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Unwanted Violin Solo

UNWANTED   VIOLIN   SOLO  



She  wrested notes from unwilling
And resisting rosined string. 
The rhythm struggled to assert control
Over her strained and anxious soul.


Mother shushed her resisting offspring,
Father struggled with his watch’s mainspring.
Children twisted hair and faces :
All wished to be in other places.
Form: Couplet

Lively Gifts

Gifts are nothing but a parcel of love 
with or without expectations.
When one gives -another receives.
I have been bestowed with wonderful gifts by God..
And those are my parents!
And my parents in turn have given me 
the most precious gift ..
which was wrapped in a soft creamy towel 
that lay in the incubator,eyes closed tight,
tiny fingers grabbing its shiny black hair,
cord clamp stuck at the navel,pearly toes curling,
cute belly raising high & low ..with each breath.
When I peeped through the glass clearly.. 
I could sight the skin that was pinkish red,
i lifted my feet to reach the box and touch 
the soft palm, but a blue dressed nurse 
shushed me with a wave..
The tiny ones lips were like strawberry that 
carried a divine smile :My eyes filled with light 
receiving the sunshine warmth whilst glancing 
at the bright neonates face.
And that was a" he" 
My little brother.
As they took him away from me he screeched..
I grew emotional being an 4 year old.
Then I eagerly waited for five long days for my mum 
to bring him home safe and healthy.
He is a living gift that I received 
whom I love unconditionally..now and forever.

20-6-2020

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© V. Deepa  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member Hiding Under My 3rd Grade Desk

Hiding Under My 3rd Grade Desk
David J Walker 

Mrs. Pollards smile 
Was enough to reassure every member
Of her third-grade class 

That their world was secure 
As the crass voice in the 
Crackling PA speaker announced 

An End of the World Drill in the
Middle of the day

Usually, a call to quietly line up 
And make an orderly march to 
The hallway where we would 

Stay crouched in a fetal position 
Until the voice returned to sound
The all-clear

But this time was different
This time it was 
Duck & Cover under your desk
	Was the end really that near?

Were the bombs about to fall
On Thatcher Elementary in
Pueblo, Colorado?

Did the commies hate us so much 
They would rain down missiles 
On our playground?

Not today! 
	Not when It was my turn
To pick sides for Kickball
A girl named Diane with blonde curls
Beside me talk about a sack lunch

And tetherball
And a game of Jax if the 
Hopscotch courts were full

Would the bombs blast the whole
Building away 
Leaving us huddled under our desks
Before recess?

Would we walk home among craters
Created by Commie planes coming

Over the artic just to find us while
Reciting the rhythm 
Of the Times table

The Social Studies lesson was
About the Pilgrims and how we 
Should be thankful for freedom 

In science we were learning 
About the moon and how soon
Someday we would get there

If they drop the bomb could we 
Still watch cartoons at 4 in the afternoon

Would there be anything left of the
Playground at Mineral Palace Park

And what about the swans that
Make their home on the park lake

How long are we supposed to 
Stay under these desks I whispered
To Mark 

I don’t know he said
As Mrs. Pollard shushed us 

As we hid and waited for
The all-clear


Premium Member New Names of Blessing

They came to me for Jewish names
   A Russian-Jewish couple, not to blame
Where they were from, Hebrew was banned
   As it had been throughout Communist lands

His name was Boris; hers was Bronya...
   In a twinkle I said: "Greetings, Boruch and Bracha
Your new names are special; they each mean 'blessing'
   No longer will either of you be guessing---"

They shushed me and smiled two wonderful smiles
   As if they had just walked down the wedding aisle---
"We understand, Reb Gershon," Bracha joyfully said
   "From all of our striving were these two names bred"

Boruch was blessed to have such a fine wife
   His Bracha! ~ They together shared life
Form: Narrative

Just Before the Rain

I’m happiest when the weather
is gloomy and threatening rain.
Its tendency, this low pressure,
forces most people to remain
inside comfortable houses.
Outside becomes much quieter
assuming a shushed quietus
that wouldn’t normally occur
if the day were a sunny one;
so I pray that this low holds fast
concealing the intrusive sun
behind the looming overcast  
while I revel in its stillness
and its lugubrious bleakness.
Form: Verse

The Featherbeds

The feather beds are a string of mountains near where I live, famous for its raised bog lands, where my father and his brothers cut turf for many years. In spring / summer a wild cotton flower blooms giving the mountains their name.


