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Out of Their Element

There on the loveseat sat a Giant Grouper Right beside him a Red Snapper Well, the giant wasn't a giant Sitting isn't correct either for they were fighting Of all things over the remote The Giant Grouper wanted to see Captain D's commerical Red Snapper wanted to see Sponge Bob They were out of their element Gasping for air Well, I was in my element I put them in their place back in the ocean Well, not a real ocean but a fish tank I told them don't mess with me in my element I got the remote and found MY movie_ The moral of this story is don't mess with momma For when momma is unhappy everyone is unhappy Just for fun..Free Verse ..Prose..Prose Poetry(no I don't think so)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/1/2014 9:20:00 AM
This is so cute Sara....I really enjoyed it...made me laugh...
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Date: 2/27/2014 8:36:00 AM
dear Sara - I love the fish personalities. not Ozzie and Harriet. Thank your Lord, there is a tank nearby. Happy watching. love, Kathy
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Date: 2/26/2014 7:43:00 PM
oh this is really cute, Sarah. It's imaginative and fun!
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Date: 2/25/2014 8:32:00 PM
Sara, you reeled in a fun one here. Did you happen to watch Finding Nemo that night?
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Date: 2/25/2014 10:20:00 AM
I'm happy to read this,it simply tells me my Sara is bubbling in fun,I'm really happy for you,keep enjoying yourself.A great work from happy heart; kudos Sara.
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Date: 2/25/2014 8:33:00 AM
This is a fun write my friend! I surely loved reading this extremely wondrous poem here this morning! What a fantastic piece Sara, quite a delightfully enchanting aquatic poem here! Great Work!!
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