Ah Mean Man in the Locker Room
Outfitting himself for wrestling
he sneared at the smiling gentlmen in the locker roomI wanna see how I could not be perfect
see ya'll guy think everything is easy and getting up early
and doing the thing makes you
qualified to be champion.
Snarls the Old man against the the Pretty Guys
Women love em: and the Ladies wanna
get wiff em.
You
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Categories:
criticisms, america, business, culture, devotion,
Form: Bio
Make Comments, Corrections and Criticisms
You can always give me some
corrections and comments
and criticism. My three C's
if you please while I skinned
my knees.
When I sent God my Letter,
He gave me a great sweater;
Did become better and better;
Until we had stormy weather.
While at church should stay and pray;
So do have a delightful happy day;
We never will suffer from dismay;
My
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Categories:
criticisms, adventure, analogy,
Form: Ballad
Criticisms
While bashing those whom we hate,
our ego may get boosted
but peace ends.
Wise acknowledge all have flaws
30.09.2021
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Categories:
criticisms, 10th grade,
Form: Free verse
Criticisms
must you shout, yell or point a finger in me?
ask, question yourself..
I know you are older than I am..
but must you do this, infront of other persons?
if I don't reply back that doesn't mean:
what your doing is fine..
whay your doing is respectful..
what your doing is
alright...
You are so proclaimed to be all perfect..
Don't you know
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Categories:
criticisms, absence, abuse, angst, bullying,
Form: Blank verse
The House of Criticisms
In the house of criticisms
the wall is lined with mirrors
echoing reflections of those
who brawl, spewing hate
and criticisms that stunt
progress or emotional evolution,
The house quakes from the
venomous quips, that are spoken
in hushes, traveling to the hearts
of unsuspecting souls.......
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Categories:
criticisms, life, people, political, house,
Form: Dramatic Monologue