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Premium Member Out of Their Element

There on the loveseat sat a Giant Grouper
Right beside him a Red Snapper 
Well, the giant wasn't a giant 
Sitting isn't correct either for they were fighting
Of all things over the remote
The Giant Grouper wanted to see Captain D's commerical
Red Snapper wanted to see Sponge Bob
They were out of their element
Gasping for air
Well, I was in my element 
I put them in their place back in the ocean
Well, not a real ocean but a fish tank
I told them don't mess with me in my element
I got the remote and found MY movie_
The moral of this story is don't mess with momma
For when momma is unhappy everyone is unhappy

Just for fun..Free Verse ..Prose..Prose Poetry(no I don't think so)

Premium Member Now I Bawl

: :-x  by d8:) the one on M&M commerical
ITD :-* now not I-O I know this will be controverial

Now o-+-> but :-D still :-I by :-*
That M&M d8:) my + left me in bliss

ITD :-| d8:) hasn't called
SITD  :e  %-)  now I bawl

Amazed big kiss by cool guy the one on M&M commerical
In the dark kiss, now not bored I know this will be controverial

Now doing nothing but happy still hynotized by kiss
That M&M guy my knight left me in bliss

In the dark disgusted cool guy hasn't called
Still in the dark disappointed confused now I bawl

Sponsor: David Williams
Contest: Text Talk
Written:Septmeber 2, 2012

Premium Member The Lonely Woman

She bought a computer
Hooked it up by herself
Thought that she'd find a suitor
Fit for a tudor

She'd heard friends talking
 How they entered the game
She felt she knew now
She  could do the same

She filled out the description
How she was tall and slim
Job experience on a whim
Lingerie model should please them

Long flowing blonde hair
Pouty lips to boot
Sure this description was a hoot
What else could she say about such a beauty as she

When looking in the room
A different scene we see
Old dumpy woman
Down on her knees

Scrubbing the floors
Baseboards too
Ruffened hands from labor
Would this work at all

Only being truthful
Will get you a date
Even if your life is getting on late
Tell all the qualities that are inside

That is the way to be a bride

(This is not an original idea but comes from an old TV commerical of years ago when 
computers first became available for the general public. I need to work on this.)

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