Primitive Minds

Prime-ary Standards.
Behind every actor.
Smiles in grief.
Like the fake styles this week.
In silence there's screams.
We're all lost.
In the onslaught 
Of lost thoughts
way beyond god
and material fashion.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

A   Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 11:19 PM
reza, Fantastic writing, glad to read your poem tonight. Forever ~LINDA~
A  Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 9:51 AM
Reza D, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace