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Premium Member The Blessing of the Right to Vote




 
                     Quote by Thomas Paine
“ I prefer peace! But if trouble must come, let it come 
   in my time, so that my children, can live in peace.”
                                    ~~~~~~~~


It really is up to us, to vote with a very clear mind.      
To vote to stop free speech is anything but kind!

To force a nation, to take unsafe vaccinations?
In our Republic, is purely, such mindless ruination.

Every legal citizen has a blessed right to vote.
Sneaking over borders, an illegal is no antidote.

America is a Republic not just a mere democracy.
And, yes, you can become rich, this is no aristocracy!

With guaranteed rights, we don’t live in anarchy      
It is up to you to prevent any evil slaveogracy.

Caring citizens do vote to put another in office..
Wrong choices are their fault~so be very cautious!

Every voter should take their own moral inventory!
Before casting excuses, and creating zany stories.

A sad scenario, if you boast that you don’t vote at all.
Don’t you know, you are contributing to the USA’s downfall?


@Panagiota Romios
8/25/2024
Form: Rhyme


Premium Member Loveliness

Listening to the laughter

Of babies and little children is

Virtually acoustic loveliness

Entirely in its purest form.

Laughter, real from-the-gut laughter,

Is an antidote to all

Negativity. Without

Exception, it stimulates a feeling of 

Serenity. I find myself also

Smiling. This gift is contagious and free.

++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

Written 2-18-2016
For 'Loveliness-Acrostic Contest' of John Hamilton
Fourth Place

CONTEST 425 , ANY FORM OR NONE, ANY THEME, UP TO A MAX OF 20 LINES'
By Brian Strand
N/A
Form: Acrostic

Premium Member A Tragic Tale, No More

*Written for an AP contest in which the theme was to write 
an alternate ending for a favorite book, poem etc.  


Shakespeare's quill gave Romeo and Juliet a tragic ending
but that's a sad love story I think needs a bit of mending.
Yes, he's the Bard, but quite frankly it broke my heart
to learn they both died needlessly. I hated that part.

In my rewritten dialogue between them, I'd find a way
to change their ill-fated future and have Juliet say,
"Romeo, it's only for you that my heart will ere yearn.
I will simply fake my death and when our families learn
that we've left Verona, we will be married... man and wife
and be together as we have planned, happy with life."

The messenger she sent to give Romeo the good news,
I'd replace with a more diligent one that I would choose.
I'd have made the couple more intelligent and shrewd,
perhaps put an end to the Montague and Capulet feud.
The tale of star-crossed lovers would end on a happy note,
without Juliet seeming to have died. No need for an antidote.

When Juliet says, "Romeo. Romeo. Wherefore art thou?"
He would come to her on the balcony, and he would vow...
"Juliet, I swear, never did my heart love until now.
For I never saw true beauty til this night,
and if perchance our families had forbidden us to wed,
from Verona we would've left. From Italy we would've fled."

*With apologies to Shakespeare, my edit I would offer,
not a penny nor one Euro would I take for my coffer.
Indulge me for just a moment for I'm a romantic at heart,
and dared alter the ending by not keeping the couple apart.
© Lin Lane  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Rhyme

Ashes In the Wind

Inside, I am the force of a radiant flow,
the energy by fuel in soft eternal glow.
I am the receiving embers sparked by you,
First, a stranger till the flames then grew.

Into a light shining at the touch of dawn,
By moonlight hue, to you my heart was drawn,
To a faraway Island so welcoming and warm,
First, I thought you wanted to do me harm.

Darkness charmed her weaving barren twirl,
With ancient spirit world clinging to my soul.
Voices come and go by the guardians of dreams, 
In the winds of enchantment and illusions. 

Then the morning glory overturn the gloom,
Like the heavenly rapture of mid-afternoon,
A romance with you in my happy journal wrote,
The passing of times had a special antidote.

With the lust, we dust though scarlet tinged,
And the thread of love began to come unhinged,
Rainy clouds arrived, and filled your eyes,
extinguishing bright hopes of twilight skies.

With the clones of night mute shadows fall,
and I had no strength to tear down the wall.
By midnight all the energy and light had fled
Leaving the warm ashes smouldering instead.

Beautiful and delicate scattered in the wind 
A flurry of kisses nestled anew in my mind.
With pains that ache, all things held its peace, 
Till the sting of loss found comfort release. 

