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Deodar Tableau

donned in Cedar wood
Elevated tree
Of worshipped taboo
Divine oil to blend
Awakens Sita
Restoring ardor

3/20/2021

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Jan Allison

March 29, 2021 at 10:40 AM

excellent word play in that final line, congrats on your win, I got n/a screwed up on my syllable count:-(:-) hugs jan xx

Susan Woodrow

March 29, 2021 at 1:30 PM

Thank you... i thought that it was 6 syllables per line and had to change things when I realized it was 5!

Alexis Y.

March 26, 2021 at 1:55 PM

Hi Susan, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Susan Woodrow

March 26, 2021 at 2:05 PM

Thanks Alexis Congratulations to you too:)

Joseph May

March 26, 2021 at 1:37 PM

Congrats on your win Susan, Nicely done

Susan Woodrow

March 26, 2021 at 1:41 PM

Thanks for the inspiration Glad you liked it :)

Paul Callus

March 26, 2021 at 12:23 PM

I believe that cedar oil is quite fragrant, Susan. Ships made of cedar wood used to sail in the Mediterranean hundreds of years ago. _ Congratulations on your fune win! ~ Regards // paul

Susan Woodrow

March 26, 2021 at 1:24 PM

Yes it is and keeps bugs away...that’s right Modern science is just catching up with all the special chemicals that plants secrete...congrats to you too:)