours truly, nor what bright
transformation new life subsequently results
will kindle, snapchat, tender... excite.


Premium Member Champagne Light

                         watch clouds dizzily dreamy in 
                    champagne light, watch with nostalgic
                          wistfulness the Canada geese 
                           returning to balmy retreat 

                           a graceful gripping formation!
                           watch clouds dizzily dreamy in 
                            mauve! butterflies seductively 
                             caress incandescent flowers ...

                              under luminous horizon
                              robin enticingly singing, 
                          watch clouds dizzily dreamy in 
                          rosy summer bidding farewell !

                       paths are strewn with puce, tangerine ~
                        red, orange leaves...swirling, twirling,
                           hint of autumn in crispy breeze -
                           watch clouds dizzily dreamy in!



                                        August 11, 2022
                    8 syllables in every line - checked by HMS.com
                        For “Hint Of Autumn” Poetry contest
                               Sponsor: Regina McIntosh
Form: Quatern

Swallowed

Stones,

Mortar, and brick

Nowhere to turn without feeling sick, stoned

To my stomach

A bottomless pit

Unheard, smothered by a thousand succinct voices' verbose drone

Speaking as they spew toxic, putrid bile in the pit of my stomach

Plummeting, swirling dizzily in circles - a cyclone - cyclically, alone

Booming, the whispering silence of lucidity's susurrate disruption weighs heavily on my thoughts, placidly as it sits

Like boulders, slowly sinking deeper into quicksand - the bottomless pit of my stomach

Swallowed by immovable, inescapable stones,
Mortar, and brick

Premium Member Stardust Fields

I squeezed my eyes tightly shut
And uttered a familiar prayer
To escape the shackles of the mundane
And travel to Stardust Fields

It wasn't long after I uttered those words
I found my hair tossed by a gentle breeze
When I opened my eyes I grinned from ear to ear
For I had arrived at Stardust fields

Here the stars blossomed like flowers
And tiny moons grew like fruit on tree branches
The sky was a shimmering ocean of shooting stars
Cascading onto the open fields

Where they burst like fireworks
To the delight of the sassy squirrels
As they collected planet dust
To create their nests in the moon trees

Spreading out from a central location
Were four rainbow roads that lead all over
From the sugar coated mountaintops
To valleys where gingerbread men farm the land

And sometimes the rainbow roads loop de loop
So I fall to the ground laughing so dizzily
Serenaded by the rustling leaves
I feel like I could stay in Stardust Fields forever

Journey of Doubtful Indulgence

putrid rascal was a real truant
and also a junkie
and a somnambulist too
and wicked gourmet bought a new guillotine

then the rascal walked dizzily 
like a mechanic dancer
around the cinnamon circle
right under the scythe
and underwent a severance

the staggering truth was quite vague

then a postwar prelude under the lurid sky
piccolo semitone
sacrament
orchids
silhouettes on a merry-go-round

the jetty broke up
and a castaway went away
right before dawning
beforethe  stellar equinox
but journey was a humdrum
with nautical nausea
just a medley of flukes

so we hit the road
on the roof of a magic bus
not just figurative
really peculiar
and finally let behind
all the cold sensations

a marble queen visits
with a priest with no faith
and start gentle mutiny

the celestial journey
is over at ten p.m.
and all we got left
is a sobering lethargy


Premium Member In Silent Gazing

We stand in voiceless fixity and gaze
Upon veined stone carved of silent faces
He seems but weightless in lamented arms
But oh!  Their grief too heavy to bear
For see how even ourselves are shown as living
Only by each gasping breath we take

And out of the chill of marbled sorrow 
Not a stir is heard
Let us stand long with eyes wide to remember
How precarious our world
While so carefully they cradle Him
Speak of it, we cannot

Far more wise
To stand in voiceless fixity and see
How fragile our world is spinning
Dizzily into emptiness, if be not changeable..
For earth and we must alter.
What has been witnessed here in polished stone
Has made the air too thin to speak these words....

