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In Silent Gazing

We stand in voiceless fixity and gaze Upon veined stone carved of silent faces He seems but weightless in lamented arms But oh! Their grief too heavy to bear For see how even ourselves are shown as living Only by each gasping breath we take And out of the chill of marbled sorrow Not a stir is heard Let us stand long with eyes wide to remember How precarious our world While so carefully they cradle Him Speak of it, we cannot Far more wise To stand in voiceless fixity and see How fragile our world is spinning Dizzily into emptiness, if be not changeable.. For earth and we must alter. What has been witnessed here in polished stone Has made the air too thin to speak these words.... "He died upon the cross" _____________________________________________________________ Inspired by Michelangelo's Statue..."The Deposition"

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Date: 12/21/2009 8:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's "The Deposition" Contest, Carrie! Great job! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 12/19/2009 1:46:00 PM
Carrie, This is beautiful! Congratulations on your win. So well deserved. Love, Lainie
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Date: 12/19/2009 8:28:00 AM
Indeed. How beautifully written. Congrats on your success in Raul's contest. Merry Christmas, Caroline.
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Date: 12/19/2009 8:14:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Raul's contest Carrie.Rgds Brian
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Date: 12/19/2009 7:59:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. well deserved win for an excellent entry... blessings... luv.. thankxxx for your gracious comments on my poetry also... Linda-Marie..
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Date: 12/19/2009 4:55:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest Carrie, Merry Christmas >> James
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Date: 12/19/2009 3:04:00 AM
Carrie, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul
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Date: 12/13/2009 5:40:00 PM
this fine poem has weight to it... by that I mean....great depth of understanding the human condition, wow! Carrie! love it! jim
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Date: 12/8/2009 3:26:00 PM
Incredibly beautiful, Carrie! The last part especially gave me goosebumps, and I just can't keep from rereading it. Good luck in the contest, and thank you so very much for your kind words on my entry! ~Juliane
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Date: 12/7/2009 11:36:00 AM
Wow! Is all I can say, Carrie. What remarkable writing. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Lainie
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Date: 12/5/2009 11:49:00 PM
Best wishes with this one Carrie & thanks for your welcome blog comments today.Rgds Brian
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Date: 12/5/2009 1:26:00 PM
oh great, beautiful poem it describes the sculpture perfectly!
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Date: 12/4/2009 8:43:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your poetry today Carrie. Have a wonderful weekend filled with love and compassion for others. Inspiration is waiting for you grab it and write. Wihing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/4/2009 8:32:00 AM
I was mesmerized by this write, Carrie! Excellent description of a spiritual event that changed the fate of mankind. Best wishes for luck in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/3/2009 6:55:00 PM
This is beautiful Carrie...Enjoyed...Good luck in the contest...Marty
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Date: 12/3/2009 6:43:00 PM
tremendously powerful! wow! Carrie! amazing write!... thanks for your comments! and yes! Jax Cafe is one of my favorites! a long-standing institution in Minneapolis, with a delightful patio trout-pond in the summer! and the best steaks in town! (they even inscribe matchbook covers with the name of your party's host!) I always take out-of-town guests there! love, jimbo
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Date: 12/3/2009 6:15:00 PM
Your pen is sharp as ever, carving out master works one after another... continually impressed! great job Mrs. Richards
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Date: 12/3/2009 5:47:00 PM
Poignant piece of precious poetry, Carrie, and good luck in Raul's contest... my entry is entitled "Manifesto".. first try at this new form of poetry.. hope I did ok .. u have truly inspired me with this submission.. its truly a winner already... blessings ... luv.. Linda-Marie .. "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup
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Date: 12/3/2009 4:49:00 PM
very very good. you're in with a great chance of winning.
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Date: 12/3/2009 3:32:00 PM
You touched my heart and soul Carrie,indeed you did my friend--Charma
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