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Heaven Wept

The darkest clouds ever ... overshadowing sight never before seen Ominous high noon weather shuddered the souls witnessing the death of the King of kings It was a festive occasion for the wicked that Son-less day — a Roman execution was underway Three wooden crosses were fastened to the sky And the howling of the darkening air changed the joyous atmosphere to fear The wicked were taking pleasure in their vote count They were pleased with the final tally ... a murderer being released in exchange for the life of the Prince of Peace The Conqueror of Sin now hanging on a cross, dying the death: Crucifixion — so unimaginably painful Roman capital punishment was lethal lingering torture But for the evildoer viewers, it was a short-lived savor For the black clouds had blotted the sun, plunging the sky into total darkness Heaven wept that day, without shedding a teardrop from the sky Heaven cried that day, blood tears of the Lamb of God Sanctifying water soaked the ground Cleansing the Resurrection plots, that one day would be opened by the trumpet sound Heaven wept funeral tears for us, wearing a shrouded veil of darkness Hiding anguished Holy eyes, for the Father could not look upon the Son As the King of kings Messiah savior blood dripped down the cross from a thorny crown

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/22/2018 3:14:00 AM
Your poem needs no particular comment, it touches without further words....Thank you for sharing. Kai
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Date: 3/5/2018 11:01:00 PM
It is putting me in the frame of mind for the upcoming season. This year Good Friday and Passover run concurrently and that always gives me more meaning when that happens. It is an interesting, well written ode. Some understand why the heavens wept and some don't. But, if God could not look upon his own son's face due to sin, imagine how he sees us. Filthy rags.
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Date: 3/5/2018 7:38:00 AM
Powerful write...
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Date: 3/4/2018 10:22:00 PM
You know, they say that when Christ's blood permeated the ground below him, flowers bloomed. I LOVE this story. Such a beautiful ODE to a very couragous man.
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 3/4/2018 10:23:00 PM
Added this one to my favourites. If only I could add it to the very top of the list where any stories about Him belong.
Date: 3/4/2018 9:12:00 PM
An excellent Biblical write Freddie!~Che :)
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Date: 3/4/2018 11:21:00 AM
I like it...the vibes real...How proud God must have been to see flesh and blood sacrifice for love...
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