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Feelings of a Heart That's Aching

A trackless train, no destination A soul stretched to the point of breaking Confusion without revelation Feelings of a heart that’s aching In blackness, pain, no commutation A sleep from which there is no waking Delusion without consolation Feelings of a heart that’s aching Oh, the broken heart, In splinters, pieces scattered Heal, oh broken heart Though torn apart and battered

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Jan Allison

Date: 2/8/2018 6:48:00 PM

Phew Mike I'm so glad to read its a fictional poem as I had a huge lump in my throat when I read this intense heartbreaking poem:-) hugs jan xx

Mike Gentile
Date: 2/8/2018 8:11:00 PM

Thanks Jan, guess I should have noted that it not my current situation xxoo!!!

Judith S

Date: 2/8/2018 6:39:00 PM

Wow Mike! This is amazing! And when you are there it is hard to realize that it won't always be that way. Wonderfully descriptive lines make me feel this sadness and despair. Another great work from you :) ~Judy

Mike Gentile
Date: 2/8/2018 8:13:00 PM

Thanks Judy, you are very kind xxoo

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/8/2018 5:07:00 PM

Beautifully expressed sorrow, Mike.

Mike Gentile
Date: 2/8/2018 5:47:00 PM

Thanks so much, Line xxoo

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/8/2018 3:38:00 PM

You express such sorrow in this poem Mike! For the sake of love do we chance heartbreak. But it is true that time is the best healer. A piece that pierces the heart! xxoo

Mike Gentile
Date: 2/8/2018 5:46:00 PM

Thank you so much, Connie, I really appreciate your comments xxoo

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/8/2018 3:25:00 PM

You have a special talent Mike...you captured the broken heart effectively in just a few lines..well written.

Mike Gentile
Date: 2/9/2018 8:47:00 AM

Thanks so much, Vijay!!

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/8/2018 2:27:00 PM

Oh, I can feel the broken heart and I completely understand the confusion of destination. Well written again Mike :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 2/8/2018 2:29:00 PM

Thank you as always, Heidi, from the beginning you have been very supportive, I appreciate it xxoo

Silent One

Date: 2/8/2018 2:20:00 PM

Now that is one broken heart Mike, love that first line, so many have been there... You have a way with words... great descriptive writing..

Mike Gentile
Date: 2/8/2018 2:28:00 PM

Thanks Silent one, you are very kind to encourage me !!!