Best Primitive Poems

Roses are red
violets are blue
Your mouth is rubber
My feelings are glue
Why must you hate
I haven't a clue
Your narcissistic
Negative mind
Affects us too
Every time
Soon you'll find
Yourself alone
But before I go
I've got one more poem
Sticks and stones
May break my bones
But your words really f****** hurt...

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Deep rooted symbol in the Inuit culture, the inukshuk is rudimentary, primitive but effective communication. Through centuries, it is still a practical directional marker used as vital hunting and navigation aids, coordination points, indicators, and message centers. 

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Simple, innocent and decent they were
Never timid for they were raw
Always observant
Always on their own and supportive when needed
Doing what they felt was right
No diversity in religion 
No contradictory ideologies
No rigorous search for true love
For in their environment existed real and true love
Food they had...

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Bent down blue in prismatic fashion
refracted in reflection mirrored in sight
flames flicker and my mind twirls
round and round with an image seen
dancing with the flight of the flame
absorbed in defiance of the perceived sane

Primitive pictures bringing about motion
fauna at play in the peaceful meadow
the cobalt...

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My Primitive World

When people hear I live on an isle, 
They ask me things that make me smile. 
Like, “Do you gals still wear grass skirts, 
And do you live in houses made of dirt?” 

I tell them that I’m sitting here in my cave...

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Primitive Humans

Living on what God provides

Going day by day

No choice, but to trust God.

And they enjoy miracles.



For the Tanka contest

Written March 22, 2012...

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I OPENED A DOOR
TO A PRIMITIVE WORLD,
AT THE VERY SAME TIME,
SOME KIND OF A BURROW

IT'S HARD TO BELIEVE,
SUCH A PLACE COULD EXIST.
THIS WAS THE FUTURE,
WITH A PRIMITIVE TWIST.

THEY'RE REALLY NOT PEOPLE,
BUT A LOT MORE LIKE SLAVES.
CONTROLLED AND CONDITIONED
BY FREQUENCY WAVES.

WITH NO SENSE OF LOGIC,
AND NO...

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Prime-ary Standards.
Behind every actor.
Smiles in grief.
Like the fake styles this week.
In silence there's screams.
We're all lost.
In the onslaught 
Of lost thoughts
way beyond god
and material fashion....

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She is so primitive, someone whispered.
I smirked, knowing they meant me.
Odd for sure, another agreed. Someone who never met me.
But of course had heard the rumors.

I am primal, I told them, telepathically.
But they were too advanced to pick up on it.
Too far evolved from their...

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A bloody mass
of mutilated souls
chaos born from our primal instincts
a ravaged mess
of broken spirits
eternally falling
into the darkness...

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I'm sorry did I wake you?
I tried to tip toe past your door.
Was it your conscience that woke you?
Or my tears dripping on the floor?

I know I muffled my sobbing..
My internal pain you can not hear.
So it must be that your guilt ridden..
From how you...

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Tuck me under the blundering sun
When I was the younger wondering one,

I could make liquid diamonds from dew
I could be fairly invisible too,
Spying on bugs while hiding from you
Back when the color green was still blue,
And every day was worth walking through
My view was not...

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I’ve watched those blokes on YouTube
Building using primitive skills and gathering food
I’ve come to the conclusion so readily
To survive after the apocalypse won’t be done so easily

For firstly you need a tropical jungle to find
And having bamboo available brings to mind
This can be used for...

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(19th century Tibetan Wangden rug)

Primal Properties

I look around at all the art I have collected
An assortment of inherited, home made and bought,
Ranging from African to Asian to Persian
With a smattering of European and American 
In paintings and ceramics, carvings and weavings,
And the quality of primitive...

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Hand sewn farm patch quilt 
Primitive paintings 
Sheep, pigs, cows, chickens
Snow falling outside
My kitchen decor

Peace in my heart
Comfort from home
Backs of my teeth
Soft, warm cat fur

Girls giggles 
Time ticking
Heat humming 

Apples
Laundry 

Wine...

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