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Fantasy Poetry Contest

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Fantasy is hardly an escape from reality. It's a way of understanding it. Lloyd Alexander Starlight shown on the WHIMSY Island. So the well-equipped yacht berthed quietly Into the small harbour. Afar, Greg saw a small inn. It was in total darkness. Probably a total outage. He decided to go to the inn and get some food, But in the obscurity of the night, he hit a tree trunk That had fallen in his path and hit his head. Darkness engulfed him and he fell in a swoon. Some animal was licking his face and a lovely fairy Held his face up. Must be some HALLUCINATION. He sat up questioning his IMAGINATION. Fairy? Unicorn? His VISUALIZATION needed an explanation. Fluttering her gossamer wings, Faye helped him up And put him onto the unicorn. Yes, yes, he questioned.. Is this some REVERIE? Yet all three rose above the forest Of green ashes with glow worms showing them the way, and they landed in a glen, where a feast had been prepared. Other fairies brought hot fruity milk and cinnamon bread. Satiated, they danced and made merry with bells and wind chimes. Until the first signs of sunrise shone in the sky. All disappeared and Faye took Greg’s hand And both flew towards the yacht that awaited them. Whether this was a DREAM or not Greg cared not. He drew Faye, nearer to him and together they kissed. Stars weaved in a fantasy web as the moon shone bright.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 6/20/2025 10:20:00 AM
There goes Poetry Soup's amazing romantic, even Fantasy land has love. an engaging tale, loved it. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/20/2025 6:03:00 AM
Victor, a captivating story, best of luck in the contest. -hugs
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Date: 6/19/2025 6:40:00 PM
Victor this gem is an engaging and impressive contest contender! It was nice reading something so magical today. Blessings
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Date: 6/19/2025 10:16:00 AM
Magical, as if from another world. interesting work
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Date: 6/19/2025 7:42:00 AM
Dear Victor, a beautiful and whimsical write written with so much wonderfulness! I really enjoyed reading this poem! Hugs :)
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Date: 6/19/2025 6:52:00 AM
Great entry for the contest and a flawless poem, Victor. The story is charming and full of magic! This work deftly combines fantastic elements with an ethereal, magical quality.
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Date: 6/19/2025 4:33:00 AM
Dear Victor, What a whimsical and enchanting tale! This piece beautifully blends fantasy with a dreamlike sense of wonder. From the mysterious inn to the magical feast in the glen, every detail invites the reader deeper into a world where imagination reigns. The ending is especially romantic and tender—Greg’s acceptance of the surreal makes it all the more magical. A truly delightful read. Love and Hugs
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Date: 6/19/2025 4:11:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest. You've been on a roll writing these romance poems here of late. Sara K
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Date: 6/19/2025 2:28:00 AM
- A wonderful adventure you have written, Victor :) - Of course it was not a dream ... it was an experience in the fantasy world :) - (I have posted my contribution to this contest, it was a different fantasy world) - Best wishes :) - hugs
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