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The lady who was in the white house

Culture and Taste**  
Her walk, her smile, and the way she carries herself embody something far greater than mere Black pride; they reflect the essence of a future First Lady. She knows the reality of being down on her luck and understands the struggle of facing financial hardships. Michelle Obama, a woman of substance, stood by her husband with remarkable ease and grace, embracing her rich culture and refined taste.  

“Oh! Yes, we can!” resonates once more. Proud by nature and proud by choice—onward, Christian soldiers! Barack and First Lady Michelle Obama truly represent the people's choice.

Glimpse Into The Writer's Head

A girl rotting
A girl alone

She is still for hours
She is still forgotten

A girl downtrodden
A girl down on her luck 

She is drunk on misery
She wakes hungover on woe

A girl runs on decaf
A girl sleeps away

She is ruined by the hope
She is stuck on pause

A girl with thought and drive
A girl without a way

She is shell of routine
She is but a memory

A girl running out
A girl ill with frustration

She is I
She is me


-s.grace

Down On Her Luck

She was down on her luck, down to her last dollar 
And no one around to lend a helping hand 
She trusted that sucker but now he was gone for good  
As sad songs where played by some old blues band 
They rode into New Orleans early last Friday  
But now he was nowhere in sight 
Maybe another woman’s arms filled him with her charms 
And with her he would spend another peaceful night 
She herself found a few lovers that stayed the night 
But real meals for her hunger were rare 
They only wanted what she had just for the moment  
As for the rest they really didn’t care 
A year or was it two, she couldn’t recall 
Just those long one night stands in between 
One lonely girl caught up in her world 
And still wearing tight Conway jeans 
She’s hungry and tired, cold and alone 
In a town that shows no mercy at all 
They’ll laugh and leave as you die in the street 
As only the cold dark shadows give a call 
Too many nights alone crying real tears  
But no longer will she hunger in pain  
She’s now the city’s problem lying cold and dead 
In the street that never knew her name


Culture and Taste

Her walk, her smile,
The way in which she carries herself
Is far more than Black Pride

That the making of a President Wife
She knows the meaning of being down on her luck
She know the meaning of not having a buck


Michelle Obama  a woman of  substance
 stood by her  man with, ease, grace
And yes, with culture and taste

Oh! yes we can, once again 
Black by nature, proud by choice
Onward Christian Soldiers
  Barrack and the First Lady Michelle Obama
The People Choice.

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