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Out of Their Element

There on the loveseat sat a Giant Grouper
Right beside him a Red Snapper 
Well, the giant wasn't a giant 
Sitting isn't correct either for they were fighting
Of all things over the remote
The Giant Grouper wanted to see Captain D's commerical
Red Snapper wanted to see Sponge Bob
They were out of their element
Gasping for air
Well, I was in my element 
I put them in their place back in the ocean
Well, not a real ocean but a fish tank
I told them don't mess with me in my element
I got the remote and found MY movie_
The moral of this story is don't mess with momma
For when momma is unhappy everyone is unhappy

Just for fun..Free Verse ..Prose..Prose Poetry(no I don't think so)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/1/2014 9:20:00 AM
This is so cute Sara....I really enjoyed it...made me laugh...
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Date: 2/27/2014 8:36:00 AM
dear Sara - I love the fish personalities. not Ozzie and Harriet. Thank your Lord, there is a tank nearby. Happy watching. love, Kathy
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Date: 2/26/2014 7:43:00 PM
oh this is really cute, Sarah. It's imaginative and fun!
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Date: 2/25/2014 8:32:00 PM
Sara, you reeled in a fun one here. Did you happen to watch Finding Nemo that night?
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Date: 2/25/2014 10:20:00 AM
I'm happy to read this,it simply tells me my Sara is bubbling in fun,I'm really happy for you,keep enjoying yourself.A great work from happy heart; kudos Sara.
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Date: 2/25/2014 8:33:00 AM
This is a fun write my friend! I surely loved reading this extremely wondrous poem here this morning! What a fantastic piece Sara, quite a delightfully enchanting aquatic poem here! Great Work!!
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