Notes About The Poem

This one is dedicated to my daughter, who said I do not express how I feel towards her.

The poem made her cry...

Not my normal style, but thought I would post it as a reminder for her.

 

A Father's Sacrifice

I loved you the first day I saw those big brown eyes blinking, taking in your first moments of life. Not a tear nor a little scream, you seemed sheltered in my arms. That was the day I promised to keep you safe and warm. I remember your attempts to call for me, gradually turning into 'daddy, daddy, daddy.' First crawling like a caterpillar, following my every step, to walking and grabbing my legs. There you would be waiting at the door, always knew when daddy would come home from work. Telling me you loved me and I was your hero, as you ran around in your fairy princess dresses. I promised to make all your dreams come true. I remember the smiles, tears and laughter, our special song we sang together - although you didn't know the words, still you sang along - now your voice is like a melodious nightingale. Every time you would fall, always looked towards me, I would come running and raise you to the sky. Wiping your tears, spreading those imaginary wings, but in my heart hoping you would never learn to fly. When I fell, trials of your father, I kept inside, hoping you would not see my pain nor the burdens. Guess you will never know the sacrifices of your father. How quick you grew, all tall and hair full of locks and curls. Slowly daddy, turned into dad and being your taxi! Now you say you are seventeen and you think you know it all, but you do not realize, you'll always be a baby in my eyes. If only you could see through your father's eyes. Sometimes you do not understand why I say no, and those mini tantrums never last too long. I know in the future it will all make sense. You dream about studying far, far away, travelling this wild, crazy, mysterious world. Yet, I know every road you venture upon, one of them will lead you back home. When days are sunny, you smile sweetly, walking headstrong, but when there is thunder and rain clouds follow - those sweet brown eyes always turn to me - always ending in 'thank you for being my daddy.' Adding to the millions of 'I love you more.' Little do you know that is impossible.
Silent One 5 October 2020
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Jones Avatar
November 20, 2020 at 10:14 AM
Beautiful. Fathers are just amazing and often don't get the acknowledgement. Loved this.
One Avatar
November 20, 2020 at 2:25 PM
Thank you... I agree
Herrick Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 4:06 AM
I am sorry for trying. Beautiful Love
One Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 6:45 AM
What do you mean you are sorry for trying? We all need such love, sadly I did not have it from my father.
Y. Avatar
October 29, 2020 at 7:43 AM
WoW! Silent, This poem touched me deeply because it made me think of my own father and the sacrifices he made. A child doesn’t really get nor understand the sacrifices of a parent until years later, when they are a grown adult with children of their own. And a belated congrats for getting awarded poem of day. It was well deserved:-)Alexis
One Avatar
October 29, 2020 at 10:41 AM
Thank you..
Edmonds  Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 6:25 PM
How wonderful to have a poem like that written by one’s dad, and a dad to have such a lovely daughter. Love is what allows a child to bloom and grow, you’ve certainly got it right. . . Belle
Davidson Avatar
October 23, 2020 at 5:01 AM
2 brown eyed daughters and a grand daughter, needs a warning and waterproof mascara! A joy to read.
Galia Avatar
October 17, 2020 at 10:14 AM
Big thank you for sharing such a wonderful poem. I have a daughter and so can relate it very well. "One of them would lead you back home" What a relief !!
Castellenas Avatar
October 15, 2020 at 2:02 PM
A wonderful poem shared. I have three daughters and now four grandchildren. Outstanding song and beautiful poetry. Thank you for sharing.
Galia Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 7:13 PM
I really loved your poem and could relate it so well..Nice work!
Mariotti Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 1:22 PM
Very beautiful poem. A Dad is a special person and I miss mine a lot. He passed away in 2011 from a stroke. He was my Dad and my best buddy. Very beautiful, heart-warming prose you've written. Celine Rose Mariotti
Ray Choudhury Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 7:06 AM
An immensely touching and endearing poem about father-daughter relationship! Reminds me of my father. Congratulations on POTD. Best wishes, Mala
One Avatar
October 12, 2020 at 5:45 AM
Thank you
Proxenos Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 2:37 AM
This is the most touching poem about father and daughter - sounds like myself and my father. Simply pure love at its zenith which cannot go any further - it is pure and warm, sensitive and save and will always be even after your baby girl gets married. Daddy will always be her daddy. A beautiful poem SO - love it to bits. Congratulations on the honor of POTD awarded for this beauty. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
One Avatar
October 12, 2020 at 5:45 AM
Thank you..Glad you liked it
Daniel Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 1:03 AM
Such a touching write, Silent One, I'm sure you are a wonderful father:)
One Avatar
October 12, 2020 at 5:46 AM
Thank you...
Michael Avatar
October 10, 2020 at 8:49 AM
Well, you wrote a lovely poem for her...Congratulations Silent One on POTD
One Avatar
October 12, 2020 at 5:46 AM
Thank you...
Ashley Avatar
October 9, 2020 at 8:13 AM
Silent One, your endearing and moving poem moves me to the very depths of my being. How precious the life and the love you've given to your daughter - and now, this incredibly deep and expressive poem. How wondrous for your daughter to be the inspiration of this amazing piece. What a beautiful gift for her! Congratulations on your well-deserved, and oh so worthy, recognition with POTD honors. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
One Avatar
October 12, 2020 at 5:46 AM
Thank you..
Crabtree Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 4:29 PM
Beautifully written. My favorite words, I remember the smiles, tears and laughter, our special song we sang together. ~Angie
One Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 6:46 AM
Thank you Angie..
Dietrich Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 3:09 PM
the word for this one is PRECIOUS. You have to give this to your daughter. She sounds cute as a bug.
One Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 6:46 AM
Thank you..
Leiser Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 8:41 PM
Oh, this is so heartfelt and touching, Silent! The love of a parent for their child is so immense and strong, and you captured that essence so well in your poetic words! Love this one! :)
One Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 9:30 AM
Thank you... I think any parent and child can relate to this one.
Buehler Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 8:34 PM
Such a touching, beautiful verse, full of the tenderness of a father's love and devotion. It's a fave for me. Thank you for sharing. :)
One Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 9:30 AM
Thank you, glad you liked it
Roper Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 5:38 PM
Congratulations on POTD :)
One Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 9:31 AM
Thanks
Doll Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 4:54 PM
Silent One, so beautiful!! You made me remember my Dad, Thank You. Congratulations on POTD. An instant fav for me. Warmest Wishes~ Warren
One Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 9:32 AM
Thank you... It's beautiful when poems do that...
Smith Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 2:35 PM
Lovely write SO, congratulations for being the right kind of DAD...
One Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 9:33 AM
Thank you... I try
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 11:55 AM
I wish every father could have such love and devotion for their child. This is such an inspiring and beautiful look at fatherhood. Congratulations on having it honored for POTD Silent! Blessings xxoo
One Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 9:33 AM
So do I, because mine didn't.. Thank you
Andresen Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 11:05 AM
- A love that is deeply rooted and will be there forever ... wonderfully beautifully written, S.O. :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 9:35 AM
Thank you..
Kauffman Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 10:32 AM
Really beautiful, SO. This lovely poem really does reflect the ages and stages of a parent child relationship. I love the short refrain in between each stanza. Congratulations on your POTD!
One Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 9:35 AM
Thank you
Goldsmith Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 9:32 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A wonderful story/write. I love your line, "Little do you know that is impossible." So very true. They grow up so fast. Enjoy your win and day..............
One Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 9:34 AM
Thank you..
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