Disappointedly Poems | Examples


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I spent my day shopping for rubies
Far East posting covert listing
Mr Patwari’s emporium 
Assistants ever so obliging

Hexagonal set quaintly bulbous 
does cheapen the overall effect
Disappointedly I turn aside
Mr Patwari, whose tone inflect

Secretly, soft whispers in my ear
Channels my movements in close quarter
Senses piqued my curiosity
Astute, knowledgeable exporter

Silk,  flame red curtains wafted aside
Following, expectantly hopeful
Reveals vast interior workshop
He beckons, vocally boastful

Appraising the proffered brilliance
Rubies of every size mesmerised
Now questioningly, my eyes met his
Such rarity I identified

Sipping tea with Mr Patwari
Conviviality established
Revealed my subversive intentions
Slowly the smile on his face vanished

Drugged, stifling heat consumed
in disorientated stupor 
Divested of my hat, shoes and purse
I retrieved my pocket computer

Bearings noted, in a concrete cell
Frantically, I connect display
Made contact and communicated
the district with all I could convey

Alerts Financial Action Task Force
Identified illegal rubies
Smuggling network last link confirmed
Rescued, resumes usual duties

Right Now

Ohhhh.... If only you knew just how I feel "Right Now". 
All would cease to exist in your meager life and "You" 
would come for me. 
Not even the "Underworld of Gehenna" itself could keep 
you from taking me away in your arms and freeing me 
with your kiss. 

Can you not sense that I am ripe for the taking.... 
as a sweet fruit well preserved, and yearning to be 
devoured? 

Gone are the days of valiancy, the days when you 
rode hard and fierce to captivate what was yours. 

Yet, "Right Now" only in my secluded mischief do I 
feel the heat of your desire and witness the 
power of your demand. 

Today's world have made you a distant mirage that 
"You" can not measure up to; and, "Right Now" you 
are only a shell of your greater days of glory. 

Disappointedly, I keep my eyes tightly closed 
in my devised notions, for I do not want to 
look upon your weakened form... "Right Now".

When You Are Away

My spirit hurts
At the arrive of the night 
When you are away.
My spirit cries
When you are away,
Why don't you lay with me?

My heart aches 
At the break of the day
When you are away
My heart breaks
Why don't you stay with me?

When you are away,
My body longs for you night and day.
Every ribs and veins crack disappointedly
Because you were away and long gone with hope.

My body shivers in the comfort of the noon
When you are away,
Why don't you caress my body?

My eyes weeps at the sight of loneliness
When you are away,
Why do you leave me alone?


The Narrow View

The world is flat I know tis true,
For from my window I have a view.
And what more could I want to see,
Beyond the yard in front of me?
There is no need to the left to look,
No need to view a babbling brook.
Why would I ever turn to the right,
And bring a garden into my sight?
No, the view I have is all I need,
I don’t care how much you beg and plead.
All I need is as I’ve said,
Is to view my world straight ahead.
Then all I see will comfort me,
And I’ll never view it disappointedly.

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