Best Sacrifice Poems


Premium Member A Father's Sacrifice

I loved you the first day
I saw those big brown eyes blinking,
taking in your first moments of life.
Not a tear nor a little scream,
you seemed sheltered in my arms.

That was the day I promised to keep you safe and warm.

I remember your attempts to call for me,
gradually turning into 'daddy, daddy, daddy.'
First crawling like a caterpillar, following my every step,
to walking and grabbing my legs.
There you would be waiting at the door, 
always knew when daddy would come home from work.
Telling me you loved me and I was your hero,
as you ran around in your fairy princess dresses.

I promised to make all your dreams come true.

I remember the smiles, tears and laughter,
our special song we sang together -
although you didn't know the words, still you sang along -
now your voice is like a melodious nightingale.
Every time you would fall, always looked towards me,
I would come running and raise you to the sky.
Wiping your tears, spreading those imaginary wings,
but in my heart hoping you would never learn to fly.

When I fell, trials of your father, I kept inside,
hoping you would not see my pain nor the burdens.

Guess you will never know the sacrifices of your father.

How quick you grew, all tall and hair full of locks and curls.
Slowly daddy, turned into dad and being your taxi!
Now you say you are seventeen and you think you know it all,
but you do not realize, you'll always be a baby in my eyes.

If only you could see through your father's eyes.

Sometimes you do not understand why I say no,
and those mini tantrums never last too long.
I know in the future it will all make sense.

You dream about studying far, far away,
travelling this wild, crazy, mysterious world.
Yet, I know every road you venture upon,
one of them will lead you back home.

When days are sunny, 
you smile sweetly, walking headstrong,
but when there is thunder and rain clouds follow -
those sweet brown eyes always turn to me -
always ending in 'thank you for being my daddy.'
Adding to the millions of 'I love you more.'

Little do you know that is impossible.

Silent One
5 October 2020
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The Cross

How can it be that He who knew no sin
Should suffer searing pain upon the cross
And crowned with mocking thorns which pierced his skin
Exchange love’s purity for mankind’s dross?

Why did deep darkness cloak the trembling land
As, crucified He gasped His final breath?
And was it cruel fate or ever planned
That thus the Prince of peace should meet His death?

No accident, but God’s amazing grace
Allowed this act of sacrificial pain.
For Jesus bore God’s judgement in our place
That everlasting life might be our gain.

The cross is where the wounds of sin were healed
And through Christ’s anguish man's salvation sealed.

Date Written : 27.02.19
The cross	N/A 	A Meaningful Poem - 	Constance La France	4/24/2021

Spoonful of Rice

(This is a universal story of mother’s sacrifice for their children, be it material, emotional, or intellectual.)


It was during the Korean War
Father was taken away by the Communists
Months ago
He never returned

Mother and I were left alone
In an island as refugees
Without anyone supporting us

One day
Mother brought a cup of rice
For me to eat
Only three spoonful
In the cup

I gobbled it up
Without much thought
Feeling still hungry

Mother took the cup in the kitchen
Closed the door

Through a crack
I saw Mother scraping
Scraping the bottom of the cup
For a few grains left
She licked the spoon over and over

How long has she been hungry
To feed me?
I froze
Really froze

I quietly left the room
To a beach nearby
Looking at the horizon
Where ocean met the sky
Far far away

Wanting to swim
Toward it
Until my strength
Sapped to nil
So that Mother didn't have to
Feed another mouth

Then a question surfaced
Will she be happy without me
So she can feed herself?

No way
Was my answer
She has already lost
Many of her loved ones
Without me
She will not go on living

I stood
With my heart filled with
Opposing forces
Resumed my walk
Toward Mother


Premium Member Love Words

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                                                          eros Phileo affinity togetherness 
adore fondness blessings intimacy
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written 22 Aug 2020
© John Watt  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member She Came To Me

She came to me in the noon day sun..
her world wistful, longing for an unsung quiet.

But I would not remain still, nor silent,  
though her hours in life, never meant for long.

Desperately I grasped her up in loving embrace.. 
And in her arms cried, please let her remain!

I offered myself in sacrifice to assuage,  
but enchanted sirens called sweetly, come., 
and left me alone on an empty stage.

