Best Total Darkness Poems


Can You Imagine

Can You Imagine

In Our Planet

If one fine day..
All trees are given a chance to speak-
What will they speak to us?:
'What have you EGOISTIC humans 
Caused to our ENVIRONMENT?'

If one fine day..
Mother Earth is given a voice
What will She say? 
Her thunderous voice will echo
From her outer atmosphere:
'Stop polluting me NOW or
Bear the CONSEQUENCES'.

If one fine day..
All the money in the world is
Equally distributed
Amongst everyone
Then there will be:
'No POOR, No RICH'

If one fine day..
Our planet follows this rule:
Total darkness henceforth. 
But only those that show humanity
Be blessed to see radiance of light:
'There will be NO INHUMANITY'

If one fine day..
All employers take this decision-
The only qualification needed 
To acquire a job is-
'Good Character':
'Then parents will NEVER FAIL
To instill MORAL VALUES
Into their children'

If one fine day..
The infinite universe stoops down 
To say something to us from above
What would that be?: 
'To every human being out there
Prancing with pride:
You are NOTHING but
A GRAIN of SAND
In an ENDLESS desert. 
So, stop being ARROGANT!'

Hush Hush Sleep Baby Sleep

 Tonight  like all the other nights

I lay down next to her cot bed ,run my fingers through her hair

' Hush Hush ,sleep baby sleep ' , I Softly sing  to her.

I sing to her a lullaby  She listened to from  birth

I hum to her the melody that knows her water world

Then  I proudly watch her , touch the inside of her  palm

I whisper sweet and gentle ,trying to keep her calm.

I feel her tiny fingers curl around my own

till She slowly drifts to sleep  in dreams so far from home.

In dreams with  lands of faries , of stars twinkling in streams

In castles made of pure bliss  where our grips find release.


Tonight, is not like other nights,. 2 am , total darkness

but cannot , just cannot close my eyes.

I look at her , and gently lift her , I place her in my arms

I Hold her close, I hold her tight , with all my need and all my might.

I rock her to the beat , to the beating of my heart

I kiss her , I kiss her deep , as if we're to depart.

I put her back , I lay her down , to snuggle with her teddy

Warm tears , first tears , start falling , suddenly.



Tonight is not like other nights . 3 am , total darkness

but cannot , just cannot close my eyes

I write all my emotion ,as if its the last time I could write




Tonight  is not like other nights . 4 am ,  the moon reflects its light 

 but cannot , just cannot close my eyes

Warm smiles , new smiles ,  replace this pain, this fear lurking inside

Because I know , if  shapeless clouds cover my sight

the last words that I penned ,were for my precious child.

Premium Member Is Fantasy Land Real?

Fantasy is hardly an escape from reality. It's a way of understanding it.   Lloyd Alexander
    
Starlight shown on the WHIMSY Island.  
So the well-equipped yacht berthed quietly
Into the small harbour. Afar, Greg saw a small inn.
It was in total darkness.  Probably a total outage.

He decided to go to the inn and get some food,
But in the obscurity of the night, he hit a tree trunk
That had fallen in his path and hit his head.
Darkness engulfed him and he fell in a swoon.

Some animal was licking his face and a lovely fairy
Held his face up.  Must be some HALLUCINATION.
He sat up questioning his IMAGINATION.  Fairy?  
Unicorn?  His VISUALIZATION needed an explanation.

Fluttering her gossamer wings, Faye helped him up
And put him onto the unicorn.  Yes, yes, he questioned..
Is this some REVERIE? Yet all three rose above the forest
Of green ashes with glow worms showing them the way,
and they landed in a glen, where a feast had been prepared.

Other fairies brought hot fruity milk and cinnamon bread.
Satiated, they danced and made merry with bells and wind chimes.
Until the first signs of sunrise shone in the sky.
All disappeared and Faye took Greg’s hand
And both flew towards the yacht that awaited them. 
 
Whether this was a DREAM or not Greg cared not.
He drew Faye, nearer to him and together they kissed.
Stars weaved in a fantasy web as the moon shone bright.

Placed 1


Premium Member Shivers

Wintry night, the clouds were churning
While the lightning lit the sky
The old house it shook and trembled 
As the howling wind went by.

I put out the waning candle
Total darkness all around
It felt cold, in bed I snuggled
Heard the thunder’s drawling sound.

It took ages till I drifted 
Into rough and restless sleep
When at once I felt me falling
Down a tunnel deep and steep.

