Hunches Poems | Examples

Jesse

dear tall child,

your bones probably don't fit your frame yet;
   they shift awkwardly,
and your spine hunches and slopes.

your hands are likely to be dry and grimy,
   legs speckled with ant bites
that sting like fire.


spending those arid days snatching lizards off the hot terracotta wall,

next to the withered rose garden belonging to your shouting mother.

unfortunately for you,

the shouting will never stop;
  your mother will bleed her vocal chords raw
trying to scare out your soul to place of her own.

there will be so much hardship,
  but you will learn so so much.

  so much.


to drown the world out,
 just think about horses.

she will see you as strange
 no matter what you do

just hop in the saddle
   tighten the reins, grip the mane,
put your filthy Velcro sneakers into the stirrups,

and think about horses.



you will be a weird girl, it will hurt.
 but suffering is just suffering,
and voices are just words.

you will become a strange young man, dear cowboy-

but you will always be that tall child.

a dear,
   
   dear tall child
Categories: hunches, child abuse, childhood, gender,
Form: Free verse

Before She Was a Mother

She misses the time before she was a mother,
the life she once had now hidden, under cover.
Before pasta and paint, and plastic packed lunches
replaced lie ins and coffees, and trusting her own hunches.
She yearns for washed hair and fresh eyes without lines,
but knows, deep down, it’s for him her heart pines.
Categories: hunches, age,
Form: Rhyme


Premium MemberConsciousness

Within the dark mystery of evening,
he listens to two interchangeable discourses 
One the gentle persuader, the other, life's ultimate blamer. 
Troubled by these seething exchanges, 
both conscious and unconscious currents resound,
As the master's inner thoughts boom,
pounding into  trails of indecision
with wired quizzes on his mind.

In silence, he weighs dark and light perspectives-
question left unanswered in the din
of reflection, 
and through gradual flow of spontaneous musings, 
Logic nags his cerebral strains-
scientific, structured assessment of matters which do not really matter...

Somehow, amid the debate where reason pauses with the fragile voice of instinct, the heart remains silent 
offering gentle hunches revealing the
wisdom born from honesty,  truth...

Slowly, this inner prompting arises 
as the master in quiet introspection 
realizes: the mind can lie , pride is ego- based ...but the heart,  can it in conscience cope with deceit?
Categories: hunches, integrity, introspection,
Form: Verse

Crave

Deep voice cradled with tender
Rough hands smoothing it better
The fears hunches my back, 
He arches it again with sweet words of wonder
When I doubt all I am 
He hugs my angels and my monsters
Reminds me of parts I have stop loving 
His calm eyes find my frightened 
So he lets me see the storm brewing within 
He is chaos reining in to wash my worries 
Burning passion with worship so deep 
In awe I am as I weep 
With joy and want and a thousand more things 
Like kisses on the blade of my shoulder 
To relax them for a moment 
Before the world jumps on it 
Or a silent confession of love 
From eyes that are afraid to hurt 
I relax like water finally meeting 
The golden bowl it dreamt of 
And let myself be the thirst 
That craves those little moments 
In a world full of grand ones.
Categories: hunches, care, devotion,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberYet I Cling Long Version

Blue
twinges
of lament
cast gaunt shadow
o’er my dreadful  pang
as a grim mist segued
into dark claustrophobic
cantons where rabid zeal of hearts
once smouldered from magma’s deep red vein
Yet I cling to golden dawn recall
of lazy strolls in lush green mead
wild sniff of purple heather
neath sun-drenched sky aflame
gusts of joy rippling
froth-rim brook waltz
now toilworn
gaudy
dream
Haze
born of
mellow flight
as hunches splay
across foamed pool morn
plop of jaspers echo 
icy shriek as chalk mark toe
dips into a whirlpool eddy
to soothe stark reflections so forlorn 
Those august palpitating heartbeats 
etched in vivid ripple canvass 
entwined that fleeting pearl drop 
bead keen ink glint token 
a pledge once fervent
now rose tinted 
phase on brink 
of times
lapsed
Categories: hunches, age, august, deep, feelings,
Form: Nonet


Premium MemberUpbeat Day Ahead

I hail each  bronze, red, and blue coloured dawn,

as pulsing heart  mould torch flame of bliss,

to gaze across some awestruck mint sprig lawn,

that golden birthright never goes amiss


Eye beam urban verve one duly savours,

coruscating joie de vivre street life,

bursts of swift dash coffee’s hazel flavours,

cell-phone upbeat  day ahead  hubbub  rife


Blue robin high pitch chirp from chimney top,

sets the tone for morning wonders brightly,

activate those spark prompt hunches nonstop,

schedules met in narrow windows tightly


In suburb or in  city centre fair,

skies and pavements segue with deft flourish,

your dreamland ticket ace broad daylight flair, 

groundbreaking spurt fantastic, let us nourish


Dynamic itch to stray amid blind alley,

lurk within some parboiled notion latent,

steel clad zone that mosaic sculpted tally,

animated focus me the claimant
Categories: hunches, birth, blessing, celebration, cheer
Form: Quatrain

Gone

He puffs in the nightly brume
His noctambulous proclivity
He calls it, a force of habit
Something automatic
Tonight is especially morbid
Atrabilious even
As he hunches gaunt
Over her headstone
That has grown verdant
Of many a night waxed lachrymose
The midnight wind is severe
A morbid creak fills his ears
He calls it his familiar
His body enervated
A chiliad of nights and tears
Have taken their toll
Gaunt from endless prayers
Then an icy apparition so clear
A familiar, sum of his fears,
Appears, standing in the midnight air
An icy depth and an icy glare his familiar
A formication forms in his chest
As usual no words exchanged
The wind blows the mist away
And soft rain begins to fall
And the owl begins to howl
She is gone, she is gone!
Categories: hunches, bereavement, men, mental health,
Form: Free verse

Hunches

My thoughts are mine, I cherish them
Unruly as they are
They freely keep me company
I keep my mind ajar
Too much are these sensations
These hunches, these ideas
Much wilder than the tempests
That heave the mighty seas
My thoughts come in like thunder
They blast in with quick pace
My mind is forced to take it in
And gives up all her space
And there she is, poor mind of mine
The torture is severe
But this time too she will endure
Until the air is clear.

