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Miss First January

Miss First January canoed from the clouds
And anchored right beside Mr. Midnight
Red flower on the right, a book on the left
Traveling bag strapped on her back

Balancing a steaming pot on the head	
A pen in front pocket of long white dress
With a rapture of piercing beckoning smile 
She aired fleeting breath “this year, this year”

Could the fate of the year be in the book?
Could it be in the steaming pot on balance?
Is the fate with the red flower or the book?
No jubilation action can paste the answers

The fireworks, ululations, chip-chapping 
The chickens’ tears and twisting of waists
Are nothing but prayers of hope of the blind
As the truth for the year may be in the bag

Premium Member True Story: Twist and Shock

Canoeing on the Tomoka River
     A cool spring day with gulls leading in line
My male companion had never canoed
     So the powerful paddling chore was mine

Heaving breathlessly I rowed us along
     Attempting to transport us far upstream
It was then quite a shock came from the blue
     A startling splash down my back made me scream

My friend jumped and nearly toppled the boat
     I rose carefully and turned ‘round to find
A mullet jumped into my rented canoe
     It twisted and flopped to escape its confines

This event preceded my fishing days
     And I was happy when the fish flew out
This was the first fish that I’d ever caught
     No reel, no hook, and bait I did without

Years later I bought a cabin cruiser
     Because seafood is tops on my menu
Many days offshore with nary a bite
     Maybe I should have purchased a canoe


*True story for Nikko's Twist and Shock contest

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