Excruciating Pain

The pain is excruciating
I’m sure in the mind of hating
My back does hurt
As I do twerk
Something is wrong with my mating

Russell Sivey

Meant as pure humor, no offense was intended.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Allison Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 4:09 AM
despite the pain I am so glad you are writing such fun limericks Russell I find it is my coping mechanism to try and find humour at the worst times and that is what has got me the three most traumatic years of my life and the saying 'laughter is the best medicine' really is so true:-) hugs jan xx
Sands Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 8:09 PM
Back pain is very bad Russell. I am going through it too and I did not break bones in my back. Keep up the great writing, my friend ! :)
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