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Countdown To Clone Day, Rubbish Writing

Granules of recollection rub like salt 
Flailing in the fog of seven years ago
Deafened by incessant frog cries
Vines dangling began attaching to each other 
Drying river stagnated, slime slippery with algae 
Vigorous tree growth stooped in defeat
Muddy river banks fixed my feet, prisoners
Quick sand sapped my energy, ate my memories 

Spears of bygone javelin my lungs, make gasp
Emerging from the mist of six years ago
Mountain side incredibly steep left me breathless
Static crinkle hissed between my eardrums 
Channels flip changed without my inference 
Hard luck hollowing trunks of high altitude 
Offered to swallow my past, kindly include present

Flattened cushions of childhood fights , bring distance
Spinning cartwheels into oblivion of five years ago
Faintly flickering home movies startle between grins 
Marbled images depict how we were, junctions punctured
Paths deviated, split decisions, moments distilled
Bottles broken, options poured, down the sink

Faltering swell glimmers foaming overdrawn fantasies
Slices rewound reflect fleeting of four years ago
Head barely above, awash in nonsense, victim of tides
Pushed under and pulled above, or is it more apt 
the other way 'round, heavy, ocean surrounds drowns

Pencil case zipper obediently conceals, shoved down
Fragmented fragrant shavings of three years ago 
Greyed erasers took too much, left the wrong stuff
Coloured stubs refuse to function, shrink upon prompting

Mirror tells me glamour remains against toughest test
High eyebrows, pristine lip lustre of two years ago 
Marilyn wink in the blink of camera, busy filtering truth

Tree hugging  Boho took over, appealed to populus ideal 
Cocaine sand between toasted toes, garland encircling forehead

Currently I'm languishing in roses

bestowed by crown of thorns
    
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Premium Member Finding Marbles

Strewn to the floor he collected his marbles and memories

Had played for hours as a child with his friends in the flat

Passed innumerable hours never bored always enthralled

Abraded by wear of near instant replay nostalgia flashes past
	
          A time of Innocence and Recall of pure Joy

Collecting from lucky packets from the five and dime store

He cherished his treasures and assembled a wealth of its own

Built a shiny smooth fortune traded with his mates from next door

Never lost sight of his satchel clinking and clonking at every stride

          Foundations of Wealth and Possessions

They only had a small space on the floor boards smelling of wax

Polished the wood and their skills on their knees with great care

Rolled the little balls one at a time to get the closest to the wall

Practised side spins straight lines curve balls ingenious bounce

          Perfection and Victory held their suspense

But the little buggers appeared to have a devious thrall of their own

Fell into knotholes swerved back to where they had come from

Ricocheted recoiled or stayed idle deviated from inglorious norms

Some disappeared in the pantry just in time for a substandard deviation

          Snookered in unintended Diversity

Today he respects outliers and dispersion from a delusive tendency

Cherishes and embraces people and places and different paradigms

Which include eccentricity oddballs and nonconformist dissidents

Finds beauty in a spread of reasons emotions and different drifts
	
         When Loneliness strikes he looks fondly at his Marbles 

28th June 2019

Premium Member Chewing the Fat

Narratives or at least that's what I call them
Without doubt win hands down every time
I've deviated with limericks and couplets and stuff
But I'm back to the old poems that rhyme

Very similar to when we go away on vacation
It feels so good to finally get back home
Everytime we deviat from our regular patterns
Though we enjoy it a bunch when we roam

Guess it's familiarity that we're always craving
Friendly faces of the people we know
No hidden agendas, no scams to contend with
Just the same old routine, same old show

Comfortable is a very good word to describe it
That down home feeling when with friends
Like always being in style with jeans and Adidas
Instead of trying to keep up with the trends

Give me that plain old simple way of living
It surely wins hands down ever time
That's how I roll, I'm just a simple old hayseed
Sitting around chewing the fat is just fine
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member The Best of Friends

All my life I longed for you.
You filled my thoughts and dreams.
You'd stand majestic, head held high,
My mind's eye saw the gleam,

Of vibrant health, unbounded strength,
That shone from a glistening coat,
The look of eagles in your eye,
As you moved you seemed to float,

Like the billowing clouds that float across,
The azure sky above.
When I'm with you I too can fly,
I soar on wings of love.

We glide across the meadow,
Beneath the sun lit sky,
We are the best of fellows,
My dog, my horse and I.



I believe God had many reasons for giving us the animals and if we try we can figure out what those reasons are.
For one thing, I believe the first and foremost reason was to TEACH US.
Have you ever noticed they have remained just as He created them?
They never deviated from the original plan.
We, However, have done our level best to IMPROVE on PERFECTION; and we have poisoned the environment and nearly destroyed the entire planet in the attempt.
What is more loyal than a dog?
Animals have shown more self sacrificing  loyalty and courage in the face of danger than we ever dreamed of. They love completely and will willingly sacrifice themselves for our good. How many of us will do that for them? In fact we laugh at those who will.
We KEEP them as long as it is convenient and then cast them aside without a thought for their love or well being or how much heart break they suffer for our uncaring treatment of them. We don't try to understand them at all; but we expect them to understand us. If we are so much smarter than them, how come we have never learned any of this from them? Could it be that we are so selfish and concerned for our own comfort that nothing else matters much to us?
The love we receive from our animals is completely unconditional.
The love they receive from us HAS IT'S LIMITS.
We should give that some serious thought.
© Judy Ball  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Quatrain

Premium Member Chewing the Fat

Narratives or at least that's what I call them
Without doubt win hands down every time
I've deviated with limericks and couplets and stuff
But I'm back to the old poems that rhyme

