Commutation Poems | Examples


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Imprisoned Grooms

The flip side
of dimension
the angle 
of a curve
The silence of  
 a shouting mute 
the last 
unfeeling nerve

Description
serves in
lonely cells
its commutation stark
Where sentenced
and imprisoned grooms
forever
— wed the dark

(Dreamsleep: February, 2026)

Ah Nuthang

Cantrix spoke
F=gmm/r^2

Cantar replied

F=gm1m2/d2

Adagio Censendo,, they wished disturbed to
Ballads aren't the only way to convey musical
Commutation. Poems often are rhythmic 
To produce are movement of words were
It begans the sequence needed to make tones
And define the require type of singer to gain 
What's needed, to differ novice and professional.

Somber evenings have you
Might the world readjust
We are lovers
You are my lover
Others are outta luck
Might I delight in
Loves benifets
Vivase intros the kiss

Boo'd in Venice
By 
Adagio Crescendo
Conductor
Music arranger
He married Vivase Largo
His family wished them
Separated, due to her
Lack of respect of her
In laws musical past.
She failed
When questioned
about a famous old song
She awnsered  by saying
She sounds like she's 
Sitting on a watermelon
Spitting seeds, "pout ting!"

A Nether, a Love

in throes of death we come alive
conceived
a commutation  
strapped to the sins of no other
but us
 
swords held taught
bitten we bleed
from ravenous jaws
of long found lust
saturated in a life's
lost lesson/lessen
thrust
upon the fire
burning amongst throats of (wo)man
 
be damned  
be god-damned
in the distance we run free
 
be not it here
for pleasure lies just past the edges of the sea
where battles shall breed
and we breath
thru the crazy  
these darkened times

^
 
forged to her bosom,
is the (l)on(e)ly thought upon his mind


Premium Member Feelings of a Heart That's Aching

A trackless train, no destination
     A soul stretched to the point of breaking
Confusion without revelation

Feelings of a heart that’s aching

In blackness, pain, no commutation
     A sleep from which there is no waking
Delusion without consolation

Feelings of a heart that’s aching


Oh, the broken heart, 
              In splinters, pieces scattered
Heal, oh broken heart
              Though torn apart and battered

To Create a Propitious Way

I want to tell you
Feeling of my heart
In four magical words
And want to make
A fluent communication
Between our hearts
Because both the heart
Are very keenly wanted
To know each other
May be the bless of god 
Make a reach near your heart
And you understood
My sentiment and my emotion
Understood the holy feeling
And make affluent commutation
Understood you view is vital
To create alighted way
To give proper shape to future

To create a propitious way

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