Sacrifice

It was during WWII
Japan ruled 
Koreans obeyed

Japan ordered
All Koreans
Walk up to Shinto Temple
And bow down to the picture
Of their emperor

Are you kidding?
My father scoffed
My God is god of Jesus Christ
Him will I only serve

My father was taken to prison

My brother Hi-Seung volunteered
To join the military
To have his father released

He left home
As a vibrant 15 year old boy
He returned home
As an injured 18 year old man
He died a year later

Before he died
I looked forward
To every tomorrow

When he died
The light went out of my life
He was my best friend

My heart still yearns for him
More than sixty years later

I wish there is a place
Called heaven
So that I can hold his hand
Look up to him with smile
When I get there


Premium Member A Mother's Love, Steels Her To Infinite Faith and Sacrifice

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A Mother's Love, Steels Her To Infinite Faith And Sacrifice

She cooked breakfast, got her kids off to school
took a brief rest on her favorite stool,
watched through front window as life flew on by
always and always, asking herself why,
dreams came but were rarely ever fulfilled
even hot summer days, her soul was chilled.

She prepared lunch, so delicious for two
even tho' where he was she had no clue,
out that window she saw sun beaming bright
he had gone so far away, out of sight,
dreams came, but his needed return did not
still a prayer said for what she has got.

She cooked another meal, kids must be fed
her heart crying, is he alive or dead,
not knowing, was a deep pain of its own
hurts eating deeper in her aching bones,
dreams they came, washing dark with lonesome night
she felt the weariness of her sad plight.

She saw the bus stop, her kids piling out
her daughter beautiful, her son so stout,
racing home, they both laughing all the way
she thanking God for yet another day,
her dreams came, her spirit asked yet again
why did he leave them, please God do explain.

Days chores done, all over her body ached
pray she with her deep faith, none of it faked
a quick shower then off to get some rest
in bed wondering, have I done my best
her dreams sang softly, this shall one day end
then your blessings, divine mercy will send.

Robert J. Lindley, 
Rhyme, ( In Tribute ) 
( A Mother's Sacrifice, Her Love, Brave And So True )
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Premium Member Mother's Sacrifice

A mother was born and dreamed of a beautiful life.
A new journey had begun - but a hard path lay ahead.
Demons seduced her companion - leaving her alone.
The land was foreign and dark clouds appeared above.
Child in hand, mother reached an ambiguous cross road.
Before setting foot upon the long way - 
her conscience enquired:

 "Are you sure this is the right path? 
It will be difficult, full of pain" 

The mother smiled as she saw hope in her infant's eyes.
A real mother would sacrifice her own happiness for a child.
Storms came on dark days with thunder and lightning but, 
she kept her child dry and secure. 
Winters came with cold days and masonic winds,
but she kept her child warm and protected. 
Sometimes she would not eat - but kept her child nourished. 
In secrecy, tears would fall - her son would only see a happy mask.

There were days when life was burdensome
and full of worry that shook in fear. 
Defeating hazards and obstacles, she guided her son 
along the terrain of the highest mountain. 
When they reached the top her son reassured his mother:

 "Thank you mother - I would not have got here without you,
you can let go now. I think I will be OK from here." 

His mother smiled with pride - her boy was now a man.
When her son was at a loss - his mother would remind him:

"Son you only learn from losing." 

When her son fell numerous times -
his mother gave him hope and taught him faith: 

"Son, you can't control what happens to you in life, 
but you can control how you react to it." 

With the love and prayers of his mother,
he rose time and time again, until he stood strong.  

Life is full of trials and tests - being optimistic will help defeat hardship. Loving others will give them belief and a reason to live.

When someone moves mountains for you,
you make sure these obstacles are no barriers for them,
when the times comes to shelter them.
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The Ultimate Sacrifice

I am the Unknown Soldier, i stand guard here on my own.
    For those who fought for freedom, but never returned home.
    They lie where they had fallen, in everlasting  peace.
    Long since ago their comrades, who prayed by unmarked graves
    Did speak in truth of valour, displayed on battle fields.
    And i, in silence listened, bore witness to their deeds.
    Now they speak with reverence, of human sacrifice.
    And poppies tell their story, of days when reason died.
    Come the hour when bugles play, The Last Post, rest in peace.
    It is my solemn duty, to bear each soldiers pride.
    They look and say it's raindrops, when tears weep from my eyes,
    For those children of those children, of those who came before.
    I see great sadness and respect, bring comfort to their souls.
    Then as the setting sun goes down, i stand vigil all alone.

    8 / 29 / 2017.     
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Premium Member Christ's Sacrifice

Unclothed
Anguished
Bloodshed
Outstretched
Was totally unclothed, anguished soul
Hands sides thorned head bloodshed, outstretched whole

I Can Sacrifice For You

© Rodgers Roger 

Every single day 
Sunrise to sunset
I think of you,
How whole
And how well
God endowed you
With beauty so incomparable, 
Yet I can't stand going through a life, 
Knowing You will never be mine.