Chilly hands wrapped tight around me
Felt the breathing of a ghost;
In a daze it tugged and led me
To the open ragged coast.

Had no strength or will to struggle
The cold water dragged me down
Uncontrolled the helpless feeling
Of a man about to drown.

Then I woke all of a sudden
And I saw the dawning light
Found myself all wet and sweaty
From the dream I had that night.

So relieved! I felt elated.
What an ugly fright I’d had.
Then I looked and saw beside me 
Soaking seaweed on the bed!!

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23rd October 2014
Contest: Ghosts Stories
Sponsor: Kelly Deschler
Placed: 4th

Premium Member Light Shines In Total Darkness

" When one least expects...hope illuminates"                 




                                    Light Shines In Total Darkness


                           A moment in time where love should leave
                           when incompatibility muddy crystal waters
                           dissolves a tie that binds divine connection
                           widens the abyss as dream loudly shatters

                           Down on my knees I begged for a reprieve
                           gazes polarizing for to her nothing matters
                           in locked cages lay vestiges of desperation
                           intimacy now in tatters mutated to cinders

                           Aged moon will not commiserate then give
                           nebulous promises to stop onrushing tears
                           nor rays to light the path toward contrition
                           and turtle doves waving wings that glitters

                           Weary eyes reaching for salvation perceive
                           apparitions raising me up to alleviate fears
                           cleansing this heart throbbing in exultation
                           as grass springs anew...while grief withers.










Penned: 01/16/2023
             2:12 a.m.
             West Palm Beach
             Florida

Heaven Wept

The darkest clouds ever 
... overshadowing sight never before seen
Ominous high noon weather
shuddered the souls witnessing
		the 
	      death 
		 of 
     the King of kings
It was a festive occasion for the wicked
that Son-less day — 
a Roman execution was underway
Three wooden crosses 
were fastened to the sky
And the howling of the darkening air
changed the joyous atmosphere to fear
The wicked were taking pleasure
in their vote count  
They were pleased with the final tally ... 
a murderer being released
in exchange for 
		the 
		life 
		 of 
    the Prince of Peace
The Conqueror of Sin now hanging on a cross,
dying the death: 
Crucifixion — 
so unimaginably painful
Roman capital punishment
was lethal lingering torture
But for the evildoer viewers, it was a short-lived savor 
For the black clouds had blotted the sun,
plunging the sky into total darkness
Heaven wept that day, 
without shedding a teardrop from the sky
Heaven cried that day,
blood tears of the Lamb of God 
Sanctifying water soaked the ground
Cleansing the Resurrection plots,
that one day 
would be opened by the trumpet sound
Heaven wept 
funeral tears for us,
wearing a shrouded veil of darkness 
Hiding anguished Holy eyes,

		 for 
		 the 
	Father could not 
		look 
		upon 
		 the 
		Son


As the King of kings Messiah savior blood 
dripped 
            down 
            	    the cross 
from a 
          thorny 
	            crown


Premium Member Blink of the Eye

Have you ever had your life, flash before your eyes?
Has your heart ever stopped, bringing forth your demise?
Have you been in total darkness with nobody around?
Did you fall down that tunnel, where there was no sound?

Have you been to that place, that is just in between?
The land of the living and that of the unseen.
Have you felt total peace as all of your pain left?
Did you think about others that you left bereft?

We all have ideas of what lies beyond.
There are many ideas and beliefs that have spawned.
You will know for sure on the day that you die.
We will all see the truth, in a blink of the eye.

Premium Member Eloping In a Blizzard-A True Story

**Eloping in a Blizzard**


In a blizzard, our car stalled
in total darkness in The Great Divide.
The wind like a witch cackling in the pitch dark 
of night!

A mix of snow and sleet encasing the
car, twas a most frightening sight.
Not one light could be seen on this road,
my heart was anything but light.

Frightened and shivering, oh God, why did I 
leave home?
To elope with my love to golden San Francisco
To be his and never more to roam!

Alas he discovered, we were out of gas.
He bid me to hide under blankets and give him no sass.
Alone, in pitch dark, my knight walked to a farm.
I prayed God to protect us from any grievous harm.

I saw the swirling winds, just a frightened bride-to-be.
Then a knock on the window, he had returned, 
my future husband to be!
Here, I have the gas, as promised, said he!
We drove on peacefully to San Francisco, and were married, 
indeed, most happily!!

