In Silent Gazing

We stand in voiceless fixity and gaze
Upon veined stone carved of silent faces
He seems but weightless in lamented arms
But oh!  Their grief too heavy to bear
For see how even ourselves are shown as living
Only by each gasping breath we take

And out of the chill of marbled sorrow 
Not a stir is heard
Let us stand long with eyes wide to remember
How precarious our world
While so carefully they cradle Him
Speak of it, we cannot

Far more wise
To stand in voiceless fixity and see
How fragile our world is spinning
Dizzily into emptiness, if be not changeable..
For earth and we must alter.
What has been witnessed here in polished stone
Has made the air too thin to speak these words....

"He died upon the cross"

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Inspired by Michelangelo's Statue..."The Deposition"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Haick Avatar
December 21, 2009 at 8:47 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's "The Deposition" Contest, Carrie! Great job! Peace and love, Audrey
George   Avatar
December 19, 2009 at 1:46 PM
Carrie, This is beautiful! Congratulations on your win. So well deserved. Love, Lainie
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December 19, 2009 at 8:28 AM
Indeed. How beautifully written. Congrats on your success in Raul's contest. Merry Christmas, Caroline.
Strand Avatar
December 19, 2009 at 8:14 AM
Congrats on your success in Raul's contest Carrie.Rgds Brian
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December 19, 2009 at 7:59 AM
Congrats Carrie on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. well deserved win for an excellent entry... blessings... luv.. thankxxx for your gracious comments on my poetry also... Linda-Marie..
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December 19, 2009 at 4:55 AM
Many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest Carrie, Merry Christmas >> James
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December 19, 2009 at 3:04 AM
Carrie, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul
Goff Avatar
December 13, 2009 at 5:40 PM
this fine poem has weight to it... by that I mean....great depth of understanding the human condition, wow! Carrie! love it! jim
Thomas Avatar
December 8, 2009 at 3:26 PM
Incredibly beautiful, Carrie! The last part especially gave me goosebumps, and I just can't keep from rereading it. Good luck in the contest, and thank you so very much for your kind words on my entry! ~Juliane
George   Avatar
December 7, 2009 at 11:36 AM
Wow! Is all I can say, Carrie. What remarkable writing. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Lainie
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December 5, 2009 at 11:49 PM
Best wishes with this one Carrie & thanks for your welcome blog comments today.Rgds Brian
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December 5, 2009 at 1:26 PM
oh great, beautiful poem it describes the sculpture perfectly!
Brown Avatar
December 4, 2009 at 8:43 AM
I have enjoyed reading your poetry today Carrie. Have a wonderful weekend filled with love and compassion for others. Inspiration is waiting for you grab it and write. Wihing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
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December 4, 2009 at 8:32 AM
I was mesmerized by this write, Carrie! Excellent description of a spiritual event that changed the fate of mankind. Best wishes for luck in the contest! Love, Carolyn
Owens Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 6:55 PM
This is beautiful Carrie...Enjoyed...Good luck in the contest...Marty
Goff Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 6:43 PM
tremendously powerful! wow! Carrie! amazing write!... thanks for your comments! and yes! Jax Cafe is one of my favorites! a long-standing institution in Minneapolis, with a delightful patio trout-pond in the summer! and the best steaks in town! (they even inscribe matchbook covers with the name of your party's host!) I always take out-of-town guests there! love, jimbo
Lopez Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 6:15 PM
Your pen is sharp as ever, carving out master works one after another... continually impressed! great job Mrs. Richards
Sweetheart Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 5:47 PM
Poignant piece of precious poetry, Carrie, and good luck in Raul's contest... my entry is entitled "Manifesto".. first try at this new form of poetry.. hope I did ok .. u have truly inspired me with this submission.. its truly a winner already... blessings ... luv.. Linda-Marie .. "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup
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December 3, 2009 at 4:49 PM
very very good. you're in with a great chance of winning.
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December 3, 2009 at 3:32 PM
You touched my heart and soul Carrie,indeed you did my friend--Charma
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