Last night I dreamed, your house decayed away
In that same way, your body must be now
Your memory is lost in me somehow
What you once were, dissolved beneath the clay
Your house remained, on that the final day
As your remains were lowered down below
Still in your living room, your things would show
Residing spirit you, in there would stay
The dream I had, has turned my head around
For in it came despair, I had not felt
Your house and with it you were rotting down
The place in which your spirit always dwelt
I’m lonely now, as you are really gone
Residing spirit me, must now move on
[I tweaked this slightly after Andrea's wonderful advice;constructive advise is one reason
I am here on Poetry Soup]
...a true story
Her house was just a shell, a burnt-out ruin...
standing apart, the other houses still intact
with painted jalousies and window curtains.
She must have fallen asleep, the cigarette
still dangling from her arthritic fingers;
I never saw her without one.
She told me of her life in Poland during the war,
but not her suffering, she never spoke of that.
She smiled wanly as she showed me old photos
of her family and friends taken on holiday when
she was younger, long before the ravages of war.
TV was her constant companion along with
her nurse and her beloved Pekingese,
always sitting on her bed. We'd talk for hours.
She was always interested in my schoolwork,
and why didn't I have a girlfriend?
Now she lay in hospital small and silent;
there was nothing I could do but hope and pray.
When they drew the sheet up over her I felt an
emptiness, but no tears came. Fourteen years old,
my first death up close. When I got home to mum
and dad, only then in their comforting embrace
did I sob my heart out.
Her house was just a shell, a burnt-out ruin...
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