Rebirth:
Tragedy has been your favorite genre—
A fount of acts and scenes
of wailing tears and excruciating scars
punctured alive by so-called healers.
That oozing wound
paints the genre that trickles down the plot of your story.
The parched lips, a speaking metaphor of your turgid deals
In the hands of those wandering away with lots of your heart in their claws.
I know the shivering voice hosted in the tender sheen skin of yours
Is not a language of aging;
a simulacrum of those who promise heaven
but shuffle hell down your throat.
I know your fate in the cruel, crooked hands.
fueling you, of course to make your heart a Jericho.
And swallow pain to yourself
only to sing the dirge in love.
I know love never resides here
Neither has its chorus any memories of remembrance.
I think it died.
If love is dead, let me be the raising prophet.
Let me tender this desert back to Eden,
where nature plume and sing again.
Categories:
excruciating, 7th grade, poems,
Form: Free verse
Its dark,,thoughts deep dipped
Taking a stroll but I wanna ride
To go so far that my feets tire
To do it so fast that my thighs burn up
All the more my butt builds
Excruciating lashing wind I crave
Creating a path on the blinding fog
Past the wind by the bulky cypresses
Till my eyes tear away
Till my vision is all a blur
Till m'breathe is stable-struggling
Till I hit on that rock
And am thrown off my ride
And am lying there
Dents on my cheeks and elbows
Blood stained trapped trouser on those greasy wheels
And I breathe
It can't contain me anymore
So the bubble of sadness render me motherless
And I embrace the breeze
And with it it carries silence
And in the silence I find my peace
And in the peace there is laughter
And in the laughter I lose a wrinkle
And my eyes glow a new
Categories:
excruciating, celebration, emotions, fantasy, feelings,
Form: Ballade
E-pidemic
L-ink's
E-erie
N-astiness
A-pplies
M-orbidity
A-s
E-xcruciating
C-risis
O-f
M-ysterious
B-acteria
A-nd
L-ethal
I-nfection
C-ontagiously
E-mploys
R-abidity
Topic: Birthday of Elena Mae A. Combalicer (June 17)
Form: Vertical Monocrostic
Categories:
excruciating, birthday,
Form: Acrostic
Excluded Trump for Being Excruciating
Making someone very weak and infirm
like a "debilitating back pain."
Tending to weaken something.
Again excluded Trump for being excruciating;
He never was humble and always humiliating;
Poor golfing game,
And him to blame;
Back stabbed with pains that are debilitating.
Jim Horn
Categories:
excruciating, allegory, analogy,
Form: Limerick
The pain is excruciating
I’m sure in the mind of hating
My back does hurt
As I do twerk
Something is wrong with my mating
Russell Sivey
Meant as pure humor, no offense was intended.
Categories:
excruciating, pain,
Form: Limerick
Excruciating and Debilitating
When we have pains that may be excruciating,
Have discovered they can become debilitating;
Much to learn;
This do yearn;
What we will really need is further educating.
Jim Horn
Categories:
excruciating, allegory, analogy,
Form: Limerick
I'm sick, this is what cancer patients go through!
The bonds between souls and bodies, shattered!
Hopeless, yet still dreaming for life, crude.
Everything you ever dreamed of, tattered.
As I hold on to the last few strings of hope
A realization occurs, what good have I done?
This world owes me nothing, with my pain I must elope.
As far as I can, with my pain I must run!
I must slip away, before anybody recognizes I'm gone.
I don't need anyone in my way, trying to stop me.
This weight on my shoulders, so heavy, as heavy as a ton.
The decision is made. Don't turn back and eventually you'll be free.
Bury the hatchet, it doesn't matter how excruciating the pain.
By holding onto past problems, you will go insane.
Categories:
excruciating, pain, sick,
Form: Sonnet