The Featherbeds

The feather beds are a string of mountains near where I live, famous for its raised bog lands, where my father and his brothers cut turf for many years. In spring / summer a wild cotton flower blooms giving the mountains their name.


In youths embrace I walked in mountains,
My father’s steps I tried to follow.
He led the way from town to wilderness
And there it was my soul he freed.
Windswept hills of raised bog and peregrine,
Swooped winds flared the will of the wisp.
Cotton top flowers waved their white clouds,
Beckoning me,  to loose myself in awe.
Slain and sod, man and muscle worked as one,
Bright Heather draped the hills a regal hue.
Bracken fronds greened the soil of spring.
Larks and curlew cries hung upon the air. 
As my father shushed us to silence and embrace,
His wonderland of peace.
At seasons turn and Bracken colours fade,
Gorse and heather flair their restful hues.
Sheep saunter through with heads bowed, 
They slowly leave the mountain once again.
The feather beds dim as clouds dip low and veil.
And silence flees before winter wind and rain 
In adults disgrace I left the mountains,
My father’s steps hard to follow.
Still longing to find the way of wilderness
To free my soul once again and be with him.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A   Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 11:44 PM
congratulations...PD
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December 14, 2013 at 10:15 AM
Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem I'm looking forward to catching up on your poems over the next couple of weeks.
Deschler Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 11:32 PM
I liked your rich descriptions of the scenery. It really puts the reader into the story. This was very touching and heartfelt. An elegantly written piece of poetry! Congratulations on your well deserved win!...Thank you for the great comments and the kind congrats on my poem. I appreciate it very much!
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December 14, 2013 at 10:14 AM
Thank you for your very kind comments on my poem its greatly appreciated.
Gorelick Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 11:21 AM
This is wonderful...so deserving of a big win. BG
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December 14, 2013 at 10:11 AM
Thank you for your kind comment on my poem.
Hamilton Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 9:54 AM
seosamh this is truly lovey congrats on win Shadow x smile hugs
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December 13, 2013 at 10:59 AM
Thank you for your good wishes on my poem.
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December 13, 2013 at 8:45 AM
My friend, my father is so great for me.Even today i couldn't match his greatness as a father.I enjoyed reading your poem.awesome.(: )Jenish.
De Burca Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 10:27 AM
Hi thank you for taking the time to read and post a kind comment on my poem.
Mehta Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 8:19 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem nature, Congrats,
De Burca Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 10:26 AM
Hi thanks for reading and kind comment.
Posey Avatar
June 19, 2013 at 10:23 AM
This poem, like fine wine, gets better with age... Congratulations..... Jake
De Burca Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 7:07 AM
Thank you, for your very kind words and warm wishes.
May Avatar
June 19, 2013 at 9:58 AM
congrats on a fine win Seosamh
De Burca Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 7:08 AM
Thank you very much for your good wishes.
A   Avatar
June 19, 2013 at 9:48 AM
Hi Seosamh I'd like to say ~CONGRATULATIONS~ always & forever * LINDA
De Burca Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 7:08 AM
Thank you for your good wishes Linda.
A  Avatar
June 19, 2013 at 9:22 AM
SEASAMH, ;-) CONGRATULATIONS!!! THANK YOU FOR THE AWESOME POEM. *LUV ~SKAT~
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June 20, 2013 at 7:09 AM
Hi and thank you for your good wishes.
A  Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 2:22 PM
This is a very good poem, CONGRATS! ;-) ~SKAT~
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June 1, 2013 at 7:21 PM
Hi and thank you for your kind and positive words, I appreciate them very much.
A   Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 9:48 AM
Seosamh, Congratulations in Kim M's contest... have yourself a nice one... xox~ LINDA
De Burca Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 7:15 PM
Thank you Linda.
Sirak Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 7:40 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your love for the place and your father shine brightly from your words
De Burca Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 7:15 PM
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment.
Richards Avatar
May 31, 2013 at 7:24 PM
Described so beautifully, that I can almost feel the wilderness beneath my feet and see the mountains of which you speak. Lovely poem. Nice to share this spot with you! Congratulations!
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June 1, 2013 at 7:14 PM
Thank you for your kind words, I enjoyed reading your poem and congrats to you also.
May Avatar
May 31, 2013 at 6:07 PM
congrats on a great win Seosamh
De Burca Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 7:13 PM
Thank you very much.
Morrison Avatar
May 31, 2013 at 5:30 PM
A very beautiful piece of work. Thanks submitting it and congrats. Kim
De Burca Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 7:12 PM
Thank you for accepting my entry and your very kind words. I appreciate it.
Phookan Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 7:36 AM
Beauty that penetrates all things in nature. You've drawn beautiful scenes here in your poem and lovely landscaping!! Congrats, Seosamh!!
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May 27, 2013 at 1:13 PM
Thank you very much for reading and your kind comments on my poem.
Gasun Avatar
May 23, 2013 at 10:05 PM
This is a very delightful and beautiful poem to read! Big congratulations on your fantastic win my dear Seosamh! love/hugs, Leonora
De Burca Avatar
May 25, 2013 at 4:07 PM
Thank you very much for your congrats and taking the time to read and comment on my poem.
Roberts Avatar
May 23, 2013 at 1:27 AM
Congratulations for writing such a lovely poem and for getting a place in the contest...Seren
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May 25, 2013 at 4:05 PM
Thank you for good wishes and reading my poem.
May Avatar
May 22, 2013 at 2:32 PM
beautiful poem ....congrats on a great win
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May 25, 2013 at 4:03 PM
Hi thank you for the good wishes and taking the time to read and comment.
Posey Avatar
May 22, 2013 at 10:52 AM
After this one, your talent will always precede you. Congratulations on a beautifully structured winning write... Jake
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May 22, 2013 at 1:45 PM
Hi Jake thank you for commenting and reading my poem. Your kind words are greatly appreciated. S.
A   Avatar
May 22, 2013 at 9:05 AM
Seosamh, CONGRATULATIONS!!! :-) thank you for the wonderful nature poem... Luv~ Luv~ LINDA
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May 22, 2013 at 1:44 PM
Thank you for all your encouragement, kindness and generosity. yeeeeaaaa its the first time I have ever received acknowledgement for a competition I have entered, its made my day. Thank you.
Jones Avatar
April 28, 2013 at 4:31 PM
This is too beautiful to to find the words...you really need to enter some of those contests so other people will discover your wonderful poems...
De Burca Avatar
April 29, 2013 at 12:49 AM
Hi Donna, thank you for reading and commenting on my poem, I look forward to reading more of your work :).
A   Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 9:08 PM
Hello Seosamh, stopping by to read your embracing poem, I love the path you are willing to take... even though you say the steps are hard to follow.. your dad is proud of you right now... xox~ Linda
De Burca Avatar
April 29, 2013 at 12:48 AM
Hi and thank you Linda for taking the time to read another of my poems and commenting on it so nicely too.
De Burca Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 8:08 PM
The feather beds are a string of mountains near where I live, famous for its raised bog lands, which my father and his brothers cut turf for many years. In spring / summer a wild cotton flower blooms giving the mountains their name.
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