Wendy Nipas
Categories: hunches, space, time,
Form: Ballad

The Dreamer Joseph In Boxing

You're throwing one set of punches
Barely acting on your hunches.
You can't be lucky with left hooks.
They'll, sure, connect them: Boxer Crooks:
Perhaps, then, stop to at you grin
Like Spinks had at Homes for  a win...

The point: stop launching lame attacks
Or you watch out as your skull cracks:
In Boxing, the Dreamer Joseph
Should questions ask starting with 'if ...?'
The Ring Business: Dangerous sport;
Killers rarely appeared in court...
Categories: hunches, conflict, money, sports, star,
Form: Rhyme

Journey

She is a beautiful girl
As she walks through the Valley of Trust
With her parents
At eleven

She becomes more graceful
As she sprints through the Grasslands of Independence
Without her parents due to a dispute
At twelve

She hunches her back
As she swims through the River of Sadness, fighting the current
Half of her trying to get back to shore, the other half surrendering
At thirteen

She is crumpled
As she floats into the Sea of Depression
Not even trying to get away
All alone
At fourteen

She is stronger than one thinks
As she gets into the Jungle of Uncertainty
Announcing her presence, willing to fight for what is right
At fifteen

She is scarred but stands tall
As she climbs the Mountain of Bravery
She is Alone but Doesn’t Care
At sixteen

Her name is America
And this is her journey
Categories: hunches, 10th grade, allegory,
Form: Free verse

Remember Only This

By the gloating rocks once its refuge,
The sun wallows in scarlet rages;
Glovers at the ticky-tacky cages,
Who feel naught of the coming deluge
From the lurching stream that knows no rest.

Each ripple is a Mont Blanc unsung
With snow-hunches grown out of dark grace,
The cragginess of each jagged face;
Burnt with the weight of burdens unflung,
More formidable than Everest

Blades of grass growing out of cement,
They ever knew passion, knew the pain
Of lorn oaths broken oft and again;
Thus Marianne from her Sherwood rent,
By the dripping of socks found her quest

As her sister shed a skin of ice,
And tucked it under an arm to walk;
Glided on water in flesh of chalk,
To see her crush pigments like head-lice,
Wring back stolen blood with savage zest.

[Written in response to Women in Black, by Marianne von Werefkin]
[First published by The Ekphrastic Review]
Categories: hunches, analogy, anger, faith, fantasy,
Form: Rhyme

Premium MemberNot Me Without Her

“Photography is a way of feeling, of touching, of loving. What you have caught on film is captured forever… It remembers little things, long after you have forgotten everything.”
— Aaron Siskind
 
It is my graduation at age 50
There she stands with me, graying
Reminding me of her age these days
                    Not Me without Her!
She’s love and compassion, miracles
That happen when you’re a mom

I stand beside her, to the right 
My cap sideways with a smile
That speaks of accomplishment
                           Not Me without Her!               
Her heart seems connected to my own
Interacting through joys and tears

She hunches close to my side
Proud that I have done this thing
That she never did in her lifetime
                    Not Me without Her!
She races to my aide anytime, night or day,
Always prepared to love without conditions.






Graduation Day Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: craig cornish
Entered on March 4, 2023
Categories: hunches, mom, mother daughter, my
Form: Narrative

The Thief

They intrude even into his kitchen, 
hunting.

Now they loot fruits, nuts, spices, herbs, honey-combs…
Yet he tells them about a *Black Vasa’s medicinal miracle.

They come again, 
strip the forest of the flora and fauna 
and construct resorts and duplexes.
He’s driven away like a mongoose. 
On the top of a bare hill, 
he hunches with an empty stomach-pot.  

As he takes some rice from their sack,
they collar him
and beat him brutally, 
calling THIEF!

Media cook his corpse.

Remember
he was an Adivasi,
the original inhabitant, 
yet he’d to live muted in a desert 
within the forest.  



  
*Black Vasa – a medicinal plant used in the treatment of arthritis, asthma etc.
  
First printed in The Literary Hatchet
Categories: hunches, sad,
Form: Free verse

Down Many Traveled Lanes: Sonnet

Down many traveled lanes I sauntered sadly,

Up avenues I’ve trampled more than twice.

I've slipped and in prostration cried out badly

for anyone to blare their soft advice.

-

“Reverberate!” I thought in paths I’d fathered.

Illuminate my present gifts of chance,

these shreds of life that I have never gathered,

the times I’ve shunned the elegance of dance.

-

In simple furtherance of all my sorrow,

I gathered all my hunches to my chest,

and borrowed all the blame that I could borrow,

and never tried a virgin to molest,

until the light of millions of tomorrows

could pave my path and put me to my rest.

-------------------------
Categories: hunches, age, confusion, endurance, sorrow,
Form: Sonnet

A Heavy Heart

i know you have 
a heavy heart
it sinks into the pit 
of your stomach 

it weighs you 
down, hunches
you over while 
you heave for 
breath

i know your heart is heavy
but it doesn’t have to be
Categories: hunches, heart,
Form: Free verse

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