Primitive

Primitive Humans

Living on what God provides

Going day by day

No choice, but to trust God.

And they enjoy miracles.



For the Tanka contest

Written March 22, 2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Andresen Avatar
March 24, 2012 at 5:04 PM
Like this alot Christopher, well done! - luck to you in contest! - oxox love Anne-Lise
Bunton Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 4:02 PM
Thank you!!
Onclaud Avatar
March 24, 2012 at 1:32 PM
soulful tanka... greeat; well done, christopher!..:) winning huggs
Bunton Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 4:01 PM
Thank you!!
Horne Avatar
March 24, 2012 at 8:36 AM
clever tanka : )
Bunton Avatar
March 24, 2012 at 12:55 PM
Thank you!!
Grisetti Avatar
March 23, 2012 at 1:29 PM
Good luck in the contest with your tanka, and with your faith.
Bunton Avatar
March 24, 2012 at 8:04 AM
Thank You!
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 22, 2012 at 8:43 PM
A great tanka, Chris! Everyday is a miracle entrusted to God. I love the words. Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Rhonda
Bunton Avatar
March 23, 2012 at 5:55 AM
Thank you!
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