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Premium Member More than anything


When we sat at the picnic table for the first time,
it was a world of our own, without notice to activity around
Hours of talking, connecting, starting our mission
The sun couldn't shine brighter in the sky above us
The relief felt like the calm water in the lake nearby
So many connections with so much understanding
Most of all, we both had the same drive for justice
What were the odds we would meet after thirty years?
Back then, we were in the same place without knowing it
Here we were in the same place together now,
Truly remarkable from persistence in my pursuit for so long
We worked hard, we tried, we knew truth and believed
Then later, he went missing while I couldn't reach him daily
People thought I was over-reacting, I may not see him again
Then came the day, I heard the devastating news
He is dead, killed in a mission to help me and himself
He never reached retirement as a Lieutenant homicide detective
He deserved so much ahead of him and it was all gone!
The man who gave me more than anyone in my life...

Don't ask me why these endless memories ripple in my mind,
so many times through all of these years
When I see him again in heaven, I know what he will say...
                                     - I saw it all -

Heidi Sands

6/2/26

(C)opyright


Premium Member Can You Give That a Rest

I wake up screaming
Max the Axe has just chopped me into bits
It is not the first time
but this time I felt it.
I glare at my husband who is still clicking buttons.
Can you give that a rest? I ask.
He does not hear me.
He is in lahlah land
In video game world.
Being a detective
Solving crimes
Right and left.
He has no idea there is a real person in this room
For he is Sam Spade aka Humphry Bogart
Master detective with a Maltese Falcon
Who has not yet discovered Lauren Bacall
Living in the 60's
Over a bar in Los Angeles



Written:  April 19th, 2020    Poetry Contest: Strand Pick C, Any Theme
Sponsor:  Brian Strand                                                       Any Form

Premium Member The Detective Or Great Expectations Or Not

The spiral staircase made her high heels sing.
How happy she felt now that it was spring.
She smelled the bouquet of fragrant roses 
She would marry him; offer her posies.

Up she climbed the stairs to their hiding place,
Her face shining, lovely so full of grace.
The sleuth would ruin such a lovely face,
He knew well, her divorce was fine as lace.

From here the city churches pierced the mist.
Viewing the scene; anger he couldn't resist.
He had done his job; got all evidence,
She had money; a place of residence.

It was time to get paid and enjoy life
He had no thought of making her his wife.
Took his fee, opened the door, and watched her stare.
He closed it, and, now smiling, crossed the square. 

He'd disappear, went to another town
Found other women, but avoid renown.

10 syllables per line, hopefully.
Form: Couplet

Premium Member Movie Night

I love a good movie, I honestly do
I’d watch one alone and I’d watch one with you
Adventure or Western, perhaps a film noir,
A comedy suited to my Ma and Pa

I like a good Thriller, a detective drama
A tale of vendetta, of justice or Khama
I do enjoy Horror, I rather like gruesome 
And stories of outlaws or some wayward twosome

And thrill me with gunfights, a street brawl or two
A hideous death for the bad guy will do
I do love a story, exciting or fun
Not just an excuse for firing a gun

Okay, I confess that I like those films too
In which gangsters shoot up a hullabaloo
But the plot is the crux, it’s what makes my mind smile 
You can’t just have guns going off all the while 

It’s pouring outside and pretty damned cold
A night in with Netflix has gotten me sold
So let’s watch a movie; forget going out
Let’s sit down and see what ‘John Wicks’ is about

                                     *

Well, she’s gone to bed and I’m sat on my tod
Most of the cast are conversing with God
I have to confess that this shoot-em-up rave
Is gonna go down… as a personal fave!
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member The Duke

All your fans adored you for many years.
Great starring in roles brought both laughter and tears.
Seeing you up on the screen larger than life,
was glorious, and cut through me like a knife.
The movies you starred in were a plethora.
When with Claire Trevor or Maureen O’Hara,
you were one of Hollywood’s best leading men.
When I saw you on television again,
as a fighting cowboy in the old Wild West,
your acting was brilliant, and among the best.
In your war pictures, and in detective parts,
you were impressive, winning movie fans’ hearts.
Though you are now gone, we will remember you,
having  genuine acting talent so true.
Form: Rhyme


Premium Member Nineseventeenpm

As the second hand ticks away my breaths
a half-clad moon catches my eye.
Was a time when I might've seen
the ghost of half-eaten melon,
but I'm older now, my thoughts less spry.
Dark fear's hobgoblins
were long since relegated
to memory's chuckle drawer;
open windows to warm nights ease my mind.