"He died upon the cross"

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Inspired by Michelangelo's Statue..."The Deposition"
Form: Ekphrasis

Premium Member Text Minus X

Anxiously anticipating annual activity

Blissfully bound by bravado

Consuming cold contagious concoction

Dizzily developed devilish desire

Eagerly expecting ego's enlightenment

Feverishly foraged familiar fraternity

Garnished gowns graciously gathered

Hopeful heralded hithered happenstance

Instantly intimated identical ideologies

Jointly jousted jovial juxtaposition

Kaleidoscopic keepsake kept kinetic

Longing languid lustful longitude

Miraculous marvelous momentous movement

Nursing nocturnal natal namesake

Observing others obstinate opinions

Preparing precious paternal post

Quickly quietly questing quarters

Radiant reared remained rambunctious

Stifled stern stayed sturdy

Transmitting tantalizing topical teachings

Understanding umbrage utilizing unity

Vital vibrant visceral visions

Watchful wonderful whimsical wishes

Yonder yearning youthful years

Zanily zigzagged zesty zenith

Premium Member Tsk Tsk, Task Nearly Thwarted

Mary Lou Sims was young and enterprising, like stars routing dark;
Or mauve dawn on the verge of discovery, awaiting time's remarks.

Mary Lou's best friend was Cora Mann, ever since sweet childhood;
When they'd sat in zesty school together, in the town of 'Wildwood.'

They dreamed of opening an antique shop, like an old rose garden;
Awash in butterscotch sun's long memory, scents roaming, wanton.

Other friends visited Mary Lou frequently, like frilly clouds visit sun;
Avid for frothy, plum memories, like formal moon, beyond the fallen.

Family favored Mary Lou with visits, on flowering Fridays of her life;
As raspberry filled a backdrop of days, and plumed flocks were rife.

She lived in the house of tasks and haste, like pink stars, ever shining;
Or butterflies laboring in flowers, near the place of wisteria, climbing.

Striped scarlet seized colorful dawn, on a street of transient starlings;
Where sassy Mary Lou resided, when ravens spread their dark wings..

And neon hues lit noisy nightfall, when nomad neighbors came calling;
In now moments of now and then, when time notably, stops crawling.

'Elephant foot' plants shook earth, while swan flowers glided, moonlit.
Then 'mermaid plants' dove at dusk, as weeping begonias cried a bit.

'Sorceress blue rose' bewitched all, as jade spiral cacti dizzily twirled;
And 'curly locks orchid,' combed her tresses, under starlight, pearled.

Mary Lou and Cora, were closer to their dream. A loan was approved;
And Mary Lou wrote a note to friend, Cora, like colors of joy, suffused.

Mary Lou gathered other letters to be mailed, and also the one to Cora, 
With joyful news of the rest of their lives, like mulberry skies of aurora.

She toted and mailed the letters, using a basket, of yellow and green;
Yet, with no word from Cora, worried she was having doubts. Unseen!

But, elation returned when a boy rang her bell, with the letter she'd lost,
For, some acts of kindness are so great, that you could not place a cost!

'A-tisket a-tasket
A green and yellow basket
I wrote a letter to my friend
And on the way I dropped it,
I dropped it, I dropped it,
And on the way I dropped it.
A little boy he picked it up
And put it in his pocket.'
Form: Couplet

Premium Member Mr Strood

Mr Strood

The high room, the bright light, the plentiful mirrors
the long sweep of lace curtains, the many faces..

She wondered whether music lessons were part
 of her dreadful experiences
of playing before people.  The very first time
she had played-  a little running melody in the treble..
a page of minims, the minims had swollen
until she could not see whether they were lines or spaces,
her fingers had been so weak 
after the first unexpectedly loud note
that her fingers  suddenly stiffened
she worked them from her elbows like sticks-
dreadful movements -  She heard nothing but
hard loud minims to the end,

As she stood, dizzily up, someone
said she had a nice touch-the piano should always remember
 the clear pieces by heart-
through trembling fingers the notes
 fumbled and slurred into each other.

At musical evenings she had both played and sung,
 each time afresh to the effects which came
 so easily when she was alone,
 but she could not discover the secret of
when she had been
 too miserable to be nervous

 and Mr Strood, astonished, listening,
 thrilled to her from behind the piano


Suzanne Delaney



Found Poem
Pointed Roofs
 by Dorothy Miller Richardson

Premium Member To which image should we cling?

Trailing clouds of glory do we come
The magical moments of childhood
When we felt at one with the universe
Spinning dizzily with delight

Or with more of horrible and awful
That even to name is sorrowful
Bound helplessly with flu in bed 
Unable from the pillow  to raise my head
And wishing the world would just go away
Paralysed by the loss of power to move

Maybe it is not so much
The image to which we should cling
Rather that the images should  cling
To us
Providing our distinct identities
The yardstick of our recollections
The holding of our first born close
Those bedtime stories where
The kids cling on to every word

Just before into euphoric sleep they drift
When we slip softly from the room
Switching off the bedroom light
With their  minds now deep in dreams bright

Choosing one image is far beyond me
I much prefer the whole family tree.

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