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Second attempt at Tyburn..Still not easy..

Christ's Sacrifice

Unclothed
Anguished
Bloodshed
Outstretched
Was totally unclothed, anguished soul
Hands sides thorned head bloodshed, outstretched whole
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Moribund Avatar
September 27, 2011 at 6:37 PM
Hi Sara: Quite a powerful poem of faith...fantastic. It reminds me of the movie "The Passion". Thanks (again) for taking the time 2 read and comment on my poem. PEACE!!!
Moriarty Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 9:18 AM
I wonder how many folks really give thought to that which Jesus endured for each of us, wonderful write - tremendous food for thought, thank you
Horne Avatar
August 17, 2011 at 5:03 PM
Powerful and moving write, my friend.
Ball Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 9:56 AM
Yes indeed my friend. All for us. And look at how much appreciation is shown. A good write to remind us what He did for us. God Bless, JB
Sadberry Avatar
August 14, 2011 at 5:52 PM
Ps. Smile, *^_#* “Thanks for Stopping By &, Have A Blessed & Beautiful Evening, My Dear!” *
Sadberry Avatar
August 14, 2011 at 5:48 PM
Smile, *^_^* “You Know, I Stood Within Heaven Inside of `His Majesties Beautiful Loving Arms,` Nearly Two-Thousand Years After This Moment My Dear Precious & Priceless Sara! *^_^* And His Glory Showed Myself His Indiscribable Love As, Very Few In This World Have EVER Known *^_^* Sooo, I Can Surely Attest That, `The King of The Universe,` Is Alive, Flowing With Beautiful Love & Doing, Absolutely & Perfectly, Well! *^_^* Great Poe.” === My Love to You Always, Jasper *
Horne Avatar
August 14, 2011 at 5:26 PM
Moving piece, Sara - and an interesting form I've never tried
White Avatar
August 14, 2011 at 9:38 AM
A very descriptive write of what did happen.
Ross Jr. Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 6:29 PM
Awesome descriptive write of pain..and thirty lashes with the cruel Roman Throng, excellent tribute to Our Lord and Savior the Christ....with love...old Jack
Onclaud Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 3:58 PM
a enduring hymn of devotion and praise, sara.. so apt and beautoful for this weekend and thereafter..:) hugggs, nette
Osita Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 1:33 PM
Devotional write on the suffering of our lord. Sara,thanks for sharing
Sweetheart Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 12:54 PM
a vivid portrait of HIS agony and death Sara .. outstanding emotion in every line my friend.. we all should recall this sacrifice every day in our lives..luv..
Nair Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 7:31 AM
Thank you for your wishes, jag
Dietrich Avatar
August 12, 2011 at 10:08 PM
hmmm, I will have to check out the rules on this form. I think I see a pattern from how you did yours. Nice theme, Sara.
Mehta Avatar
August 12, 2011 at 9:22 PM
Successfully tried Tyburn, Sara. what a a nice devotion,
Sivey Avatar
August 12, 2011 at 8:49 PM
I love the subject matter! Good good write!!
Susan Avatar
August 12, 2011 at 8:10 PM
I really like this one. im not familiar w/the form but i like how it turned out - very descriptive! btw, did someone suggest you write in this form?
Baity Avatar
August 12, 2011 at 7:53 PM
This is great Sara, a wonderful tribute......luv...chiquita
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