Champagne Light

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watch clouds dizzily dreamy in champagne light, watch with nostalgic wistfulness the Canada geese returning to balmy retreat a graceful gripping formation! watch clouds dizzily dreamy in mauve! butterflies seductively caress incandescent flowers ... under luminous horizon robin enticingly singing, watch clouds dizzily dreamy in rosy summer bidding farewell ! paths are strewn with puce, tangerine ~ red, orange leaves...swirling, twirling, hint of autumn in crispy breeze - watch clouds dizzily dreamy in! August 11, 2022 8 syllables in every line - checked by HMS.com For “Hint Of Autumn” Poetry contest Sponsor: Regina McIntosh

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Bill Baker

Date: 8/12/2022 1:33:00 PM

I enjoyed the imagery and colorful descriptions in this fine entry for the contest, Mala. Good Luck! A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/11/2022 5:31:00 PM

I can get lost in the beauty of your colors, and y our talented pen Mala, lovely poem, Thank you for sharing a soft part of my poetic evening

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/11/2022 6:02:00 PM

Thank you, Dear Rose. You are as soft as a flower, that's why, I believe, your evening is always poetic. Love and blessings, Dear Friend ~ Mala