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Upbeat Day Ahead

I hail each  bronze, red, and blue coloured dawn,

as pulsing heart  mould torch flame of bliss,

to gaze across some awestruck mint sprig lawn,

that golden birthright never goes amiss


Eye beam urban verve one duly savours,

coruscating joie de vivre street life,

bursts of swift dash coffee’s hazel flavours,

cell-phone upbeat  day ahead  hubbub  rife


Blue robin high pitch chirp from chimney top,

sets the tone for morning wonders brightly,

activate those spark prompt hunches nonstop,

schedules met in narrow windows tightly


In suburb or in  city centre fair,

skies and pavements segue with deft flourish,

your dreamland ticket ace broad daylight flair, 

groundbreaking spurt fantastic, let us nourish


Dynamic itch to stray amid blind alley,

lurk within some parboiled notion latent,

steel clad zone that mosaic sculpted tally,

animated focus me the claimant
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Elliott Avatar
March 3, 2024 at 6:53 AM
Masterfully penned optimistic poem, Howard. I love its nature ambiance. A FAVE! Have a glorious Sunday. ~
Kendrick Avatar
February 23, 2024 at 2:22 PM
Interesting lines penned. I see you included cell phone in there so modern. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. I appreciate the time spent reading my poem and commenting. Sara K
Poet Avatar
February 23, 2024 at 12:13 PM
Dear Howard, your poem is truly remarkable. It captivates the reader with its lively rhythm and masterful use of imagery. The creativity displayed in the depiction of various images is truly commendable.
Dietrich Avatar
February 21, 2024 at 9:17 PM
Very creative with the images here. Thanks for dropping by my poems recently.
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