To cherish you I will
To treasure I shall
To long for you I do,
Just like your presence,
Your absence tires me apart
But you can't help it
Who you fall in love for, 
Its not like choosing which taxi 
To carry you through,
So I understand

If I am asked to say the last word,
I would go speechless
Your story leaves me incompetent 
I see many things that leave me tongue twisted, 
As I slowly die away.

I would courageously say it
That you rock my life,
But you wouldn’t care,
So what would be left of me
Than to kiss your soft lips and run away,
As I risk the silence you would blow on me forever?

But I can't keep this heart of mine dreaming,
Things that will never happen, 
If we can’t make them happen,
I will make one step back
But not step away
I will nail this love for you
And surrender my last passion
I will make a sacrifice

I will do anything you ask of me, 
Even pull a sharp spear 
Into this heart that bleeds for you, 
So that blood can stream out this chamber,
Since without you my life isn't worth the save.

I would sacrifice anything for you my brainteaser,
My early morning song, Yes I would sacrifice for you
But only when you know,
And believe 
I'll never stop loving you,
Even to the deep dark grave
I would go smiling
If only I know
You distinguish my love
From other people

Sponsor:	SKAT A
Contest Name: Any Old Poem Will Do 
Poet: Rodgers Roger Carter 
Date:7/17/2014 
Time:12:00:00 AM

Premium Member Easter, Thee Sacrifice

Easter will again be here and very soon,
But Easter brings sadness I cannot seem to prune.
After my Mother left, Easter's not the same
Since our Lord, to bring her home, called upon her name.

Easter this year in two thousand and eighteen
Will be even harder, I cannot contravene.
For my little girl, who's not so little any more
Will spend this Easter far away, on a distant shore.

So many memories of Easter though, will decorate my brain,
As I turn back the clock, letting all share the reign.
All the Easter baskets and the Easter hunts so fun,
Each memory I dust off carefully, every precious one.

I'll watch the Ten Commandments, keep our tradition true,
Remembering Easter's true meaning, Jesus is why we do.
When God Sacrificed His Son, what a Sacrifice He made,
For through the Blood of Jesus, our sins for, He paid.

When I think of God being stricken so with profound grief
To watch His Son suffer on the cross forbidden of relief,
This brings to mind surreally the magnitude of pain
I'm unable to comprehend and my tears I can't restrain.

For I think of my daughter and all those overseas,
Who put their lives on the line without guarantees
They'll come home safe and sound when their tour is done
And also, all the families who've lost a dear, loved one.

I know this is not the same but I more so realize
And I am humbled so profoundly as I can't visualize
The cost of God's Sacrifice because God so Loves us all
And to my knees it brings me, for I can only God, extol.

Easter 2018 - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer 

2018-03-30

Sacrifice

Something is wrong
The eerie silence sends shivers up my spine
I smell danger
But I am fearless

Out of the corner of my eye I see them
We need to act fast
I tell you to run
And don’t stop

I run for my life
I realize you’re no longer with me
I turn back
Determined to fight for you

I run as silently as I can
Adrenalin pumping through my veins
I see you lying there unconscious and bleeding
My eyes burn with anger

I take my chance
I need to save you
I try to fight them off around you
I pick you up and run

The weight of your body in my arms is exhausting
My body is weak but I don’t stop running
Gun shots are fired in the background
I drop to my knees wounded

I must get you to safety
I drag you and hide you as best I can
I try to run away, more shots are fired
I collapse with agonizing pain, everything is a blur

In my final moments I hear sirens, running footsteps
Now I know you are safe
I drift into a deep sleep
Never to wake up again

Sacrifice

Love is always a sacrifice.
What would you willingly give
for love to live?
Your wealth?
Your religion?
Your job?
Your identity?
Your weapons?
Your fame?
Your friends?
Your family?’
Your home?
Your life?
What would you willingly give
for love to live?

By:  Carole O’Terry Duet
Copyright:  4/27/2019
“All Rights Reserved”

How Much Love

Do you feel
That you could steal
To feed your children
Would you be ok
If you had to say
My kidney to a stranger
To remove him from danger
Could you keep
Three jobs with no sleep
To keep a roof over your heads
Or give up your life
To protect your wife
Would you deliver that baby
If there is a chance maybe
You wouldn't survive the birth
Do you have the will
If you had to kill
To save an innocent
How much love would it take
To lay down your life for someone else's sake
Could you give up your only Son
To save everyone

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