Dormer Window Poems | Examples


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Premium Member THE ATTIC REMEMBERS

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Trapdoor groans—not ghosts,  
but hinges shedding rust like snake skins,
old wood sighs beneath the weight of years,  
a dry cough of timber settling into itself.  

Sunlight, thick as poured honey,  
warms the spines of leather-bound scrapbooks
where ink bleeds into yellowed pages.

Grandad’s trunk yawns open:  
Inside, a woolen uniform, stiff as frozen fish,   
still guards its stripes.  

A cracked leather suitcase spills sepia photos—  
a bride squinting in the Missouri sun,  
her lace gloves chewed by silverfish.  

Under the dormer window sits  
a hobbyhorse missing an eye, 
its rockers having scarred the floorboards.

In the corner, discarded Easter baskets  
melt into wicker tumors filled with  
fossilized foil-wrapped chocolate eggs. 

The beams hum with termite hymns—  
tiny jaws dissolving joists  
into sacred dust.  

But open the window~  
catch the updraft of cut grass  
from the yard below.  

It wrestles with the gloom,  
this breath of living things,  
and for a moment,  
the attic remembers the world.

Premium Member Through My Dormer Window

I was gently awakened by euphonic cooing
of mated doves perched on aspen branches
whose golden leaves rustled sweet silver songs
I rushed to open my wooden dormer window
and hum a greeting to their soft morning trills

With hands splayed on the ancient stone sill
my face welcomed the sun's auroral warmth
I felt the chill of Autumn's breath biting the air
and exhaled in contented sighs of appreciation
for the stunning beauty of this mountain valley

To paint nature's colors without dreary compromise
would require a far greater artistic hand than mine
While gazing from my cabin's primitive casement
I descried a canvas stippled in blazing pastoral hues
framed by the rustic charm of my bedroom window

Adveniat

it’s 2 am in paris 
and we have locked arms 
as we walk-run
down the rue des rosiers.
the soles of our shoes
smack against 
the eight hundred
year old cobblestone.
we hurry 
to an unknown destination,
desperately searching 
for a room 
for the night.
on the dim street corners
desperate men leer, 
as they do,
while we huddle into ourselves 
in an equally desperate defense.
we are fourteen 
and lost, 
in every sense.
we walk for most of the night.
i begin to feel as if 
i’d always been walking, 
as if i would never come
to a stop.
when finally we knock
upon a paint-peeled door
and are offered a room,
we collapse
onto the bed 
in a heap of exhaustion
and exhilaration.
we open the dormer window,
allow the traffic and 
the ceaseless midnight chatter
of the eighth arrondissement
to wash over us like
dandelion seeds on the wind,
and you begin to sing. 
my voice raises to join yours 
and we lie in bed,
singing ourselves to sleep,
utterly unaware
of the time and beauty
and youth 
we’ve been gifted.


Premium Member A Dark Insanity

Stranger things happen

Than what's just happened to me!

Walking past a house

I saw an image there

In the dormer window looking

I noticed the burn of her stare

As I stood to take a look

She just vanished in thin air

The windows blackened up

Anyone could see that no one was living there.

The building tempted me to approach

But I just didn't dare.

I knew something was there

By the atmosphere of the air.

As I moved away the image faded back

Only half seen.

Like she was holding back?

I turned my head sharply with a focused track to catch her looking at me.

She smiled and disappeared

I smiled an inner smile, I acknowledged that I was still free.

By not turning that key, I'd stayed away from what would be to me a dark insanity.

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