In youths embrace I walked in mountains,
My father’s steps I tried to follow.
He led the way from town to wilderness
And there it was my soul he freed.
Windswept hills of raised bog and peregrine,
Swooped winds flared the will of the wisp.
Cotton top flowers waved their white clouds,
Beckoning me,  to loose myself in awe.
Slain and sod, man and muscle worked as one,
Bright Heather draped the hills a regal hue.
Bracken fronds greened the soil of spring.
Larks and curlew cries hung upon the air. 
As my father shushed us to silence and embrace,
His wonderland of peace.
At seasons turn and Bracken colours fade,
Gorse and heather flair their restful hues.
Sheep saunter through with heads bowed, 
They slowly leave the mountain once again.
The feather beds dim as clouds dip low and veil.
And silence flees before winter wind and rain 
In adults disgrace I left the mountains,
My father’s steps hard to follow.
Still longing to find the way of wilderness
To free my soul once again and be with him.


Premium Member Where Will They Go


Where will they go, those creatures of the wild;
  
their territory lost through human cause.
 
Confused, they enter private yards; exiled,

they're waved or shushed away without a pause.

Wealth traded for the end of forest laws,
 
when once those animals with nature sought

their happiness in roaming land because

this was their home before destroyed and bought

for building mega-mansions with no afterthought.
Form: Verse

The Christmas Gift

My friend had a Christmas gift
He wanted to give me;
He shushed it was a secret
And I couldn't see.

It's awful not knowing
What a present is:
It's like getting stuck
In a cryptogrammic quiz.

He laughed
When I begged for a hint,
With an evil snicker
At my hapless predicament.

But as I steamed,
I looked about:
A light snow was falling,
And it was so very peaceful out.

The year had its struggles,
We nearly lost the place,
But that sudden promotion
Put me at a more amiable pace.

Janell gave me an awful scare
When she found a lump on her breast;
We prayed pretty hard,
But she aced every test.

Sadie and Jeff
Gave a grandchild last spring:
The sweetest, dark-haired girl
That life could bring.

I felt a little misty
As I stood there,
But he hadn't told me about the gift
And it just wasn't fair!

I thought of the fancy paper,
And I saw my grandbaby stand;
I thought of the lacy ribbon,
And I felt my wife's hand.

Something was happening to me,
I couldn't tell,
But it dawned
As clear as a bell.

There were gifts
That I had gotten,
Not in boxes and paper,
How could I have forgotten?

Saving our home
Was a gift, indeed,
And my wife's health,
What more did I need?

The grandbaby, in my arms,
Made me feel alive;
You know, I heard angels
Right there in the drive.

I wanted a gift,
But what gifts I'd received;
"Merry Christmas," my friend grinned,
"Now do you believe?"
Form: Quatrain

Small Town Library - October

SMALL   TOWN   LIBRARY   -   OCTOBER


Sleepy with silent words , soundless print       
Outside a world of school bells and  traffic hum.
Cant keep my focus,  glasses need renewing. 
Read same line seven times, I’m  losing 
My place - losing my grip.    I  am   
Held  in a  place where speech ends and
Time stops  - quiet, silence,  hush , no noise. 


Afternoon long pale crimson sun oozes 
Into  gloomy  room,  lone sunbeam  edging 
Into the forbidden roomy  gloom.
Silent stealthy steps  like a yellow cat with
Dust  motes   held   in its  claws.


Snoozing over yesterday’s newspapers
Old man agreeing,  nodding, mutters,  
Nodding at the 1968 UN yearbook.   
Studying and  skimming thru files for a look
Imperceptible  earphones  in  students head.
Kids being shushed for fairy tales being read


Smell of polished tables and newly-printed paper gloss,
Books on shelves  by the dusty dozen to choose,
Quotes and poems  by   Zola,  Balzac and Moses,
Flies buzz lazily by,  old librarian checks books out,  
Buzz, flicker, and plink-plonk from the faulty tube light.


Doze,  lose consciousness,  
Soon be November  -  winter approaching…. 
Got to save energy =  mc squared = MC2…..
CO2  +  H2O  is acid rain  =  droppeth as the gentle rain from heaven…..and 
The rain plays a little sleep-song on our roof at night,    ****
And so to sleep , perchance to………….wake
In a place where speech ends,
Time stops………………….
 



****   Langston Hughes   (1902-1967), U.S. poet. April Rain Song (l. 4-6)

That's the Way We Do It

We were taught 
that to be qu**r
means to be strange,
to be unlike the rest,
to be different, 
but not in a way that would raise surprised brows 
or taint eyes green with jealousy.
We were taught 
that to be qu**r 
means to be different 
in a way that would produce uneasy “oh”s 
or disapproving “how could that be”s.

To be qu**r was
a rising sea of loneliness drowning us
but later it became comforting furry blankets
we’d pull up to the tips of our heads at night—
there was safety in keeping our lips shushed.

You call it hiding in the closet
we call it an embroiling conflict with ourselves
of loving and hating,
of pretending to be not so different,
of letting your homophobic jokes slide,
of knowing that we’re silent because we’re also afraid to hear the truth—
that we’re also sometimes disconcerted by this part of ourselves,
for that’s just the way we do it.

We learn, over time,
as we find out that that kid in our Chemistry class
likes painting his nails,
and that girl in our neighbourhood
scribbles hearts over the Cara Delevingne posters on her bedroom wall,
we learn that maybe 
we’re not so different.

We teach ourselves
to give to ourselves
the love we want to give to people who make our hearts flutter,
to accept ourselves
the way want to be by our mothers and fathers,
to embrace ourselves 
the way we embraced that friend who came out to us.

We teach ourselves to take off the blanket and sleep in the open instead.
We teach ourselves to keep swimming and swimming no matter how ferocious the currents grow.
We teach ourselves to love all the seven hues in our skies
and to let go of the people who don’t find rainbows beautiful.
We teach ourselves to battle the ridicule and dismissals and bullying,
to no more despise the way our hearts beat.
We teach ourselves to no more pretend to be ’normal’
for we already are normal.

We no longer subdue our voices to the pits of our anxious stomachs
Instead, we sing in a chorus of the hues in our skies,
for we are here
and we are qu**r
and that’s just the way we do it.

Premium Member The Song of the Shell

I have spilled all of it out, it seems
Shushed it away
Now I stare at it like you would some black-and-white photo
I’m soldiering on
I can’t find the field
I don’t want this weapon
I’ve lost myself
But holding onto me wasn’t in the plans
I’ve blanched my dreams
When I speak marshmallows fall out of my mouth
I’m dimmed, muted
Placed in a different world again
I’m okay, though
I’m in-through a wondering sky
I’ll find you again
As my feet drift by
And tap you on the forehead

You snap my strings
And I may tackle you to the ground
Good for the both of us

I am the black falling light rushing out of tomorrow’s dream
I am your favorite sorcerer who forced the mirror upon you

