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Tsk Tsk, Task Nearly Thwarted

Mary Lou Sims was young and enterprising, like stars routing dark; Or mauve dawn on the verge of discovery, awaiting time's remarks. Mary Lou's best friend was Cora Mann, ever since sweet childhood; When they'd sat in zesty school together, in the town of 'Wildwood.' They dreamed of opening an antique shop, like an old rose garden; Awash in butterscotch sun's long memory, scents roaming, wanton. Other friends visited Mary Lou frequently, like frilly clouds visit sun; Avid for frothy, plum memories, like formal moon, beyond the fallen. Family favored Mary Lou with visits, on flowering Fridays of her life; As raspberry filled a backdrop of days, and plumed flocks were rife. She lived in the house of tasks and haste, like pink stars, ever shining; Or butterflies laboring in flowers, near the place of wisteria, climbing. Striped scarlet seized colorful dawn, on a street of transient starlings; Where sassy Mary Lou resided, when ravens spread their dark wings.. And neon hues lit noisy nightfall, when nomad neighbors came calling; In now moments of now and then, when time notably, stops crawling. 'Elephant foot' plants shook earth, while swan flowers glided, moonlit. Then 'mermaid plants' dove at dusk, as weeping begonias cried a bit. 'Sorceress blue rose' bewitched all, as jade spiral cacti dizzily twirled; And 'curly locks orchid,' combed her tresses, under starlight, pearled. Mary Lou and Cora, were closer to their dream. A loan was approved; And Mary Lou wrote a note to friend, Cora, like colors of joy, suffused. Mary Lou gathered other letters to be mailed, and also the one to Cora, With joyful news of the rest of their lives, like mulberry skies of aurora. She toted and mailed the letters, using a basket, of yellow and green; Yet, with no word from Cora, worried she was having doubts. Unseen! But, elation returned when a boy rang her bell, with the letter she'd lost, For, some acts of kindness are so great, that you could not place a cost! 'A-tisket a-tasket A green and yellow basket I wrote a letter to my friend And on the way I dropped it, I dropped it, I dropped it, And on the way I dropped it. A little boy he picked it up And put it in his pocket.'
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Godwin Avatar
February 7, 2025 at 3:16 PM
I enjoyed my time with all the lines composing your story. I'm sure I'll visit again. I don't think I've ever read you before today. Maybe you joined while I was absent. Anyway, I've found you so, memory willing, I'll visit again ... CayCay
Buehler Avatar
February 7, 2025 at 9:37 PM
It's very nice to meet you, CayCay. Thank you for your lovely, joy inspiring remarks. I've been a member since 2019. Blessings and hugs.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 1, 2025 at 9:45 AM
I enjoyed reading your creative write/story. Never know what one may find in a basket. Fun Picture... Have a fun day as you write away..................
Buehler Avatar
February 2, 2025 at 5:35 PM
I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this story, Paula.Thank you for sharing your kind thoughts. I hope your week is nice. :)
Tor Avatar
January 29, 2025 at 6:26 PM
Your story is creative, inventive and wonderful to read Evelyn as always you have a unique style to implement and share this is no exception. You have become quite the story teller improvising on popular titles. Thank you for sharing always a pleasure to read...Blessings...
Buehler Avatar
February 2, 2025 at 5:31 PM
Thank you so much for your very valued comments, my friend. Your words are inspiring. I hope you enjoy the coming week. Blessings.
Rodgers Avatar
January 29, 2025 at 6:16 AM
Dear Evelyn, your storytelling and imagery are simply enchanting. Each line feels like a scene from a forgotten era, capturing nostalgia, dreams, and life’s gentle flow. The beauty in your language is timeless. Loved Reading! Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Buehler Avatar
January 29, 2025 at 4:11 PM
Dear Daniel, your wonderful compliments touched my heart with joy. Thank you so much for taking the time to brighten my day. Kindest regards, dear friend, Evelyn
Empress Avatar
January 29, 2025 at 4:00 AM
How picturesque and artistic is the way you do storytelling! I absolutely loved reading this, and the way youv used colors to elements in nature such as also butterflies and more is truly such a delight to read! I love how you always end these, in such a rhythmic and melodious manner fitting for the theme of the write! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always
Buehler Avatar
January 29, 2025 at 4:06 PM
Your lovely compliments bring lingering smiles, Ink, Thank you very much for your inspiriting response. My very best wishes, Evelyn
Buhagiar Avatar
January 26, 2025 at 11:03 PM
You always come up with something surprising. I also love your style, which is floral abounds. Great couplets.
Buehler Avatar
January 27, 2025 at 5:50 PM
Your words gladden me, Victor. Thank you so much.
Rolland Avatar
January 24, 2025 at 7:53 PM
so creative poetry, losing a letter can have great consequences, i am always afraid about, thanks for the interesting and special story, enjoyed
Buehler Avatar
January 25, 2025 at 7:17 PM
Thank you for sharing your lovely thoughts, Yann. They inspire and delight. Best wishes. :)
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