In Silent Gazing

We stand in voiceless fixity and gaze
Upon veined stone carved of silent faces
He seems but weightless in lamented arms
But oh!  Their grief too heavy to bear
For see how even ourselves are shown as living
Only by each gasping breath we take

And out of the chill of marbled sorrow 
Not a stir is heard
Let us stand long with eyes wide to remember
How precarious our world
While so carefully they cradle Him
Speak of it, we cannot

Far more wise
To stand in voiceless fixity and see
How fragile our world is spinning
Dizzily into emptiness, if be not changeable..
For earth and we must alter.
What has been witnessed here in polished stone
Has made the air too thin to speak these words....

"He died upon the cross"

_____________________________________________________________
Inspired by Michelangelo's Statue..."The Deposition"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 12/21/2009 8:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's "The Deposition" Contest, Carrie! Great job! Peace and love, Audrey
Login to Reply
Date: 12/19/2009 1:46:00 PM
Carrie, This is beautiful! Congratulations on your win. So well deserved. Love, Lainie
Login to Reply
Date: 12/19/2009 8:28:00 AM
Indeed. How beautifully written. Congrats on your success in Raul's contest. Merry Christmas, Caroline.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/19/2009 8:14:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Raul's contest Carrie.Rgds Brian
Login to Reply
Date: 12/19/2009 7:59:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. well deserved win for an excellent entry... blessings... luv.. thankxxx for your gracious comments on my poetry also... Linda-Marie..
Login to Reply
Date: 12/19/2009 4:55:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest Carrie, Merry Christmas >> James
Login to Reply
Date: 12/19/2009 3:04:00 AM
Carrie, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul
Login to Reply
Date: 12/13/2009 5:40:00 PM
this fine poem has weight to it... by that I mean....great depth of understanding the human condition, wow! Carrie! love it! jim
Login to Reply
Date: 12/8/2009 3:26:00 PM
Incredibly beautiful, Carrie! The last part especially gave me goosebumps, and I just can't keep from rereading it. Good luck in the contest, and thank you so very much for your kind words on my entry! ~Juliane
Login to Reply
Date: 12/7/2009 11:36:00 AM
Wow! Is all I can say, Carrie. What remarkable writing. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Lainie
Login to Reply
Date: 12/5/2009 11:49:00 PM
Best wishes with this one Carrie & thanks for your welcome blog comments today.Rgds Brian
Login to Reply
Date: 12/5/2009 1:26:00 PM
oh great, beautiful poem it describes the sculpture perfectly!
Login to Reply
Date: 12/4/2009 8:43:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your poetry today Carrie. Have a wonderful weekend filled with love and compassion for others. Inspiration is waiting for you grab it and write. Wihing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 12/4/2009 8:32:00 AM
I was mesmerized by this write, Carrie! Excellent description of a spiritual event that changed the fate of mankind. Best wishes for luck in the contest! Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 12/3/2009 6:55:00 PM
This is beautiful Carrie...Enjoyed...Good luck in the contest...Marty
Login to Reply
Date: 12/3/2009 6:43:00 PM
tremendously powerful! wow! Carrie! amazing write!... thanks for your comments! and yes! Jax Cafe is one of my favorites! a long-standing institution in Minneapolis, with a delightful patio trout-pond in the summer! and the best steaks in town! (they even inscribe matchbook covers with the name of your party's host!) I always take out-of-town guests there! love, jimbo
Login to Reply
Date: 12/3/2009 6:15:00 PM
Your pen is sharp as ever, carving out master works one after another... continually impressed! great job Mrs. Richards
Login to Reply
Date: 12/3/2009 5:47:00 PM
Poignant piece of precious poetry, Carrie, and good luck in Raul's contest... my entry is entitled "Manifesto".. first try at this new form of poetry.. hope I did ok .. u have truly inspired me with this submission.. its truly a winner already... blessings ... luv.. Linda-Marie .. "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup
Login to Reply
Date: 12/3/2009 4:49:00 PM
very very good. you're in with a great chance of winning.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/3/2009 3:32:00 PM
You touched my heart and soul Carrie,indeed you did my friend--Charma
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter