Best Rebuttals Poems
Do I Cast An Aura of Dark EnergyWritten with admiration for Tom Cunningham ~ a gentle poet
maligned by one who really casts an aura of darkness
My smile is genuine and reaches to my eyes.
I do not wear a mask, nor a cloak of disguise
and I post poetry in my given Christian name.
From...
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Categories:
rebuttals, how i feel, perspective,
Form:
Rhyme
The Things That Boys DoBoys do boys BREAKS toys. Knick knack paddy wack. Give. A dog. A bone.
Some say the things that boys do are wrong and even more wrong still.
Pushing a go cart up a steep steep hill. Wrestling down steps and falling.
Breaking bones. Being home...
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Categories:
rebuttals, anger, angst, baseball, basketball,
Form:
Prose
Well, I DeclareWhy, yes, that’s a picture of me there
You cannot believe I was once fair
Just look at your belly
It bounces like jelly
It seems you’re now ready to compare
At least I have hair you can envy
That wig...
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Categories:
rebuttals, humor,
Form:
Limerick
That Delicious SomethingIt started off simple enough - a peck on the cheek.
(nothing tantalizing by any means)
But then she did that delicious something
... that made my whole body weak.
And before any could protest,
with their carefully organized rebuttals,
all Common Sense ran for the hills,
but I was already at...
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Categories:
rebuttals, beauty, desire, emotions, heaven,
Form:
Romanticism
Purple Nirvana Journal‘PURPLE NIRVANA JOURNAL’
Dedicated to the legendary Kurt Cobain—(20 February 1967—5 April 1994)
“What else could I write—I don’t have the right.....”
Words are a big pile of contradiction—split down the middle, sincerity and fiction
Feelings we have, sarcastic rebuttals—bohemian clichés exhausted and shuffled
Finding my nest of salt—every word...
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Categories:
rebuttals, tribute, sun,
Form:
Ode
Between the LinesIn an otherwise
uneventuful
morning, between the
roles we locked
eyes, bantering
without
mincing words, allowing
futures, names, and
rebuttals to
stem from our hearts
unmuffled, and
mingle.
A fearless
gig between the
staves ensued, bringing
us to melt in a
timeless
embrace of playful
reminders of our
unmistakeable, unshakeable, and
unutterable bond.
In a...
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Categories:
rebuttals, allegory, dance, language, love,
Form:
Free verse
Means To My EndObstinate eyes, worn I, dart shadows wished pretend,
Spun ‘round by carousel, too quick for lines to bend,
See only empty space no shackled dare transcend,
Beneath dishonest moon, short innocence to lend;
Well mannered hope once held from schools raw fish attend
Has turned against me now,...
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Categories:
rebuttals, lost love,
Form:
Monorhyme
Duped Sons of the Gun
Rile up the rifling rowdies
at the Red River rawhide rally
A new Mustang Sally came rip-roaring muscling in
from the lower Staten Island end of Stalingrad
Treachery forged American made profit wad
Wearing a commie armband,
purporting to be party repping
concerned Russian citizens
Whose sickle and hammer banner
is the sacred “Right...
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Categories:
rebuttals, allegory, business, political, truth,
Form:
Alliteration
MudI’d say something cheesy, like: You light up my life. But, there is no light in these veins. There is only blood; an ever coursing river of things I haven’t read enough about to fully understand. You are that mystery, steady and distantly piercing grace....
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Categories:
rebuttals, deep, heartbroken, imagery, introspection,
Form:
Prose
Fossilitis IgnoratiousIf your ego is capacious
Or your appetite voracious
For a plucky, pertinacious
Confidence in cherished creeds,
Then your genius, though sagacious,
Conjures arguments audacious
Never seeing they’re fallacious:
Truth be told, you’re in the weeds.
Your disease: a contumacious
Predilection for tenacious
Relics of the late Cretaceous
Buried deep within your soul.
Now the clash of...
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Categories:
rebuttals, funny, humor, humorous, mental
Form:
Light Verse
Solid As a RockThis morning came and I arose to open my eyes ….
I left little to the imagination; because there you stood to my surprise …
Oh how can this be my love; how are you standing right here….?
I know we share this bond so I shall thank...
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Categories:
rebuttals, loveme, life, love, me,
Form:
The Dark Clouds of Changerain falls today as we accept
the dark clouds of change
puddles of blood reach the eye
of the storm once well hidden
my galoshes are like internal
quicksand at its wits end's peak
my umbrella is temperamental for
life, and my brain is a deluge of
confusion
hail slams...
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Categories:
rebuttals, poetry,
Form:
Free verse
Free Cee At the Midnight PowerAT THE MIDNIGHT POWER
As a writer I seek sanctuary in every sentence, sentiment and syllable spoken
As a man I possess a soul bought, bastardized and broken
These are traits that rate reviews worthy of nothing much
With a psyche which summarily succumbed to sorrow and such
My soul...
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Categories:
rebuttals, angst,
Form:
Quatrain
Amongst GiantsAmongst giants, humbled, we become others.
Confidently content, no need for rebuttals.
Amongst giants, silence, for he is quiet by nature.
Similarities are subtle, for we have the same maker.
Amongst giants, admiration for her strength and duty.
Our differences are distinct, as man becomes moody.
Amongst giants, we...
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Categories:
rebuttals, peace,
Form:
Couplet
My Own Demon of DestructionWhen the challenge has become the quest
The pressure is great to outshine
The fear tries to crawl to the surface
Again will I fall victim to my ambition
The stacks so high
In time I have months
But I want it all now
As it all sucks me in
I can't...
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Categories:
rebuttals, adventure, fear, stress,
Form:
Free verse