Revealing you as the great one
With what wounds we are
Cascading, cascading

I know you, my love
My heart runs wild at the thought of your return

The Shush

s/he turns to her/his
significant other whilst
sitting amidst others at
some kind of social function
that for all intent & purpose
has absolutely no intent or
purpose, but to only give
grown adults the sense that
there is some meaning in 
life when deep down they 
all know there isn’t---
when s/he turns, s/he makes
a physical movement unique
to the both of them,
a bit of sullen code derived from
their secret little idiosyncratic 
prison, of which they have
both pledged up till’ now a
few years of their young lives &
when it happens, the
“shushed” individual
who has been signaled not so
subtly, finds this to be uncalled
for & maybe it was the fact that
the train took so long to get 
them to where they wanted to
be or maybe it was the fact that
the dinner wasn’t worth the 
scratch or maybe, just maybe,
said individual has grown fed
up with their present partner in
crime’s attempt to silence them
as if they were a dog in the
midst of a whisperer.

what follows is an exchange
which though they both may 
regret later, though it may actually
destroy the connection between
both of them (for it reveals the
true nature of the deadened bond
between them---as its weight has
increased due to the public witness
of the event), it just might be the 
most honest that they have been
with each other in a long time.

Her Dying - a Memory -

She had a stroke six weeks before
and slept downstairs
'So they could keep an eye on her
- my lovely grandmother, Elizabeth.
I would whisper
'Granny, are you alright?'
and be shushed out of the room.
On December 12th, 1961
she was dying.  They knelt around the bed
and said the Rosary.
May and Lizzie, their husbands and children,
cousins and neighbours, droning their prayers.
As she struggled to breathe:  loud then slow and slowing,
the candle flickered shadows on the wall.
Sad faces, some old and lined, anticipating
the arrival of the Monsignor - to give her Unction.
They hoped that she would live until he arrived.
'She had a good life - a long life' they said
'Eighty-Seven years'.
'But some people live to be a hundred!'
my thirteen year old self shouted back -
My mother and the nurse laid her out
on her big mahogany bed.
'The ritual gave me comfort'
Mam said later -
Best linens, starched and waiting
for this time - her habit - a dress especially made for death
Beads entwined in her dear fingers.
These preparations a ceremony of love and care
I wouldn't, couldn't look at her
They did -
I hated them for that.
© Liz Walsh  Create an image from this poem.

Her Story

To be contained or content
Either way she’d be silent
Beyond life she’d find she was sure
Beauty galore

A small smile spelled more disaster
Than one wide and toothy, so much more like her
Shying away from conversation
Now that she’d given up all pretension

She could speak she supposed
But what was the satisfaction in being opposed
She was one they were many
Terrible beasts they were all, slaves of tyranny

Born as a burden
Lived sullen
Moved towards a starry sky
Only to find an empty night, sigh

Why her? She asks
Why the only one who doesn’t own masks
Never intruding, only living
Punished for being

Nobody saw the intelligence in her eyes
It died in all her strife, fights and cries
Nobody heard the confidence in her voice
It left when to live on, all she had left were lies

No one saw no one heard
They only perused, they only shushed
Poise and grace, her ultimate test
Mastered both yet didn’t get the crest

One of the lucky ones, ironically
For making it this far without being dead for all eternity
Part of another dwindling statistic
Part of another cause, a new uproar, much too futuristic

She is the mother
The sister and the daughter
The creation held as the closest to the creator
Yet she’s the one struggling to make it into the future

Her only fault, to be her
The only reason, her.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Mother

As I gather my thoughts, I can feel something break,
a prolonging absence that makes my heart ache.
I have many fond memories of which I hold dear,
but there is nothing I can do, but wish you were still here.

Every time I would fall you were always right there,
you would pick me back up, with a breath of fresh air.
With the sound of your voice and your kind gentle touch,
you always made me feel special, Mom, I miss you so much.

You now dwell in my heart and live on in my mind,
in my hour of need, you’re still easy to find.
With patience and love you brought my life joy,
even though I grow old, I am still your little boy.

You were my light in the darkness, you shushed all my screams,
in a cold evil world, you brought peace to my dreams.
You made the sun shine even brighter and the sky a deeper blue,
I had the world’s best mother, all because of you.

3/17/23
Writing Challenge – ‘M’ Words – Poetry Contest
Sponsor:  Constance La France
Form: Rhyme

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