Formal Complaint Poems | Examples


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Dear Heart

Dear Heart,
I’d like to file a formal complaint
It seems that your an obsessive overachiever
That you take your job a little to seriously

Dear Heart,
Please stop breaking yourself into a million little pieces-
Because you fall in love with ideas and hypotheticals
Because you color people before they can show you their true aura 

Dear Heart,
Why
Why do you find every crumbling transparent excuse for the world
But somehow you make yourself bleed 
Why can’t you put up a wall against the hailing obscenities 
Why can’t you knock down that wall for a genuine whisper

Dear Heart,
You were supposed to be a road map to happiness
But it seems I’m lost somewhere between I love you and I miss you
You are supposed to find contentment in success and lessons in failures
But you grasp for the next and the regret

Dear Heart,
I know your tired and broken
But Brain is telling me to tell you to stop crying 

Dear Heart,
I’m sorry I yelled at you 
I’m sorry I thought a bandaid was enough to fix you 

Dear Heart,
I know your Shattered-
But I promise I won’t lose the pieces

Premium Member More Spice, More Views

I've noticed lately, more spice, more views
What in the world has come over youse
Have you no shame
Where's the class you proclaim
It's all about popularity so I'll continue this ruse


(This is NOT a formal complaint! LOL)

Mom Versus the Gym Teacher

I don't know racism
but I do know

that woman
screaming 
in my face

well, I didn't stand for that
even if I had to grab 
the neighbor's kid
to translate for me

that woman
looking down
on my Chinese face
I had Julia write 
a Formal Complaint
the principal agreed
and did nothing

a weak woman
just imagine if I knew english

the hardest thing
was letting them walk on us
timid and quiet Chinese

hah!

no Chinese in government
no social services
no translators
I came too early


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