Incompletely Poems | Examples


Moments with you

To be able to write you,
Was my pleasure,
To be able to make you,
My love story was,
    "unfortunate"

You are a story that was,
Left incompletely.
The unforgettable moments,
With you were,
My precious,
  "Memories"

The Precarious Exchange

The Precarious Exchange

I’m complete
Until myself, incompletely seen

I’m safe
Until safety, I redeem

I’m free
Until a prison, I esteem
Form: Rhyme


A Christian Writes

A Christian writes
  of Mary's agreement to the blessed flight
  when angels bowed before the blinding light.
A whisper soft and a promise
  as the changing times alarm us,
  fearful so that it could harm us.
A hope comes down to earth
  in the simplicity of an uncrowned Kingly birth
  precursor of our spiritual rebirth.
Would that the questions still rise
  with the inflection of doubting eyes
  that erase and sacrifice for all our lies.
Two thousand plus years pass
  and still we are incompletely cast
  with visions of our half empty glass.
Waxing philosophicl
  would that it appear most logical
  when faith is less methodical.
A Christian seeks the truth
  from Adam and Eve to Ruth
  in scrpiture of interpreted fruits.
God loves us, God does exist
 nothing is more sacred than this
 why resist Christ's birth in God's Kiss?
Simple and magnificent is my belief
 each of us steal Heaven like a thief
 satisfied that this life is short and brief.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member As You Say My Name

Within a moment's grace
She held my heartbeat against her gentle dialect

Her pearly smile and chocolate diamond retinas
Prescribed laughter, as she
Incompletely
Spoke my name

Vowels tripping against her nervous steps.

Her facial tone became tomato's rejected lyric.

My dignity, stunned.
My smile, overpowered.

She held me close to her digital breaths,
With apologies, unforced

There is a charm within her tender innocence.

A charm I may never physically discover. 

But,
Today,
This smile cowers

With a silent exhilaration

©Drake J. Eszes

The Quest

Forget everything. 
Forget all our dreams. 
Of children and marriage and life filled so meticulously. 
For once in this lifetime.
 I just want to be me.  

Forget all the passion 
All the love that we plead.
 Forget all the anger
 Forget all the zeal. 

Remember the heart
 That once used to beat.
 Not needing a battery 
To complete every feat.

 Remember the need 
To be more than you can conceive. 
Remember the want 
Remember the heat. 

Remember the greed 
To procure every stead.
 To walk in the park square. 
With your head 
Not facing your knees. 

Revive the action 
Revive thee please.  
Revive every emotion 
That once set you free.
 
Steady you stand 
No need or demand.
Speeding heart you recede.
 No barrier to compete. 

The fire rein stilled.
The love refilled. 
Words come so easily with a power 
That I had forgotten how to feel.

Do not restrain me 
Or refrain from thee.
 This love that once made thee
Shall never be regained. 
 
Love lost love found 
Love stolen and then gathered around.
 So arguably untainted 
So incompletely infatuated

BY
Amanda.M.Miller


Lost In Transaction

If only they can see what my eyes see

The pain of loosing all and never becoming free

Every year is different with pain that never stops.

Why can't they see what my eyes can really see

 

Everyday i see them but i don't think they see me

For i am reaching out but always left incompletely

My knees are swollen for praying that never stops

Why can't they see what my eyes can truly see

 

With a grin on my face and a kind voice to plea

Graceful lines but lost in a high tides sea

I'm alone now with pain that never stops

Why can't they see what my eyes revealed to me...

It Was the Breeze...

It was the breeze
That took me like a song
The lyrics were perfect
And I could hear the calmness
That whispered into my ear
Bringing a chill to my face
It was the breeze

It was the sea
Those waves that crashed
In blameless synchronization
Making my heart beat
To the familiar sound
Of the surrounding aqueous
It was the sea

It was the sun
The protecting coat
Warmth that brought me here
To this crowded solace
Incompletely to captivity
Discovery of life
It was the sun

It was the sand
Crawling relentlessly
As I poured the grains
Slowly through my grasp
Aggravation from my dampness
To the attached grains
It was the sand

It was the breeze
The brisk breath of earth
Calling only but softly
It sings the song of life
The ocean can bring
To the human race encompassing
It was the breeze

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