          

                          May 15, 2020
                          2pm PST
                          Poem#1270

Premium Member Celestial Play

Celestial Play

In daylight hours when stars fall sleep, 
They opened wide eyes to see celestial wonder –
The sun and moon at play 
Racing across their blue playground in hide and seek – 
A game of tag – 
Leaving trails of laughter  
For earthbound eyes, 
Invited audience, 
To revel in by covering their brilliant splendor
With receding light to total darkness,
Daystar encircled with a golden crown,
Then lifting shadows,
Playfully returning light again
To upturned smiles – 
Suspended breath – 
Captured by their mischievous spirit
As hearts of every language hold hands,
Clearly understanding
The song of unity inviting
Spirits of anticipation rise 
Into Heaven’s clear vision of the magical and miraculous 
Never abandoned, 
Or eclipsed, 
But following breathless the playmates,
Passing, 
Now separating at the end of their game
While a memory replays for eternity, 
Imprinted in the drowsy stars of a morning sky.

TOTAL ECLIPSE – August 21, 2017

Premium Member Night Crawlers

It must be in our genes to collect things.
Our bounty paraded along tables and mantles. 
Eventually life shifts gears and priorities change.
Just a batch of clutter too soon to be forgotten.
Marbles and shells boxed under stairs and closets.
Cabbage patch kids kissing attic spiders in total darkness.

Everything will be picked clean after we're gone.
Pennies on the dollar strewn on the front lawn.
The gift of sentiment tossed to the edge of the road
Night crawlers creep in to pick what's left off the bone.

Cry of the African Child

It is my father's land
It is my mother's land
It is my home land
They call it the dark continent
We call it Africa
But I call it My Continent

My continent is in total darkness 
Except for a few deem of light
Which they are trying to put off
Though there are lots of candles to light
Yet still my people cannot light the candles themselves

But I will rise up
I will rise up with the help of my people
And light each and every corner of my continent
And in the new bright light of AFRICA
THE AFRICAN CHILD WILL CRY NO MORE

Premium Member Seven Colors Of The Rainbow

Seven colors of the rainbow
Each crowned with a gift
A lifetime gift in each line of the rainbow

The World was once in total darkness without a gift
Beauty of nature the World has never felt or seen
Earth as one world asked for a gift

God of heavens said that beauty can be seen
Until all creatures thought of praying
Praying by kneeling no one has ever seen

Humans are but one product of belief in praying
That all creations must be ruled by superiors of giving
Superiors in human form, striving and praying

All creations harmonized in sharing and giving
Making everything simple, in thinking and surviving
Rainbow as one creation and gift, in seven days of bright light and whole-hearted art of giving.

My Story To Tell

"To love is nothing. To be loved is something.
But to love and be loved, that’s everything."

When you are in warm handshake with love
All you ever imagine is to fly up high like the dove
You never cease soaring in aptitude to dissolute
Your thirst to drink more from love’s well is absolute

By devotion of countless emotions
The extent you hope to sail is beyond oceans
Nothing seems impossible
And by counts, every dream achievable

My story to tell is like most few ever told
It began on one late night, a walk alone in the cold
From afar beneath the cloak of total darkness
From henceforth arose my redemption from coyness

A portrait work of God’s intellect and perfection
Her appearance flaunts in blissful ignition
Nature’s gift hardly to reject
And by acceptance, patiently unwrap and inspect

Elizabeth by name, in her prime of life
Swore I to champion her test, master in all strife
Failing is an option potion to auction for glory
In such stature of her nature, I offer my best act honorary

Seasons washed ashore, the bonding mightier
The relationship happier and healthier
My queen no longer was one but two
By an act profound, her being two only takes two

A charming prince forth joins the family
Merrily and happily, the family chants joy so lively
Having my queen trust and love
Seeing my prince smile out of love

My greatest joy definable by no records
Descriptive by means of no words

Premium Member The Room

A room once filled with life and joyful sound
                                         now stands silent in total darkness.
                                         Its walls are weighted heavy with sadness,
                                         the child that used to live there can’t be found.

                                         His room looks terribly bleak and dusty.
                                         The smile on the toy clown is upside down.
                                         The tattered toy animals wear a frown.
                                         The child’s room feels cold, and empty.

                                         The unloved little boy has long since gone.
                                         He now lives with God in a peaceful place.
                                         No longer will tears stream down his small face.
                                         By tomorrow all his toys will be gone.

                                         In the bare room the rocking horse resides.
                                         All twisted and bent with marks on its sides.

Premium Member Lunar Eclipse

As the moon passed
into Earth's shadow
total darkness 
enveloped my world
broken only by you
my shining star.

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