Lunar Eclipse

As the moon passed
into Earth's shadow
total darkness 
enveloped my world
broken only by you
my shining star.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 1:04 AM
this is really lovely ,Dave . I really like it.
Rodgers Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 7:43 AM
Andrea, Thanks for stopping by, glad that you liked it.
Torres Avatar
April 1, 2014 at 9:49 AM
this is awe!!! ...we only need one shining star to light up our world... well done, Dave!! ^_6
Rodgers Avatar
April 1, 2014 at 11:51 AM
Thanks Aiyah
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