Very similar to when we go away on vacation
It feels so good to finally get back home
Everytime we deviat from our regular patterns
Though we enjoy it a bunch when we roam

Guess it's familiarity that we're always craving
Friendly faces of the people we know
No hidden agendas, no scams to contend with
Just the same old routine, same old show

Comfortable is a very good word to describe it
That down home feeling when with friends
Like always being in style with jeans and Adidas
Instead of trying to keep up with the trends

Give me that plain old simple way of living
It surely wins hands down ever time
That's how I roll, I'm just a simple old hayseed
Sitting around chewing the fat is just fine
Form: Rhyme


Premium Member The First Time Wetsuit

She cuddled in a signature pose
That resembled the 'one-hug' position
Arms wrapped around her disoriented and confused body
Pulling her skin covered torso into the black sheath
To her demise and surprise
Her situation was on the path to corrosion
Her shape was forced to contort and align
In ways she never thought of 
The set of legs seemed not to attach
To the position juxtaposed to the malformed uneven arms
One longer than the other?
Squeezing her entire self into this rubber encasement
She was exasperated and running out of enthusiasm
So she drifted to allow her subconscious thought
To believe she was some malformed figure of a seal
About to utilize its deviated, grotesque, twisted flippers
Before she entered the water it became a struggle
Just to simply walk in this captive suit to the oceans edge
Upon her arrival she found her surfing buddy
Laughing uncontrollably with loud cackles and chortles
That turned into a roar as he fell to his knees
As she asked for his help to close the zipper he said:
"Your right arm is in your left leg,
And your left leg is in your right arm!!"

And thus a true story of my first time surfing.


September 5, 2019
Ten Word Challenge 1 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by:  Kai Michael Neumann
Form: Narrative

Premium Member 911

911
By Franklin Price
09/11/2024

Three and twenty years ago
Terror rang its awful bell
In the midst of New York City
The great and tall twin towers fell

Slammed by hijacked liners
Deviated from their flight
Took our independent nation
From the day into the night

Thousands died there on that day
At the Pentagon we lost
A field in Pennsylvania
Also added to the cost

There was no nation there to fight
These were terrorists with dough
Billionaires had funded them 
What to do, we did not know

We went to war with countries
Targeted Iraq, Iran
To make it even better
We fought in Afghanistan

For over twenty years 
We sent our soldiers over there 
Many killed and wounded
And our fighting more than fair

 Since we did not fight the country
But the terrorists within
We could not hurt the population
To damage them would be a sin

There was no way to win the war
We finally pulled out everyone
The terrorists took over
Now its worse than when begun

We are protectors of the world
Have been since World War Two
Give of ourselves to everyone
We should try out something new

Trillions of dollars is our debt
From giving everything away
We borrow bucks from China
Who may own us one fine day

Communism and democracy
Capitalism one and all
The ones who have the money
Will cause the other ones to fall

We've donated to our allies
Just to keep them as a friend
While our own go cold and hungry
Which has come to no good end

The USA's our country
Home of the brave and free
A promise land for citizens
That's including you and me

We welcome here most anyone
Who contributes to our way
Terrorists and criminals
Cannot be added to the fray

Our borders need protecting
Not to let the bad ones here
There's a qualifying  process 
For rejecting when they're near

We all need to pull together
Or we'll lose this once great land
Nine Eleven is still with us
We must address it hand in hand
Form: Rhyme

The Devil Reveals

The mirror became clearer
the deception of her reflection
is just as she feared
displaying the monster
that haunts her
who taunts her 
who wants her
to inhale 
to impale
lifting her veil
adjusting her sail
expecting her to fail
he shows no restraint
as he attempts to taint the saint
aspiring to wash away the paint
of the beautiful landscape
causing a mutation
of the illustration
a new creation
a hallucination
the confusion
the illusion
causing delusion
by his intrusion
is just enough to amuse him

He tries taking control
of a beautiful soul
begging for worship
kneeling on hot coal
she fears no demon
for she lived with the devil
he was her alibi
she was his vessel.

She had deviated from his plan
didn’t agree to his demands
and so the day began
the horned feared beast
was no longer manned.
Form:

Premium Member Chewing the Fat

Narratives or at least that's what I call them

Without doubt win hands down every time

I've deviated with limericks and couplets and stuff

But I'm back to the old poems that rhyme

Very similar to when we go away on vacation

It feels so good to finally get back home

Every time we deviate from our regular patterns

Though we enjoy it a bunch when we roam

Guess it's familiarity that we're always craving

Friendly faces of the people we know

No hidden agendas, no scams to contend with

Just the same old routine, same old show

Comfortable is a very good word to describe it

That down home feeling when with friends

Like always being in style with jeans and Adidas

Instead of trying to keep up with the trends

Give me that plain old simple way of living

It surely wins hands down ever time

That's how I roll, I'm just a simple old hayseed

Sitting around chewing the fat is just fine


© Jack Ellison 2015
Form: Narrative

Premium Member I Love My Life

     I Love My Life


     I love my life , it’s only right.
     I struggle and have to fight.
     I have not deviated slight.
     As needed I work day and night.

     I choose my life in joy and rue.
     ‘Cause I can’t live your life for you.
    I’m decisive, hold my view.
    No way, I am to bid adieu.
    
     I wish to fly in open sky.
     Me, righteous, never to sigh.
     I’m satisfied feeling high !
     I’m strong minded and hate to cry.

     In my ship Me the only crew.
     Me lone fighter, really true.
      Own aim ! I always pursue.
     ‘Cause I found out just what to do.
Form: Rhyme

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