I must shave and write.

Neither seem as pressing
as the once hormone-inducing prance
in distant starlight,
the hot exhalations of desert air.
Nor do creased page corners
to detective thrillers and t.v.'s prattle
beckon hours with purpose.
I'm the insouciant sentry
at castles in retirement,
the dragon minus annoying fire.
Crows no longer pick eyes of the dead
in picture frames on paneled walls.
My shoes don't guardedly tread 
engineered woods of perfection. 
Aging brings a basset hound,
graying around the nose,
laying placidly on the rug.

I'll get to tasks eventually.
For now I commune with the moon,
allowing my mind the idyll 
of a worn desk in a cluttered room
and the dulcet laze in lyrics of night birds 
serenading summer's first hours.

6/19/18

Premium Member Wood Tick

A tiny black wood tick
jumps from the tall grass onto
my ankle, past my sock, and 
Crawls up stealthily and silently
up my left leg. Luckily, 
my leg is super sensitive to its little feet.
The leg brain alerts the aware brain, and
I look down, spying her instantly.
I catch her on her way up, squash her
into the center of a tissue, 
and toss her into the garbage can.
I feel smug, that I got her before she 
could latch on, burying her head inside my skin.
I am the victor, here.
The champ.
The detective.
The one who did not get bit.
I wish my scalp
And my back
Were half as sensitive as my legs.
They have let me down time
and time again this summer,
allowing these annoying critters free reign
on their tasty free range.
And what help is my husband?
I don't LIKE wood ticks, he whines.
And he thinks I do?

Barking Madly at the Shore

Barking Madly at the Shore


The early morning wakes to find
the sun struggling above the horizon,
offering what warmth it can, 
to a shivering sweep of sky
that is blue with cold.

Below, the sea whispers secrets,
playfully licking at the shoreline
while litter starts to sprint the beach
and jigsaw pieces of cloud
slowly smudge-grey the sky.

Before long, the sea has gained
a mischievous glint in its watery eye
and is barking madly at the shore
as it sends waves to froth and foam
around a finger of lighthouse.

As the day ages, the sea rhythms on
while distant ships slip and slide by
and the occasional winged seagull,
like a torn piece of white paper,
is ripped from the scene.

Eventually as a distant hand
throws darkness all around,
the lighthouse can be seen
silvering the moonless sea;
a detective on its latest case.


Ian Souter
© Ian Souter  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member Sam Spade

“Give me the phone Effie.
I have to make a call.” 
She handed it over to me
and walked into the hall.

The inspector had no clues.
He asked for my two cents,
asked me to give him my views.
I didn’t; the call was intense.

The dame had come in
asking for my advice
two days ago and then
was arrested by Vice.

I had seen the smallish 
puncture, blood pooling,
and I wanted to abolish
the coroner’s ruling.

The wound was there,
but he missed the needle
lying next to the chair.
He tried to wheedle.

If I couldn’t get the cops
to do their job, I’d need
to pull out all stops
to find a hard lead.

For Gershon...with smiles

Inspired by, but not entered in, Natasha L Scragg’s Start Sleuthing Poetry Contest
Form: Rhyme

Life In Colored Phases

Life is a phase
Full of energy like my son's crayon
It open up in pages
Flipping through in no rhythm of colors
Our dreams are often in cage
Strings and tunes are in block colors
Yesterday paces up in phases
With a lot of good memory in black
Today is like a snail with no pace 
Hoping that this present peace will still be white
Tomorrow soars to the heaven in a chase
Life is then fine-tuned to a shade of colors
Just like a detective writer Hadley Chase
With a dance of colorless tune in sight
We have made for our generations a good case
Our dream is a like green with no fertility
Sometimes like rotten food, it get decayed
Yet we smile with our faces red in anger
Holding the future rainbow with the mace

Alayande Stephen T.
9.28pm
06/10/2016

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