Is Fantasy Land Real?

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Fantasy Poetry Contest

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Fantasy is hardly an escape from reality. It's a way of understanding it.   Lloyd Alexander
    
Starlight shown on the WHIMSY Island.  
So the well-equipped yacht berthed quietly
Into the small harbour. Afar, Greg saw a small inn.
It was in total darkness.  Probably a total outage.

He decided to go to the inn and get some food,
But in the obscurity of the night, he hit a tree trunk
That had fallen in his path and hit his head.
Darkness engulfed him and he fell in a swoon.

Some animal was licking his face and a lovely fairy
Held his face up.  Must be some HALLUCINATION.
He sat up questioning his IMAGINATION.  Fairy?  
Unicorn?  His VISUALIZATION needed an explanation.

Fluttering her gossamer wings, Faye helped him up
And put him onto the unicorn.  Yes, yes, he questioned..
Is this some REVERIE? Yet all three rose above the forest
Of green ashes with glow worms showing them the way,
and they landed in a glen, where a feast had been prepared.

Other fairies brought hot fruity milk and cinnamon bread.
Satiated, they danced and made merry with bells and wind chimes.
Until the first signs of sunrise shone in the sky.
All disappeared and Faye took Greg’s hand
And both flew towards the yacht that awaited them. 
 
Whether this was a DREAM or not Greg cared not.
He drew Faye, nearer to him and together they kissed.
Stars weaved in a fantasy web as the moon shone bright.

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 6/22/2025 2:05:00 AM
Dear Victor, you have indeed created a magical world which is populated with fairies and unicorns. How I enjoyed the dance of the fairies. Reverie or fantasy, Greg and Feye had a wonderful and romantic time together. All the Best dear friend!
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Date: 6/21/2025 7:51:00 PM
Victor, this is a true fantasy tapestry in motion. I easily and contentedly set right into it. Wonder at work thru you!
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Date: 6/21/2025 8:25:00 AM
Dear Victor, You can write on any theme and in any form, its creative and impressive how youv used all the word prompts given and delivered something that is worthy of a read and accolades, i love the storytelling and the fantasy vibes and the way youv finshed it in a very intriguing manner! An engaging and fun read this was definitely! And perfect picture to go with it too! Well done! Best wishes! Pleasure reading your poetic tale today. Sending you light always
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Date: 6/20/2025 10:20:00 AM
There goes Poetry Soup's amazing romantic, even Fantasy land has love. an engaging tale, loved it. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/20/2025 6:03:00 AM
Victor, a captivating story, best of luck in the contest. -hugs
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Date: 6/19/2025 6:40:00 PM
Victor this gem is an engaging and impressive contest contender! It was nice reading something so magical today. Blessings
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Date: 6/19/2025 10:16:00 AM
Magical, as if from another world. interesting work
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Date: 6/19/2025 7:42:00 AM
Dear Victor, a beautiful and whimsical write written with so much wonderfulness! I really enjoyed reading this poem! Hugs :)
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Date: 6/19/2025 6:52:00 AM
Great entry for the contest and a flawless poem, Victor. The story is charming and full of magic! This work deftly combines fantastic elements with an ethereal, magical quality.
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Date: 6/19/2025 4:33:00 AM
Dear Victor, What a whimsical and enchanting tale! This piece beautifully blends fantasy with a dreamlike sense of wonder. From the mysterious inn to the magical feast in the glen, every detail invites the reader deeper into a world where imagination reigns. The ending is especially romantic and tender—Greg’s acceptance of the surreal makes it all the more magical. A truly delightful read. Love and Hugs
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Date: 6/19/2025 4:11:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest. You've been on a roll writing these romance poems here of late. Sara K
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Date: 6/19/2025 2:28:00 AM
- A wonderful adventure you have written, Victor :) - Of course it was not a dream ... it was an experience in the fantasy world :) - (I have posted my contribution to this contest, it was a different fantasy world) - Best wishes :) - hugs
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