You almost left me dead, as the ashes scatter 
and should your ghostly frame, again reappear,
I’ve vowed to surrender at length to the future 
The pool of memories intrinsically left over.

Premium Member Elegy for my late Uncle

  “Grief is like the ocean. The waves ebb and flow. Sometimes the water is calm. Other times it's turbulent. In order to survive, I had to learn to swim. In moments when I struggled with massive waves of grief, I rode it out.” 
Dana Arcuri  

When the pearl moon is sinking 
and the sea dreams in silence,  
when the skies reflect 
  the sunrise within sighs,  
I close my eyes and unlock 
  my grieving heart.  
There, your sincere smile glows
  like a string of golden pearls,  
and your song, an echoing melody,  
while jasmine rain croons 
into the mourning mists.  
And I whisper to the stars:
 show me what it's like in heaven,  
where angels and fairies 
sway to your vanilla laughter,  
for I am still healing from 
the shadows of your demise.

I remember, 
I was a teenage tempest 
dressed in crusts of raven,  
but you saw 
unicorns and butterflies
soaring above 
whirling waves of angst.  
and wove my darkness 
with acrylic glitter. 
You were the antidote 
  to my bleeding ink.  
you were the sakura spring
 among my tattered twigs,  
you watched me laugh 
into the gothic duskiness.

Somehow seeking fireflies 
within my summer maze,
did illuminate your weathered time, 
like rainbow roses, 
engrossed in emerald empathy.
You always knew the 
right phrase to rhyme,  
subtle syllables to 
write every wrong.  
You were my comfort 
on lonely days.
The uncle, I cherish, 
so young and charismatic…

Orchids in your 
orchard still sprout~
flaunting their colors 
in your mauve memory,   
and your seraphic aura lingers  
as the magnetic essence
      of eternal warmth.  
Now I am draped in 
  mementos and euphonious wind-chimes,
emanating the fragrance 
   of evergreen grass and soulful sunflowers. 
Someday, I will find my way
     to your empyrean home, 
        where you reside in poetry and affection…
Form: Elegy


Oh, Foolish Man

Oh, foolish man! I told you I'm not a clinger
  Don't grab my tail 'less you want to be bitten
    and if at me you keep pointing your finger
      I'll show you the contempt of an angry kitten

Be off with your horde and their petty assails
  or I vow to scratch the eyes of those with you
    whose fatty buttocks are blubbery like whales
      Your gaggle flings vile insults as you pursue.

My whiskers are trimmed and yours are scruffy
  You know what I mean when I spit and hiss?
    You're not insulting me when you call me Fluffy
      I'm an aristocratic feline. I only answer to Priss.

If you draw nearer, I'll swat you with my paws
  Keep your dirty hands off of my marmalade coat
    or I swear I'll scratch you with unsheathed claws
      For your insolence there should be an antidote!
Form: Rhyme

Rogue

9/6/21
"Rogue"


What a joke
Yet it's not a hoax
It's getting gross
Folks constantly at each other's throats
Quick to brag and boast
Making an out of pocket comment after another croaked
It's not all cloak and dagger, stay woke
From coast to coast
I took notes
And moved around like a ghost
At times I cut it close
And almost
Was toast
It's been difficult to cope
Addiction is a slippery slope
While walking a tightrope
Continually took a toke
And saw the smoke
Fly high beside a giant Oak
There's been no antidote
Yet another beer plus a Jack and Coke
For a long time been down bad and broke
Either I sunk or float
Remaining dry or soaked
Nope I didn't see, or I saw it through the scope

Happens in each and every zone
Humans always out to pick a bone
Obsessed with the throne
Fast to throw a stone
Don't come at me with that tone
Like you've gone down the same road
Yet you're just continuing to drone
And similar to all these other clones

Only if needed speaking in code
Intentionally went rogue
Otherwise from others my cover would've been blown

I should've known
It'd be like this even inside home
As well as all across the globe

In others hard to place trust
At times this world seems to be far from just
In and out of many ruts
I've been unscathed and got many cuts
Many fast to cuss
People causing a fuss
And to spill their guts
So that it throws another under the bus
Yup, I'll tell you what
I know this world can be nuts
There's no if ands or buts

Struggles and triumphs in life as well as with earning cash
One disconcerting fact
Learn that, there's no turning back
This all is hurting bad
And turning sad
Yet still all this disturbing crap
I thought for once it was one thing we were working past
Just kidding, since the dawn of time it's been determined that
Still we treat each other worse than trash
Often gunshots, getting burned or stabbed
Among all the curving paths
Form: Rhyme

