Deodar Poems | Examples


Deodar Tableau

donned in Cedar wood
Elevated tree
Of worshipped taboo
Divine oil to blend
Awakens Sita
Restoring ardor

3/20/2021
Categories: deodar, allusion,
Form: Verse

Smiling Girl, Mehvish

Smiling Girl, Mehvish
------------------------------
Do you remember, o smiling girl Mehvish, the excursion day?
We climbed higher and higher--into the hills;
Collecting the wild walnuts
And taking selfies standing on the old deodar logs,
 Which bridged the dry brooks.
Merry crows cawed at us
And the cowardly monkeys 
were springing in anger, and screaming!
The funny girl, your class fellow, with her fingers blew many a whistle
And the young shepherdess replied from across the vale
 her lovely calls--
Standing among buffaloes, outside her summerhouse in the sloping woodland.
You were leaping like a goat,
Eager to conquer the top;
While I fatigued-- begged you to stop.
Categories: deodar, romantic love,
Form: Free verse


That Early Autumn's Night

That Early-Autumn's Night 
.......................................

That early-autumn's night...
While your wrestler-like brothers played cards inside , 
Laughing aloud, till late night ;
I was shivering in cold--   Standing-hiding under the old deodar 
In your fortress-like house's forest-like grassy yard.

Your landlord-like great-grandpa in the painting 
Twirled his moustaches 
Took me as a thief ;
While i raised my hands towards the starry sky 
Seeing the sitting-by old-lion-like dog.

Man becomes mad --
In such strange fits in true love ;
FEAR bows down --
Fearing the fiery eyes !
Categories: deodar, romance,
Form: Free verse

That Early Autumn's Night

That Early-Autumn's Night 
.......................................

That early-autumn's night...
While your wrestler-like brothers played cards inside , 
Laughing aloud, till late night ;
I was shivering in cold--   Standing-hiding under the old deodar 
In your fortress-like house's forest-like grassy yard.

Your landlord-like great-grandpa in the painting 
Twirled his moustaches 
Took me as a thief ;
While i raised my hands towards the starry sky 
Seeing the sitting-by old-lion-like dog.

Man becomes mad --
In such strange fits in true love ;
FEAR bows down --
Fearing the fiery eyes !
Categories: deodar, nostalgia, passion, romantic,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberSt Patricks Day

St. Patrick’s Day

                       Just touching the boundary of my land
                     A pair of bold bright deodar trees stand. 
                             Precious treasure
                              My bliss, my pleasure.
                    Closely attached with branches hand in hand.

     
                     Shedding leaves since end of February.
                     Both show skeleton in haste and hurry
                             In first week of March,
                            Sure! No need to search.
                      ‘Next, gorgeous green to come’: Compulsory.                 
 
                    Wonderful! Every year, seventeenth March.
                     Tiny tender leaf buds peep in each perch.
                                Time to greet in gay
                                 On St. Patrik’s Day.
                     Pair of trees in verdant veil on green arch.

  03/14/17
              
Re-edited on 03/04/21

 St.Patrick's Day Contest by L., Milton Hankins
Categories: deodar, appreciation, nature, spring,
Form: Limerick


Premium MemberQueen of Hills Lgt

Alluring elegance of Simla, the queen of hills,
Morning pleasant breeze, at night gives chills !

Snow clad mountains, silvery charming shine,
Tall Deodar trees , dense forest , also few Pine,

Aromatic flowers garnish nature's platter, vividly grow,
Rivers run smooth , at times exhibit a turbulent flow !

Soulful scenic marvel, must artistry come alive,
No artist or poet here can ever fail to thrive,

Green valley on one side, hilly serpentine road,
As summer sun peaks, it is my heavenly abode !





Written on 13/6/14
Contest- Hills are alive with poetry
Sponsor- Scott thirty seven 


* Simla is the capital of state Himachal Pradesh ( Devbhumi Himachal meaning thereby Land of Gods ) in India.

Ranked 5th


Now for Andrea's contest- let's get technical 
Awarded HM
Categories: deodar, beauty,
Form: Couplet

The Bier Covered With Tamarisk Plants

before going to bed it is to be checked thoroughly 
if there lays any carbon-paper under the bed-cover 

now-a-days some upstart pelicans become so 
disobedient it can not be assured if they come 
to know the whereabouts of the blood easily 
from the copy of the heart 

then they distribute the delirium of the high-heel moon 
by writing cash-memos at the gate of the locked-out plant 

the hundreds of thousands of white clouds 
also drink the whirl-water of love 

they touch to feel the freshness of the habitat 
they touch to feel the can full of smiles 

after the explosion they touch to feel
the bier of the deodar-birds 
covered with tamarisk plants
Categories: deodar, fantasy
Form: Prose Poetry
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