This Cynic Doth Dispel His Own Kant

Alarming heart wrenching
     (stabbing non-abating
with genuine appall
     ling brutality) zing
across screen, or
     in print exacerbating
forcing, imposing viewer,
     and/or reader to revisit

     atavistic primal past activating
21st century *****sapien
     to experience (albeit vicariously)
     quotidian tragic news,
     which relentlessly doth wring
realistic sadness, sans psychic sting
     eventually admitting figurative 
     (sic) kill your hammer

     blows deaden public
     emotional trust, thwarting
the ability to feel,
     which subsequent empathy
     decreases to abba
     solute zero sensitivity,
     whereat comfortable numbskull state
     of mind turbo-charges,

     quickens, and nudges
callousness, via onslaught of killings,
     viz where plethora multi
     media platforms air
     (twenty four seven)
(far more horrible, reprehensible,
     unconscionable, et cetera
     egregious violence -

     splashed across front page, which
     grim stories lack shock value,
     and with flying blood red
     colors surpass fictionalized
     made for television macabre
     nuanced crime stories),
     way beyond the outer limits
     of the twilight zone of credulity

     visa vis not even discoverable
     tapping into the unimaginable realm,
     where dirty deeds
     done dirt cheap by
some contemptible person,
     who contemplates (premeditates)
deliberately inflicting 
     maximum human suffering

which ignominious atrocity
     (interestingly enough) affects
     a portion of the 
     population to wring
hands, while unbeknownst

     non relations (i.e. strangers) fling
arms around each other
     such as yours
     truly reckon eyes,
     the existence power of consolation
despite the lack oven available antidote.

Premium Member Romeo and Juliet- An Altered Ending

Shakespeare's quill gave Romeo and Juliet a tragic ending
but that's a sad love story I think needs a bit of mending.
Yes, he's the Bard, but quite frankly it broke my heart
to learn they both died needlessly. I hated that part.

In my rewritten dialogue between them, I'd find a way
to change their ill-fated future and have Juliet say,
"Romeo, it's only for you that my heart will ere yearn.
I will simply fake my death and when our families learn
that we've left Verona, we will be married... man and wife
and be together as we have planned, happy with life."

The messenger she sent to give Romeo the good news,
I'd replace with a more diligent one that I would choose.
I'd have made the couple more intelligent and shrewd,
perhaps put an end to the Montague and Capulet feud.
The tale of star-crossed lovers would end on a happy note,
without Juliet seeming to have died. No need for an antidote.

When Juliet says, "Romeo. Romeo. Wherefore art thou?"
He would come to her on the balcony, and he would vow...
"Juliet, I swear, never did my heart love until now.
For I never saw true beauty til this night,
and if perchance our families had forbidden us to wed,
from Verona we would've left. From Italy we would've fled.

With apologies to Shakespeare, my edit I would offer,
not a penny nor one Euro would I take for my coffer.
Indulge me for just a moment for I'm a romantic at heart,
and dared alter the ending by not keeping the couple apart.
© Lin Lane  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Rhyme

JUNGLE WALK

And, 
If our eye is not unto Him tilted upwards single
And here below are bowed to vanity entangle
Or else, unto another twisted mortal affixed
A surety inbound woe ever will ensue
The Word of His is a mirror indeed
And upon it should our eye never sway away
Till the full image of who we are is never opaque
Rather, crystal as a glass lay
Let afore reminisce travel past
Of the children of Israel matching to a land of promise
When afflictions arose due to their antagonistic defiance
The egotism, 
The intolerance 
A portray of the rocky heart in their bosom embraced dear
The defiance that engulfed their world view 
Tossing the entire idea of their innate need to be steered aright by Light eternal
Many serpents did sneer invade bite slay 
Then Musa the Prophet did inquire for their well-being
Vis-à-vis the inbound distress
It was that they should make a modest observation 
To behold a fashioned image of the serpent identical
That Moses had been instructed to craft
To place lay it ascended for ease in gaze
And that was the ideal antidote
Now, Christ is also upon the tree of Calvary boosted
A good a many conflict antagonistic waylay us slay
And often are almost overwhelmed throw in the towel
But are here admonished fasten our eye on Him 
As it were in the jungle slate
And on Him Christ our eye to stay 
For safety warranty.

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